Pokémon Online Games

To put it simply, Setting: Only the protagonist knows the parallel world of Pokémon, and the slightly cool text is an abusive one. Pokémon part: Dark text, with a large number of self-created Pokémon settings. Protagonist (male): decisive, capable, bitter and resentful, licking dogs, terminally ill. The person the protagonist likes (female): Sunny and cheerful, Our Lady of Assasi, easily liked by others. Villains: Most have intelligence, most are emotionally unstable. Protagonist Follower: IQ is changeable and easy to get enthusiastic. Characters in Pokémon Online: Dark worldview and serious class ideology. My feelings: Based on my experience of reading novels since junior high school, this novel is well written, and the author still worked hard. Although there are many private settings, they are all logically self-consistent and have their own understanding. The author's writing style is good, but he has a literary problem and likes to publish some private stuff. The content is good, but the author likes to do some weird operations to describe the characters. Generally speaking, I am still very optimistic about the author, and I still hope that this novel will not be unfinished.

There is only one comment: baffling. Inexplicable copies of memories, inexplicable large-scale supporting characters. The dozens of chapters in the copy have nothing to do with the beginning of what you wrote. They were inserted abruptly and then some inexplicable allusions were written to illustrate the situation. Finally, there was an inexplicable patchwork of Christian eulogies. It was inexplicable. This book is readable but incomprehensible.

Um, how do I put it, I think it's better for the author to write something like a genre or a horror infinite genre. The titles of your books are usually for elf fans. In terms of the first copy, you are an original insect god, and the contracted elf gains abilities. What else is there about blood-sucking, half-human and half-insect, two gods fight, the insect god is sealed by the Phoenix King, and the human is surrendered by the insect god. How can you be a second design? You are just a flying artist. You don't know where to spit! Then there was a wave of poison in Chapter 25.26. When I saw this, I just felt that the author was overjoyed and let himself go. He used 2 chapters to explain why the villain looked down on ordinary people and became a villain? It makes absolutely no sense! If you write thrillers, you can also write about the villain being tainted by unknown circumstances, foreshadowing the protagonist, and killing a god later on. You write these in elf novels, ah? This is what I feel when I see it. The above is what I want to complain about. To put it bluntly, this book is like selling sheep over dogs. I can't stand it anymore.

Sorry to bother you, you can have your own ideas, but don't spoil the story, it will really affect other people's experience.

The writing style is there, but the problem is that it's a piece of cake. I came here for Pokémon, but the result is all descriptions of the Pokémon type. To put it bluntly, it's just a Pokémon skin, and it doesn't have much connection. The audience is not the same thing at all, I was fooled.

It's too abstract. I thought it was a good online game, but a stream-of-consciousness copy silenced me. I thought I finally found something I liked, but in the end I still hid the poison.

It's well written, much better than the popular Pokemon. The general world view is based on Pokemon and the rest is my own. It's self-centered. Come on.

The writing is quite good. The protagonist's character and behavior are very palatable, and his IQ is online. I hope the author will stick to it. If it is not on the shelves, there is no way to reward it😠

It is recommended to re-release it. This is Pokemon, an online game, not a counterfeit horror paradise. The inexplicable literary youth and tomb robbing horror thriller plot is like that. Let me emphasize again that this is Pokemon.

How to put it this way, I have my own ideas, but I feel that the protagonist is very frustrated throughout the whole process. As a reborn person, I chose the neutral camp with the highest difficulty just for the specialization point, but later it was not reflected how much advantage this specialization point brought to me, and the advantages of rebirth were not reflected. I did not benefit from various events along the way, and did not let my elf grow. I talked about going to the Golden City to learn superpowers, but even after a hundred chapters, I was bullied by the investigators of the alliance. Is there any masochistic tendency? Is it too repressive to suppress your desires first? I feel like I am going astray as I write. ps: Xingyi and Xiaoqing are well portrayed.

I just read the first 70 chapters, which are quite interesting. The setting is rigorous, showing a real world of flesh and blood. Although I regret that I couldn't sign the contract due to the real censorship. But I really like it and hope to stick with it. Come on!

Attention brothers who are reading, it is recommended to skip chapters 25 and 26.

Really, just cut it and rewrite it. Delete the two copies and everything else. It will definitely be better.

The inexplicable plot makes me sick

You can consider going to other sites. After all, you haven't signed a contract yet and you have written a lot. If you can find a site and sign a contract, you can still make some income.

It's well written, don't let some rumors give up. Your comments also inspired me a lot during the reading process.

Every time I read it, I feel it is slow and has too few words. As a result, when I looked at the word count today, I felt like there were 1,000,000 words 😰

I've understood so many words and haven't had any ups and downs. You wanted to write about Pokémon under the name of an online game, but ended up writing a lot of thrillers, gore, fantasy, and inexplicably wanted to write about group portraits. As far as the results are concerned, what you wrote is really unclear. The writing is good. I suggest you directly switch to writing about the horror and bloody Infinite Stream. Don't use the name of Pokémon. After reading more than 80 chapters, you haven't written much about Pokémon in total. You are really awesome.

Just for the name, there are too many poison points. Except for the first point, it doesn't show the use of the second round at all. Choosing a neutral camp to get specialization points doesn't show the usefulness of the specialization points at all. It's originally for cultivating elves. Who wants to see if your alliance is black or not? And for the justice in my heart😥

What was written, was it written by a normal person?

In online games, books have little to do with online games. In Pokémon games, most of them have nothing to do with Pokémon.

There are so many messy plots written in the early stage of an elf game article, and the horror plot is really uncomfortable to read.

It's very interesting. Although it's a pity that I didn't continue it, I would like to say thank you when I open a new book.