Burying Bodies and Drawing Blind Boxes in the City of Mist

On the contrary, I think this kind of protagonist with a hint of arrogance in his confidence is a bit novel. After all, the starting point is Gou Daoliu, which is a bit boring to watch.

The early Western fantasy flavor of this book is really good, and unlike other types of books, the protagonist actually joins the Holy See. Generally speaking, it is a cliché and hostile to the Holy See. This is quite novel. However, there are quite a few shortcomings in the middle and later stages. On the one hand, the protagonist behaves too much like the urban Long Aotian. The more you watch the movie, the more you think it is imbecile. At the same time, there are no more sophisticated descriptions of clothing and food like the previous ones. The first ones are quite similar to the clothing and food of the steam era, but the latter ones feel like they are adapted from the modern literature of the steam era. One more thing, I suggest the author write less about women. On the one hand, it can be seen that your writing style and plot when describing women are not very good. On the other hand, the interaction between the protagonist and women is very greasy and wretched. If you are not good at writing, my suggestion is not to write, because Dianniang's review is very strong. Unless you have excellent writing skills and know the review well, why don't you just open some websites if you want to see the content? Isn't it better to start piston on the second page than if you have spent a long time writing and still haven't learned how to live a female character? I still suggest that the male protagonist concentrates on his career, otherwise the description of women should be more refined, and at least the characters should be established. I watched it for a long time, except that the heroine is an aristocrat who does research and does not want to get married. I have no other impressions. Coupled with the descriptions of several supporting characters, I can be sure that you can't write female characters well. The impression of the heroine to me is not as good as that of the priest who just came out.

Overall, it is a very novel Western fantasy work. What surprised me is that the Holy See in this novel is different from the villains in most novels, and has a relatively positive image. It's the sudden change in Chapter 22 that makes people disgusted. Nowadays, it is no longer popular to think that you are independent and free-spirited. In fact, you are really lacking in education and have no basic respect for people. If a friend invites you to a birthday dinner, but you don't mention preparing a gift, but you still do all kinds of rude things at the banquet, do you really think you are awesome?

So far, it's pretty good. The protagonist looks like a normal person, better than many authors. Overall, it's not depressing and smooth to read. The plot is compact and not overwhelming. It is not the kind of compact event that leaves the protagonist breathless. The transition between events is natural and not abrupt, and the golden finger of the protagonist is matched with the development environment. Therefore, although the external environment of the protagonist is not very safe and there are many things to do, the reading still has a sense of stability and ease as if you are just walking on the bus.

I just want to say that your skills have no skill bar restrictions and no negative skills. So what if you learn them? You don't need to read a book or anything, you just need to click and learn. After learning, you can also choose not to use the points to increase your proficiency.

This kind of subject matter should have people from female videos coming over and asking not to have a female protagonist and interact more with the male counterpart. I'm so gay in the whole thing. Squat down and see if I get it right.

The book is good, but the details need to be improved. Western fantasy generally does not have restaurants, which are common names in Chinese places, and there is also the corpse king. This kind of title is too immortal 😥😥😥 It feels like I am scratching my head after reading it, and it has shortcomings, but overall it is good.

If I don't ask for anything else from you, if I want a eunuch, please send me a single chapter to explain it. This is so unpopular

I saw Chapter 51, which was unexpectedly good and easy to read.

The writing is quite interesting. It's the first time I've seen Peaky Blinders, Charlotte and other dramas whose names I can't remember written together.