I Am a Mercenary in the Alliance

I wrote 100,000 words for this book but failed to sign a contract. And I also read it from the beginning. It is indeed as the book friend said, the pace is too fast. It felt like there was no way to change it, so that was it. If the early rhythm is better, I really plan to use AiDian to try to finish the story. After all, the outline is already written. But I was not satisfied with what I wrote, and I didn't have the courage to continue presenting it to the audience. Thank you for your support (although I don't know how many people insist on reading)

The pace of this writing is too fast, I feel a little confused 😰😰 (no malicious comments intended)