Red Mansion: Overlord of the Northland

Hundreds of thousands of refugees are pouring into the city, which makes me feel stupid. If you don't call it Jinzhou, it's called Chang'an, it's called Beijing, it's called Nanjing, it just can't be called Jinzhou. At the end of the Ming Dynasty, the population of the entire Liaodong was only close to 6 million. About one-twelfth of the population of the entire Liaodong came into Jinzhou City, and even the Shanhaiguan reinforcements could not wait for the food reserves. The refugees were all old people, weak women and children. Including the food of the city's own residents and part of the food brought by the refugees, the refugees plus residents are calculated as three hundred thousand people. You don't care if your soldiers eat three meals, but the refugees only need one meal a day to survive starvation. Can't they survive in two months? In two months, all the reinforcements from the capital had reached Jinzhou. Not to mention this weird fire cattle array, you don't have enough food to eat, but there are still cattle in the city? You might as well just release the gate or directly use the gate-blocking tool car to control the fire ox.

Chapter 7 is even more hilarious. The protagonist's fake surrender is as if the whole city's soldiers and civilians know about it! ! Didn't the Manchus, who were very good at using spies, let hundreds of thousands of people in? There are no spies?

Shennong judged yellow mud (the order is: sewer sludge, yellow mud, Guanyin soil, grass, grain grass, grass jelly)

Defending the city with 30,000 and 50,000 cavalry, how could the cavalry have the courage to attack the city?

The author debuted 20 years late, so of course it is always good to persevere. Readers should be aware that after three chapters, there will be no trace of the comments. Only when you put your mind down can you move forward alone.

It's a waste of all the subscriptions you've made. The protagonist has such absolute power and is so submissive. The longer the time goes, the worse it will be for the protagonist. People who waste time with the protagonist will grow old and die of old age. It is recommended not to subscribe.

I can't stand it any longer. The more I write, the more childish it becomes.

I feel like I'm reading a composition

Update update update update, the book of the heroine Xue Baochai, no matter what, I have to help.

The cavalry of the nomadic people was very powerful in field battles, but the cavalry was useless when attacking a city. The Mongolian siege equipment was also very powerful. In ancient times, the siege party had to be several times more powerful than the defending party before they could attack the city. Defend the city with 30,000 troops and attack the city with 50,000 troops. This is giving away lives, and the leader is taking the initiative to give credit to the defenders!

It's anticlimactic, and the writing is even worse.

There is no beautiful woman in the brothel? Why are you excited about seeing the so-called golden hairpin? Could it be that having some ambiguity with these golden hairpins would help your career? Don't know what it means

The author said that the accumulation of words is really too much. It's too embarrassing. It's mainly because it's very immature. If you're not proficient, just write less. The characters are introduced, especially the characters in the Red Chamber. Just write a few sentences of judgment. The author wrote a lot.

I am a newbie writing a book, and I am not writing it full-time yet. There may be some errors in the content of the book. Please correct me, and we will witness the growth of this book together. First blood, I'm serious!

There are too many psychological descriptions, and the logic in many places is too low.

When writing war scenes, generally just copy historical battles. For battles with detailed processes such as the Battle of Zhongli, the Battle of Yubi, and the Battle of Xiangji Temple, you can refer to these

Women from the four major families are less likely to touch each other. There are no beauties. As long as they are powerful, there are plenty of beauties. Dream of Red Mansions is about the ruined aristocracy, and the four major families are all in decline.

The plot of the novel is reasonable, and the writing style is getting smoother and smoother. Although there are some shortcomings in the early stage, it can still be regarded as a masterpiece among Red Mansion novels.

This book is not bad. The author's writing style has gradually improved. Compared with other Red Mansions novels, the plot is quite distinctive. The description of war has also improved. Let's keep up the good work.

This book is very good, I like it very much. However, I will try my best to continue watching.

The protagonist's surname is Lin, can Lin Daiyu be the heroine? Do you understand that in ancient times, people with the same surname would not marry?

No one? ? ? Me first?

The author is updating quickly. Why did it stop?