Warhammer 40K: Bloodborne

Chapter 6 is too far-fetched. People from another world cannot be mentioned casually.

Very good, I feel it has great potential, but regarding the setting of the protagonist, I feel it needs to be slightly improved, because the protagonist has time-traveled from 2023, so he should know the relevant Warhammer knowledge, and be relatively clear about the concept of the Forty Evil Gods. If you do not add some of these preventive measures, then the protagonist will directly become a chaos egg. Secondly, you need to update more in the early stages of the release of the new book, otherwise the future development will not be good. I feel that your update speed is faster first and then slower. This is better and easier to attract people.

I have kept everyone waiting for a long time. After passing the college entrance examination in 2024, I picked up this novel that I had already started. I am ashamed to say that the heavy study pressure and the novelty of just entering college diverted my attention, so I had no choice but to restart it. But don't worry, all the drafts have been completed. This novel is not long and serves as a supplementary novel for the Battle of Baal. In mid-2025, I will serialize another fan fiction about White Scar, and maybe we can see you again in half a year. The novels will all be published in the form of novellas. For school students, the pressure of long-form serialization is indeed too great. I wish everyone a happy Year of the Snake and a successful career in the new year! 😍😍😍

Very good, but not enough to read, and there are very few of them, so my collection will be very small.