Collector of Rebirth

The author should be a new author. The work does not have any period flavor, and it feels strange to read. It is not a good choice to start a book with a sword. What kind of writing style does the protagonist have? Do you have that experience? I wrote Bright Sword at the age of seventeen. When I was still seventy years old, I even dared to write the second half! You are really brave. Also, the process of negotiating royalties is too childish. When someone is doing charity, they check the information before writing a book. If you, a newcomer, get 15% of the royalties, you can be sure that the author knows nothing at all. Mediocre work, appraisal completed.

I originally wanted to read it, but gave up when I got 64 cents from selling the book. At that time, could the royalties be so high for you?

Writing "Bright Sword" as a teenager? Just think about it yourself🤭

You can be a vulgar person, but your books are vulgar and you write the same routines.

The first part is good. The second part is about writing foreign novels in the 1970s. Hey... I don't know what to say. Please write slowly! I can't stand it anymore! It's so damn hard to find a good period book these days.

When you wrote "The Three-Body Problem" in the 1970s, how about playing it?

A common problem in writing chronology is that too many modern concepts are substituted, which makes it embarrassingly out of tune with the times. The protagonist is too greedy and wants to interfere in everything. He feels that if the money is not earned and the leakage is not picked up, it is unacceptable. Make up for the regrets, the regrets come one after another endlessly. There is also the price of goods. I don't have the concept of money. Anyway, I just make money by spending money. It's always like a stupid person who has too much money.

Did newspapers serialize novels in the 1970s? The newspaper also took the initiative to increase the manuscript fee and wanted to take advantage of it. The logic of the emotional line is a bit confusing.

The author first learned a children's song, What is the name of my father's sister? I will never call her aunt.

The male protagonist is still a coward after being reborn. The writing is really cowardly and he has low self-esteem... I don't understand. You are so awesome even though you are reborn. Why do you have low self-esteem?

If you don't understand, why don't you write something else? I insist on picking up antiques 😅

The author may have a vague sense of the times due to his age, and it is indeed a bit jumpy.

Forget it, forget it, I can't read it. The author writes a lot of things based on his current thinking and cognition. If he doesn't check the information, it's too natural to take it for granted.

After reading the first ten chapters, I wonder if a novel on the theme of "Sword of Light" could be published. I haven't read "Ice and Snow World" and I don't know. If I don't speak, can the novel "Three Body Problems" be published at that time? I always feel like the weird protagonist's actions, words and deeds are not in keeping with that era.

All the plot connections in the book are mechanical and have no sense of the times, and they are not familiar with the general environment at that time. The author should be a newcomer born in the 1990s, writing a simple article.

Personally, I think it's okay. I just wish there were more antiques.

Why are you so obsessed with Siheyuan? Are you sure? Ten more sets?

The author writes that the main character collects stamps, buys courtyard houses, collects antiques, and studies traditional Chinese medicine. It is impossible to say for ten years. At least it is the beginning of the novel before 2015. The cuckold ex-wife has the feeling of a courtyard house in the front, but the character conflict is not obvious. It is a bit superfluous. The heroine is saved by the hero and then promises her body. It is really a bit outrageous. At least it is the way of writing before 2008. The later writing of the book is about goldfinger picking up leaks, a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. The story is told dryly. I think the story of Liang Jian at the beginning of the protagonist is really a big failure. At least for me born in the 90s, Liang Jian novels really have no impression. The success of Liang Jian is the film and television adaptation. Writing like this is like using the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of this dynasty. A contemporary person travels to the past to tell people cool stories. The feeling of fragmentation is too serious and there are many problems in the writing of later content. For example, after the death of my grandma, the writing makes people feel that it is both literary and cool. The author does not know how much information he has checked. But I think if you really choose the subject, it might be better to write youth literature. Romance and love may be a bit low-key, but the topic of love is really the same. It can resonate no matter what age it is. The material is also more agreeable. It is much better than the military and science fiction. The writing of Goldfinger is also a big failure. Others' Goldfinger seems to be written to speed up the development of the plot. The protagonist's Goldfinger really looks like it is for water content. The use of Goldfinger basically has no echo with the content before and after.

I have no choice but to gamble on stones when I have no money.

How could the postman deliver the letters door to door? At that time, there were large courtyards, and there were very few independent courtyards. The deliveryman would call the recipient's name at the gate. How could it be delivered to your home in person? Bicycles cannot be left at the door for fear of the wheels being stolen. It's so funny. Who dares to steal public property? In those days, if you stole a public bicycle like this, you would be punished with death very severely. Gab. Let's talk about the stamps. If you like it, you can take it away. There are a lot of words about how much it will cost. It seems very clever.

What the hell? In the 1970s, I have been doing things with the concepts of 2023. The writing is out of place and I don't know how to adapt it. It's very uncomfortable for people who read it! I can't stand it anymore, it's so painful╯╰.

In which era didn't there only be fixed money? There is no way to divide it into one. Don't give conveniences to the protagonist everywhere. This is a period novel. It is destined that the protagonist will not be able to enjoy it very much.