Song Dynasty: Take Away Hu Sanniang at the Beginning

I hope the author can read "Dang Kou Zhi" and don't learn from the poisonous point of those heavenly soldiers and generals descending to earth just to be crowned princes and ministers, and learn from "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms". It is actually very easy to write the style of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms in the context of the Song Dynasty. After all, there are really three kingdoms, and "Water Margin" is not something that most people can write. After all, there are many young authors at the beginning and too many young readers. Just looking at the author's comment section, we can see that the vast majority of authors who write about Water Margin and readers who read Water Margin are no better than the ancients who read "Dang Kou Zhi". Even in the 21st century, they still oppose the Qing Dynasty but not the Ming Dynasty, oppose the Jin Dynasty but not the Song Dynasty, oppose the traitors and corrupt officials but not the emperor, and use the heads of Liangshan fellows in exchange for military merit. It's just a little bit of progress. It's not against the emperor because readers and authors both want the protagonist to be the emperor. To be honest, most of the Water Margin fans at Qidian have not written "Dang Bandits" well. The author really thinks that Liangshan is all bandits, and there is no burden on them. However, most readers at Qidian know that except for those among the 100 and 8 generals, most of the remaining soldiers are not bandits. They insist on taking fellow villagers as military merits, and they somewhat think they are saints. It is so suitable to go to Fengheng Henan University in the Song Dynasty...

What is the difference between this introduction and Liangshan? They are all fooled by big cowards, not as good as Liangshan. At least Liangshan is good to the people in the original work.

How can you get along without a golden finger? I really think the ancients were all fools.

The protagonist licks Song Huizong's writings? Even if you don't go to Liangshan after crossing the Water Margin, you shouldn't enter the Song Dynasty! The most unjust way to win a country is to usurp the throne. Even if it means usurping the throne of a faint king, how can you be a good bird if you can get power in the hands of a faint king?

There was no force and no justice. Under the mediocre court at that time, why should we be promoted to a higher position?

Song Jiang is a villain who is good at opportunism. He is loyal and righteous. If he is loyal, he will not report to Chao Gai, he will not write anti-poems, and he will not rebel. If he is righteous, he will not poison Li Kui to death. The people in Liangshan only saw the small favors Song Jiang gave to the people, but they did not see how many innocent women and children were killed by the so-called heroes.

You... Are a bit disconnected You said at first that you were going to Liangshan, and then you met Wang Ying with the golden retriever. Good guy, you killed Wang Ying directly, and then the golden retriever continued to call you brothers like nothing happened, especially by naming the golden retriever. I particularly admire the situation in Liangshan. This is unreasonable... You gang up with a person you meet on the road to join a gang, and then you gang up on them. This person will either stay away from you for fear of implicating himself, or he will gang up on you as a suspect. You have only known each other for a few days! And the heroine, she was willing to let you touch her hands the next day after you took her away? ? The protagonist touched it naturally, so why was he willing to let his hand be touched? Is it because I'm attracted to you, have a crush on her, or something? It's very abrupt, I'm willing to be touched, there's no psychological activity at all, and there's almost no sense of presence. I feel like an NPC whose role is just to enter the protagonist's harem. This character has not been well shaped This is just my suggestion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

As for Qingzhao, there are also Emperor Ji, Zhu Fenglian, Fengying, and other princes. In addition, the officials and subordinates can recruit some capable people from Water Margin, such as Yang Zhi, Wusong, etc.

I think the creativity is okay, but your plot arrangement is too hasty. It could have been done step by step, but your haste made it look like a mindless article. And what about that paragraph, who do you think you are as a brother, you have developed a relationship in such a short time, I am convinced. As for the heroine, she should cultivate her relationship more and arrange her relationship more and just promote it. The protagonist actually asked, weird, let me tell you, if you don't ask, I will give in. If you take the initiative to ask, then I will definitely give you a try. This is what a woman is thinking. To put it bluntly, the protagonist needs to be well described. He has traveled through the Water Margin, not just playing house. Anyway, if you understand the authors I'm talking about, you'll understand. If you don't understand the book, that's it, it won't be outstanding.