Invincible Martial Arts, Hard Work Will Pay Off

The writing was good at the beginning, but then I gradually fell into misunderstandings. The beginning is a slowly developing setting, and the follow-up should be the revelation of talent, the discovery and cultivation of a harmonious and symbiotic clan, and then the protagonist uses the clan to step into a new world, thus starting a wonderful chapter of the novel. The result is the setting that was introduced slowly at the beginning. Under this setting, it also created serious internal conflicts. Then the first problem arises, that is, the protagonist's talent is too average, his family is in trouble, and he needs a lot of time to grow up. As a result, the follow-up revenge of the front-foot bandits has not yet been completed. You come again and a clan tries to squeeze the protagonist, but the protagonist refuses. That's not all. The author has repeatedly struggled with the fact that the protagonist must use a certain kind of medicinal material in order to boast of power, strength, time, background and challenge others. I really don't know why it is written like this? It gives people a sense of urgency to pursue them.

Poisoned to death, the bandits come and they run out to wander around, they are invincible

It's boring. The combat power is broken. To be honest, it's not as well written as the previous wizard-style knights. Others at least have a good balance of combat power. The cheats you write are not as strong as ordinary people. What the hell, are you a peerless genius per capita? Will you become super powerful once you practice martial arts?

I haven't read it, but there are so many bad reviews in the comment section, so it's a shame

What did you write? It takes a month to practice the first form of a martial art to perfect it? What waste? People just practice them all together, but you can only practice one pose for a month before it is perfect? How will you write in the future?

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The most important thing is not to make the protagonist too vague. When dealing with problems, you always add drama to yourself. If it has nothing to do with you, you still have to think that it is your problem.

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