The Road to Stardom: Start as a Slam Dunk Master

1. The protagonist is too invincible, which lowers readers' expectations. 2. The early plot design is okay, but it has not been developed yet. The essence of Slam Dunk, youth and passion. The theme is barely interesting. 3. The author's writing skills are really excellent, and each character has distinct characteristics. It's just that James' character is too negative. I think everyone has two sides. If both sides are present, the character is alive. A humble opinion. Thanks.

My favorite basketball novel. Come on, author.

What Rukawa Maple Sakuragi Hanamichi, any CBA player can beat them

When the protagonist becomes a superstar in the NBA, a program will be filmed. The protagonist secretly returns to Kanagawa and finds these friends one by one. They may be engaged in various professions. For example, if the protagonist opens the door of Yuzhu's restaurant, he smiles and says to him, "Boss Yuzhu, go play ball." Yuzhu looked at him and was stunned for a moment. He smiled and took off his apron. He walked out and said, "When did you come back?" Go to a bank credit department to find Hanagata, a high school basketball club to find coach Fujima, and a store to find the owner Akagi. Sakuragi shouted "Gorilla" , let's go! Go play ball!" Just when Akagi was about to scold Sakuragi, he saw the protagonist and everyone behind Sakuragi and said with a smile, "Everyone is here?" He smiled and apologized to the customer, "I'm sorry, I'm busy today." The customer was also a fan of the protagonist and went to play with everyone happily. Everyone divided into several groups, played ball, drank soda on the floor and chatted. The whole process was captured by the camera and played back. The scene was so incredible that my youth was back.

If the author plans to switch from a slam dunk master to the NBA, he may consider shifting his writing focus to the off-court. After all, the main character, a quasi-NBA player, purely crushes Japanese high school students in basketball, and beats the original characters. It's almost enough to write two chapters, and I don't have any expectations for writing more. Actually, there is quite a lot to write about off the court, including Hanamichi Sakuragi, who is a talented professional golfer, real golfers such as Yao Ming, Wang Zhizhi, etc., And you can even insert some other daily stories. Personally, I feel that the plot of the neta actress's senior sister is a bit redundant. It's not that there can't be a female protagonist, it's mainly because it's a purely original character. If it can't be inserted into the main plot, too much ink will be wasted.

Hahaha, according to LeBron's character, shouldn't he make the decision later? I can't beat Lin Dong, why don't I join? With LeBron's emotional intelligence, he should know how to build a good relationship with the protagonist, and then tell the media: You know, Lin and I have always been brothers, and I just want to play brother basketball with him 😄

What kind of national basketball genius wants to stand out? Have you ever asked Mr. Zhang if he's fucked up?

This plot of referee intervention is really unnecessary. Everyone knows that you have crushed the slam dunk world. Deliberately creating difficulties will only make us angry. Even if the protagonist crushes you later, it will not be much more enjoyable than normal writing. Whether it's the Japan Basketball Association or the Chinese Basketball Association, there's really no need to write too much. Wouldn't it be nice to just write a cool story about the protagonist crushing him in a slam dunk, and then go straight into the story of American basketball?

Playing Lingnan Chapter 15 is not over yet, it's not even fun, and the team doesn't highlight other team members, so I don't know why.

Your Slam Dunk introduction will make many Slam Dunk fans abandon the book. You haven't put it on the shelves yet. I don't know how you will continue to read it steadily. It's better to write a basketball article honestly. If you call it a fan, I guess it won't take you more than a hundred chapters before there is no slam dunk plot at all. It's a sports article, but your opening chapter also contains a lot of slam dunk plots. Basketball article will definitely go to NBA in the future. At that time, the most slam dunk characters who can keep up with the protagonist are Sakuragi and Rukawa Kaede, right? How to arrange them then? They are nothing more than two supporting characters with anime names. And looking at your book, it is obvious that you have a disdain for Little Japan. When I go to the NBA, there are so many talented people, and you two anime characters have become a pity to be discarded and tasteless. What about the others? Completely abandoning the slam dunk plot? And it seems that your plan is to go back to China and have sex with those guys from the Basketball Association? When you return to your country, the Basketball Association will be unstoppable. The author might as well write a pure basketball article.

Mitsui's physical strength has been enhanced by the author's epic level. Except for Hanamichi Sakuragi, the other players in Shohoku are actually not very strong. They cannot play back-to-back games. The full-court press and close defense are a team with weak physical strength like Tenke.

Very nice, I suggest you block it directly

The 40-year-old Jordan was written too strong. He couldn't make it to the playoffs in the past, his personal efficiency was very low, and his physical strength couldn't keep up at all. It felt like it was deliberately written like this to improve the protagonist's historical status, but it wouldn't be very honorable to win against the 40-year-old Jordan 🙂

Slam Dunk's new book, Planting the Flag, is reading now that I have raised one and many.

It's really nice to add the plot of Slam Dunk, it's a refreshing feeling!

Overall not bad

Being a slam dunk master is nothing. Heizi's invincibility in basketball is awesome 🙂

Slam dunk➕nba? How to balance the combat power? If the real NBA is used as the standard, then the Japanese high school league is not worth mentioning. Anyone with NBA water-cooler potential can explode. If the comics are used as the standard, Japanese high school players can fly and escape, then the NBA players in this world are basically at the level of taking off and dunking from the three-point line. If the players in the comics retain their strength and the NBA is at a realistic level, then Japan can produce dozens of NBA players a year and a dozen or so All-Star players!

Is it so difficult for the U17 World Championship MVP to beat Rukawa Kaede? 173 Has also met its opponent. Please, your level can reach the star level in the NCAA. Don't deliberately lower the level of the pig's feet for the sake of the plot. I would rather you come up with your own original plot later. The more I look at it, the more imbecile I become.

Kobe Bryant was drafted when he was 18 years old. With the current age and level of the protagonist, the draft can only go to the second round. But judging from the introduction in the first few chapters, the first round is fine, so this sponge-like level is incomprehensible.

It's so hard to write this 🙂 It's going to be in the NBA before it's even put on the shelves. By the way, why did you write a slam dunk opening? Moreover, when looking at the plot, the only thing that really matters is the slam dunk at the beginning. No matter whether you return to China or go to the United States, it has nothing to do with the slam dunk. How to make it round? I feel really sorry for the author. If it doesn't work, just T 😜

Today's news is that the men's basketball team lost to Japan for the first time since 1988.

Most black people are giant babies. James usually doesn't understand some basic common sense if he doesn't have a script for interviews, and he is still a high school student. However, his advantage is that he does not easily become enemies with others.

The national football team is really bad, but the men's basketball team is not much better

When I first started watching, I suddenly wanted to make a joke: Japanese basketball and Chinese football.

Has the author lost his mind in these pictures? What nonsense is written.

So what about NBA? It's not like sitting on the bench in the basketball fire.

Why don't you even have basic common sense? The finals format was 2-3-2 before 2013. It's really outrageous.

I don't watch the NBA without an idol filter. Seeing that if it weren't for the system props, LeBron's criminals had already destroyed the pig's trotters' knees, and there would have been no punishment for LeBron pretending to be sick. Then the author wrote a plot in which LeBron and the pig's trotters would be destined to be enemies in the future. I feel like I've been fed something by the author For example It's just like when normal people see ancient plots in fantasy novels: a woman is being hunted down, regardless of the strength of the pig's feet, first the trouble is directed to the pig's feet, and the pig's feet have to save people, the plot is very poisonous

I hope to give Sakuragi a good ending. The original novel was too miserable. He injured his spine and gave up basketball. The female ticket was even cheated by his brother.