The Poison King of the Netherworld

There is nothing wrong with the previous point. It is that the protagonist builds a sect as soon as he comes. How deep is your obsession with the sect? In a remote place with nothing, you start to build a sect. There are no trustworthy subordinates, not enough talents, not enough elixir resources, and there are only a few books on martial arts and fighting skills. The protagonist has to put money and resources into it, and there will be no returns in the short term. You are just idle, right?

I finished reading it, but it feels weird. It seems that the author's lack of writing skills makes this book look stiff.

It's quite interesting so far, but I suggest that the author doesn't write about the disciple in too much detail. These few paragraphs are enough. Dou Po doesn't have a special physique and it's not of much use to the protagonist. The protagonist will rise very quickly and the disciple can't keep up. Giving him opportunities and putting the cart before the horse is a lot of readers hate this. Mainly, let's write about the two female protagonists and Xiao Yan.

It seems that Po'erdan requires a strange fire to be refined. It is recommended to modify it 🙂🙂🙂

Can we add Zi Yan as the heroine? Zi Yan is so cute

Little Medical Fairy

Very well written, remember to forward me 50 cents

Little Medical Fairy

The author has really stitched together something new, right? The author could write less about the construction of the sect and more about the meeting of the strange fire. I feel that the character of the Nether Poison Fire is not like someone who can live in leisurely life, but should be a talkative one. Everyone is generally not interested in disciples or sects. It is fun to recruit people into gangs and force them to go to Liangshan. 😃 I hope that in the future, we can directly fight with different fires, and the protagonist can sit on a stool and drink tea.

Qinglian's Earth Core Fire has the attributes of fire and wood, and the protagonist should be able to make elixirs now.

It's a bit awkward to write, I hope it gets better later

You guy even disbanded the group, what do you think?

The plot is a mess and the characters are unclear

After Medusa evolves, there is a new intelligence in her body. It is not cost-effective to cultivate this one and destroy Medusa and feed it as material to this intelligence. Moreover, this intelligence is very obedient.

Guys, please help me. I can't find a book. I only remember that the protagonist is the apprentice of the Lord of Black Rock City. Xiao Yu is a time traveler with a system. The protagonist is also engaged to Xiao Yulin Feixuemei. Which book is this?

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When Xiao Yan first broke through to Dou Shi, Yao Lao lamented that Xiao Yan had gotten rid of the lowest level of Dou Qi Continent. Although Dou Shi was still a weakling, he had a stronger ability to protect himself and earn resources, so the rate of decline and population replacement was slower. As far as the number of people is concerned, there are about thirty or fifty fighters, corresponding to one fighter. I read an excerpt from Tudou a few years ago. An old fighting master in a certain mercenary group led 112 fighters in his life, but in the end only two of them broke through to the fighting master realm and became the old fighting master's "one of my generation". There were 37 people who died while collecting resources and performing various tasks. 42 People were disabled and discharged from the army. Only 15 people survived to old age and retired safely. The remaining 16 people saw that the death and injury elimination rate of the fighters was too high. They were so scared that they returned to their hometown to marry and have children. In the end, only two of the 112 people broke through and became Dou Masters in their lifetime, getting rid of the lowest level, and became the leaders of the mercenary group from ordinary mercenaries. It can be seen that the low-level fighters are eliminated and updated very quickly.

There are too few books about poisonous cultivators. Recently, I was browsing for new books and saw a book about poisonous cultivators. I felt pretty good after reading the first three chapters, but the number of words was relatively small. The title of the book is "This is how I, a poisonous cultivator, do things."

Why are there no single, double or triple heroines in Dou Po fan fiction? They are all about stallions.