I've Been Reborn and You're Still Lying to Me?

I think this fits Bai Miaomiao's characteristics quite well.

One thing to say, having a green plum at the beginning is so cliché, and if it's not written well, it will become a bitch.

You are worth tens of billions and you don't even have a bodyguard. If you really think you are a competitor, you and your girlfriend will not be killed. If there is a car accident, you will be dead.

The plot is too old-fashioned, the beauty who saved the gangster's knife owns a chain store. This is a life of lying down and winning.

Resolve the conflicts at home as soon as possible, it will make you sick if it takes too long

I don't like the heroine very much. She was clingy all day long and has no characteristics at all. The female co-star Bai Susu is not very impressive. This is the first book that I abandoned the book because of the heroine.

There is a question. The author needs to distinguish between good times. The development of some companies in 2002 was different from today. At that time, Penguin and Ahri had not yet risen. They were just small guys, not big guys. The Internet big guys at that time were portals and some other game companies were big guys. In addition, Penguin in 2002 was still worried about monetizing traffic, and financing was not smooth. Where did the investment department come from?

The real-life CrossFire ushered in the first year of science and technology, so there shouldn't be any of this in the book. Otherwise, I will look angry...14 And a half years later 🥺 I still love it

Take a seat! 😡😡

I originally didn't want to open the golden finger so much, but I didn't know that the more I wrote, the more uncomfortable it would become, so I simply enlarged the move, and I was afraid of a ghost even after being reborn. Come as you please. Dear readers, please read on patiently. 🤝

Author, could you please stop using so many punctuation marks that shouldn't be periods? Automatic reading lag

It's bland and the plot has no conflict. I stopped watching it after seeing the opening of the store.

How much talent does writing a book take up?

I don't quite understand the difference between 17 and 18

My apologies to all readers. I really can't write any more words. Got a high fever. After coding, it was deleted. Today's supplies will be replenished in two days from tomorrow. Forgive me.

Come on

I still like this green plum, so continue.

How should I put it, it seems a bit too dull, and it feels like a running account. The hang-up was too high, resulting in no ups and downs and no climax plot.