Douluo: Wear It as Su Yuntao, and You Will Be Crowned the Pope.

After watching the simulation twice, I fell into the common problem of being tired of simulations and dying immediately for no apparent reason. It would be better if you add a setting where the time traveler is targeted by the world.

Bibi Dong Douluo Continent's shit stick jumps sideways repeatedly

The simulated plot is too long. Try to make the simulated plot as short as possible and write less. Otherwise, what will happen if you put it on the shelves? Who watches this drama? Then after you simulate the plot, you will have to write it again and walk it through it again in reality. We readers don't have to read the simulated plot at all, or even read it. We can just skip to the chapter where you receive the reward. You can definitely pick it up. The simulation is a plug-in and not the main plot. It's not okay to write it like this.

Just forget about the Blue Silver Emperor's leg bone. Since it's not on you in the cave, no one except Tang Hao knows about it so you won't take it. Even if you take the poison during the simulation, you may not die so quickly.

Book lovers, keep reading, don't keep books. It is very important to follow up on the new book issue and it is related to the recommendation. Please, everyone.

The Blue Silver Emperor is a good thing. It seems that there is a soul bone in the Holy Soul Village.

Why does this article seem so mechanical? It's like an assembly line. My personal feeling is

Oh, it was all in vain. The author packed up his bags and ran away.

Okay, as the person said, it's like an assembly line, but it's very good, because how can I put it, he doesn't have the kind of bad novels, the kind of ordinary 8 o'clock novels, uh, dragging or particularly ugly plots, but he also doesn't have the passion of the 9 o'clock novels. It can only be said to be mediocre, but it can be read. It has no advantages or disadvantages. The only disadvantage is that the ending is too fast.

Naturally, my strength has risen too fast and I haven't thought about the next step. Next time, I will follow the Ten Thousand Worlds flow in the middle and late stages of writing. Outside the main world, I will use the whiteboard reincarnation flow to absorb useful knowledge and strengthen the main world. The main focus is world invasion and strengthening the origin.

In fact, this book can still be written further.