Dragon IV: Wind of Dusk

Treasure fanfic, the plot is followed by The Dragon 3, original plot, no new characters as protagonists, no cheating, deus ex machina plot. Reminds me of another excellent fic that has been completed, "The End of Power" and the series "Mourning of the Dawn" by Tomato. The writing is spot on, the art is beautiful and funny, and it still has a Jiangnan flavor. The plot seems to be relatively smooth so far and there are no problems, unlike some fans who are trying to trick the Riddler. Summary: non-time-travel protagonist, original plot, a continuation and re-creation of the original work by a Dragon Clan fan, a refreshing novel for non-novices, highly recommended. It's a pity that the book's traffic is so low that no one reads it. I hope the author changes the name and deletes the Roman numerals.

The detailed description and writing style are very dragon-like But there are too many scenes added to the secondary characters It feels like the description of the original main characters is a bit neglected In terms of combat power, the strengthening of the secondary supporting characters is a bit too much, and it is not strengthened for the corresponding protagonists. It was weakened. Although I know that the author wanted to write a feeling of a storm coming all over the building and a strong enemy hiding behind the scenes, the whole fighting scene made it feel like the protagonists were all weaklings. Just like the hostility between Angers and the second-generation female character, the protagonists were completely manipulated. There is even a feeling of using Angers as a cushion for the second creation character. Year-on-year, it also includes the elder who explodes the king's power and crushes Pompeii Although it is not that it is not good to write group portraits to add drama to the second creation characters, the main reason is that this degree is difficult to grasp, and to be honest, group portraits should be the most difficult to write. One of the parts is that the priorities are reversed But overall, apart from the above minor flaws in the plot, the author's writing style and writing style should be one of the closest to the old thieves among the dragon fics I have read In short, I hope the author will work hard.

Road zero party, let me see your voice

The writing is very good, but the old thief's writing style was indeed not as good as before in Longsi. What the author wrote seems less heavy. Just be careful when it comes to the pitfalls of the original work. Write slowly and don't get sloppy. After all, as long as the old dragon egg has this patience. Just give the Dragon Clan a good ending (I don't think you need to force HE, the reason why good works are worth remembering is because they have regrets)

Anyone who dares to write from Dragon Clan 3 onwards is worthy of encouragement. Those who write fan fiction from Qidian are either Reincarnation Stream or Reincarnation Plus All Heavens Infinite. They copy large chunks of the original text and then make changes, so the duplication check rate is extremely high. To write from Long San onwards, you need a complete outline to be able to write effectively. After all, it is to advance the plot and slay the dragon according to the main line. The dialogue and narration written by the author reflect Jiangnan's style. The writing is very sophisticated, and you can tell at a glance that a lot of effort has been put into it and a lot of information has been checked. Of course, compared with the original work, there will still be some shortcomings in continuing it in the form of online writing. For example, the character cannot stand up. When Jiangnan writes about characters, he always uses an emotion to establish the character. Lu Mingfei appears on the stage, establishing an ignorant first love. The character of Caesar was established to commemorate the family affection of his deceased mother. Establishing Chu Zihang, he used the entire book of Dragon Clan 2 to write about the relationship between father and son. Therefore, the author's original characters do not use these methods to establish their characters, which seems a bit hollow. Also, the main line is not clear. The original work has dragon slaying as the main plot. This does not mean that there is no main plot in this book, but the main plot is too obscure. When writing about slaying the dragon, just follow the original work, investigate Herzog's legacy, and investigate the mastermind behind the scenes. When Chu Zihang boarded the ship, the whole world lost its memory, and a big original plot started to change the world line. When writing about emotions, just write that Lu Mingfei came to Noonuo to confess, let go of the knot, and start his own emotional journey. The big plot point starts with clues about Eli Yi's resurrection. It is not necessary to form a CP with the two of them, but they can also be raised as sisters. When writing about growth, you have to write about asking the little devil for the truth, and you have to ask for it at the risk of your life. The original work was written in five parts. The reason why the protagonist has not grown up is because the little devil is like a puppet master, manipulating the protagonist not to grow. The big plot can start from the plot of Lu Mingfei not despairing after the transaction is completed, but trying to break free from control. Another problem is that the viewing angle switches frequently. The protagonist is Lu Mingfei, so I wrote the story around him. It's not that you can't change the perspective. Cut out the perspective to see the story. The core of the Dragon Clan story is emotion. Just plain and straightforward description will miss the core selling point of Jiangnan. To sum up, it is not bad to be able to write to this point. After all, no matter how it is written, there will be some problems when compared with Jiangnan's original work. Still one sentence, come on, author!

Good writing style, very Jiangnan flavor, with Lu Ling. The characters in the author's works are very similar to those in the original work. As long as the book can be completed, there is a chance to become a real Dragon 4.

This article writes about Lu Mingfei's growth very well, and the writing style and character creation have the flavor of the original work. I have read many fanfics. At first I wanted to make amends for my regrets, but after reading one or two, I felt strange. I felt that the protagonist was not like Lu Mingfei, not like the bad guy who had his head pressed down when he was a child and apologized to the perpetrator, and then started to behave badly. When I was reading the book, I always hoped that he would be independent, but now I see that he is really too independent and strange, and very contradictory, so I always feel that in addition to being independent, I have to retain a little something to prove that he is still the same Lu Mingfei, such as talking nonsense, not being able to give orders to others, and being afraid that he will become a stranger because of dragon blood. He only occasionally goes crazy, but it is also him who is crazy. The past will shape and change a person. Everyone is a shadow living in the past. Chu Zihang is the 17-year-old Maybach on a rainy night, Caesar is the fallen girl named "Aso Makoto", and Lu Mingfei, as the protagonist who lives from our perspective, has more past. It is the heart-wrenching things that make people grow, and bad boys need to grow up, so the old Tang who helped him correct his pronunciation before the interview died, the lively and offline Xiao Longnu who looked like a female version of Lu Mingfei died, the turtle who said he was going to the beach to sell sunscreen died, and the girl with eyes full of Sakura also died. Regret is indeed the key to be aesthetics, but it does not mean that it must be a tragedy from beginning to end. After regret, the growth of mentality on the battlefield every time, so the change in the battle situation, is what I want to see. I would like to thank the author for letting me see a more reasonable Lu Mingfei, and also thank the author for giving Shai Zai the opportunity to face the battlefield alone with a knife. I offer monthly tickets. I hope the author can write the ending. It is rare to find one that suits my appetite.

There are also good stories in The Return, but I still prefer the plot changes in the original timeline . Yuan Longsi only liked the part where Masashi Toyama was hypnotized and then Lu Mingfei burst out and threatened with a gun, but then it became weird... So this book is very comfortable to follow after Long San, smooth and reasonable, and the growth line has not been missed. Highly recommended.

Brother, the heroine is humble. Don't let Lu Mingfei praise Chen Motong.

Keep writing like this, as long as you catch this type of dragon fan, you won't be afraid of losing popularity at all!

Road Zero Road Zero Road Zero 😍

It would be better for Eri to be her sister. It would be weird for a small one to be his wife.

I saw a saying before that Lu Mingfei is the terminator of Ragnarok, the giant Surtur who represents destruction and fire.

Where do all these secondary characters come from?

My suggestion is still Lu Ling. Zero is easy to write and it is easy to create contrast. If you can't write Eriyi well, you will be scolded.

I hate the so-called fate. There is no one who is born to die. Even if she is going to die, why should she die in such a disgusting way? If, if I were given the opportunity to exchange, I would use everything to save her instead of coveting other people's fiancées. Yes, that is the person who makes you feel like you have met the first light in your life. So, what you like is what she likes. You always say "you are not me, you don't understand at all." But what do you know? Weaving gratitude into a cage of love, trapping yourself tightly, not daring to welcome tomorrow, and not daring to accept the reality. In the final analysis, it just makes you feel very, very, very, very sexy in front of everyone, right? That's good, then congratulations, you can keep dragging me like this forever, and there won't be a girl who is willing to share everything with you and treats you as the whole world to care about you, hold your head, and say to you, "Sakura, don't be sad, Eriki will stay with you" until the end of the world. The wine in Gao Tianyuan is very expensive, but you don't have to worry, because someone has already paid for it. In fact, it is not expensive, and it only costs four-quarters of her life.

Although I don't support the heroine Nuonuo, I always feel that Kainuo CP is a bit disgusting.

I really don't want to admit that the scumbag in Lulincheng in Long Wu, who is obviously a high-end product (all kinds of bad character settings), is the person in Long Er who will do it for his wife, children and secret party. It's too hard for a child to suffer. At least let him have a happy childhood and a real life 😢

I have kept it on the bookshelf for several months, and then I realized that this book has not been put on the shelves. What makes me even more alarmed is the frequency of updates, which is so dangerous.

Is there really anything wrong with the title of the book?