This Confucian Saint Is Not Pure

I haven't read it, but I'll tell you my thoughts. I think that if you want to write a novel about a different world writer, and the novels and poems written have supernatural powers, the poems should have a corresponding artistic conception or suitable occasion. For example, when the protagonist is still studying for enlightenment, he should write something like "If I don't speak first when spring comes, that insect dares to make a sound" or "Goose, goose, song to the sky" instead of turning it up right from the beginning and writing "Master Cen, Dan Qiusheng" and "Heartbreaker is at the end of the world", which does not have the same artistic conception as the protagonist, so just write randomly, which is not good. For this kind of thing, you have to take your time, don't rush, just take your time like "The Holy Sage of Confucianism and Taoism", don't go big as soon as you come in, and you will be "the country is broken, the mountains and rivers are here" and "the fifth floor and the twelve cities". Therefore, this degree must be grasped well.

I've read about ten chapters, and I'll tell you my feelings. It feels a bit confusing, some backgrounds are not explained clearly, and some things appear very abruptly. How can I put it, it just doesn't have the smoothness of other novels, some parts look awkward, and the details are not very good.

It's half white but not white, and the writing is a bit messy. It felt like I was talking about something else halfway through. Not very smooth.

Has the author seen Li Bai's The Daily Life of Women's Clothes? There is a heroine named Chu Yunling.