Changsheng: No One Knows Strengthening Better Than Me

What the hell are you writing? Why don't you read it yourself after posting it? The front is broken from time to time, and the front and back cannot be connected. Deleted it, looks uncomfortable

Lu Weiyin: How can Fang Yuan fight against the two masters without Master Letu? Fang Yuan gave a crooked smile. It's very simple. I'm a respectable person. 🤔

The writing is good, but I feel like the main character is a bit like a saint, but not really a saint at all. Anyway, she is kind to others sometimes for no reason!

I've opened a new book, and it looks like I'm going to have another eunuch.

1. The change of the protagonist's state of mind is a process. Starting from the decisive battle in Gaojiabao, the protagonist becomes more and more like a hero and becomes more and more decisive in killing. I think the two book friends who talk about egoism and white-eyed wolf are too extreme. Humans are inherently complex animals. Butchers are cruel when they slaughter animals, but they have no tenderness when they treat very good relatives? People's emotions are different under different circumstances. It is assumed that the protagonist lived a miserable life in his previous life, and many relatives died. The advantage is that his intelligence is not bad. He has read many books and learned a lot of knowledge, and then through the golden finger, his past memories are clear. 2. I said I could point out any unreasonable plot points. So far, I have also modified part of the plot. There are also book friends who found typos. I also changed it immediately when I saw it. As a person, you are right and I will listen to your advice. 3. It is meaningless to say that Song Jiayi wrote it. I have already said that it is to promote the development of the plot. If you don't like it, just skip it. You have to make yourself feel like you have discovered a new world and post some boring comments there. If you don't see the rest, you feel that the previous writing is useless. It is like eating five cakes before you are full. It makes no sense to say that you should eat the fifth cake. 4. In the novel, the secondary characters have a role. I write all the protagonists and no supporting characters. Which novel is like this? Again, if you find it disgusting, just delete it from the bookshelf. Don't disgust me, and it will affect the senses of other readers, okay? 5. I respect everyone's right to speak by not deleting comments or banning them. I hope everyone can restrain their excitement when speaking. I receive double digits of comments a day, and sometimes they are all scolding me. When I read novels in the past, some of them were very retarded, and I scolded them. I can understand this feeling, but as an author, it's a different feeling. I really hope to be understood.

The protagonist's life was saved by this family, the martial arts were taught by this family, and the chance to cultivate immortality was given to the protagonist by the steward who paid him to see it, so the protagonist kept it for himself. Later in the courtyard, he met the young master who had a personal relationship with his wife, and it was also saved by another young master. The protagonist's free identity is also returned to the protagonist. The protagonist is about to destroy this family just because he has been tricked several times. If Ergou is not dangerous to the protagonist, the protagonist will be nice to him. If he has calculated against the protagonist and poses no danger to the protagonist, the protagonist will retaliate a hundredfold.

When you write a self-interested protagonist, write it to the end, and how the character changes. If you want to be self-interested, don't look high-sounding. Want to be Tang San? When you write a protagonist who has justice in his heart, don't be a blind wolf and end up displeasing both parties. Just use the Gao family's gang as a tool to collect resources. If you kill Gao Jin directly, why bother? The same goes for that woman. She doesn't understand the significance of this role, and she wastes time chatting with her. Can she bring you any benefit? Showing your face to her just to satisfy your vanity? It's better not to wear a mask when killing high-level officials.

Of course, the writing style is at a level that can compare favorably with similar books, but unfortunately, the author's writing style and plot settings are quite out of date. What kind of book is this? It's a fantasy cultivating immortality, so it's not written in terms of emotions. No matter how delicate it is, it will not be helpful to this book. You cannot be decisive and decisive at the same time to engage in industrial revolution. You are a fantasy cultivator, and power belongs to your own world. You must write about cultivation, squeeze 100% of your golden fingers, and continuously improve yourself. The result is that he killed a whole family, became a thief, developed coal mines, and had relations with the county magistrate. So, a problem arises. The writing style and plot setting are incompatible with the genre of the book. It is all awkward and uncomfortable. As a result, the monthly ticket is only a small amount, and the results are disappointing!

Just write at your own pace.

First of all, the writing style is good and the character is not bad. But the writing style is a little stiff, and there are many deliberate paragraphs and plots. As an old bookworm, I feel embarrassed. If I were still a novice 5 years ago, I might have enjoyed watching it.

It can't be you, Ye Yuxue, the eunuch king! 😤

The writing is okay, but the plot sometimes feels really confusing as it progresses. I don't like Mrs. Song. Also, the writing method of the protagonist learning everything and knowing everything is a bit too old. Martial arts and Qi training are done at the same time, which looks quite boring. The background is also that the seven great gods and men rule the world together. What is the beam? Can it be so strong without the inheritance of gods and men? The aliens outside the Pass are not human beings. Gods and men only care about those within the Pass, and weird things only harm those within the Pass?

The villain's success is talking about pig's feet

With the same setting, you can open 4 books in a row. That's awesome. The first three books were all unfinished. Please finish this one, Ye Yuxue.

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Industrial Revolution, as soon as I saw this in a book review, I knew it was written by Pou Jie Zai

No one knows reinforcement better than me. This is a hyped novel, but this book is also too eunuch.

I quite like the character of the protagonist. He doesn't pretend to be a saint. He is a real person with an above-average IQ. Unlike some protagonists in novels, a common man seeks death by using technology that is ahead of his time. (Many people say how beautiful ancient times are, and want to go to ancient times. Such people are Sha*. Those history books only mention the evils of ancient times, and the movies have filters. Even emperors will drown in water, and they don't have some character and IQ beyond ordinary people. How can they go to ancient times? Haha). . . Talking about this book, the plot is too contrived, and it doesn't read smoothly. The writing is a bit off. Come on, author. I just collected it for the character of the protagonist.

Everything else is pretty good, except for one thing: could the protagonist not show his facial expressions so obviously? Others can see at a glance when the protagonist is thinking.

Brother, don't you know how to be a eunuch? ? ? ? ? ? I think it looks pretty good.

Pretty good. Not much brainless plot, thumbs up.

After reading too many novels, I find this kind of sameness difficult.

Grandpa Jiang's part is just pure water. I copied a movie plot and watered it for more than ten chapters. If you don't watch it, it won't have any impact.