Shrouding the Heavens: Testing My Skills by Mending the Heavens

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Author: I remember that the Demon King came out of a small planet. If the girl couldn't be hidden in Beidou, she was lucky enough to accidentally eat the Demon God Flower when she was young and finally rose to power.

From my personal point of view, Emperor Zhetian was created by himself. Each one has his own way. The Emperor's Scripture is only for reference. If the protagonist wants to accept a disciple, he will follow him every day. Then you and him will never become an emperor in a million years.

After reading all 24 chapters, let me talk about my opinions and questions 1. Is there any overlap between the plot of this book and the original work, such as the protagonist investing in Ye Fan? 2. If there is an intersection with the original work, then in how many chapters will the relevant content of the original work appear? If it appears early, how to deal with so much content from the current timeline to the original timeline. If you qualify late, how can you ensure that the appearance of Ye Fan and others will not be unreasonable due to detailed descriptions. 3. Regarding the progress speed of the protagonist, the starting point of the protagonist is already the Great Emperor. If it is too fast, it will be too distracting and the story will feel empty and contentless. If it is too slow, it will be said that the progress of the protagonist is deliberately suppressed, which is stupid. How to balance the two. 4. At what point will the story end? Will the protagonist become the Immortal King or something more? Will it be when Ye Fan becomes emperor, or after he becomes emperor? 5. Will the map be opened randomly? The protagonist is already the top combat power in the world of Zhetian, and the strength of the protagonist needs to be reflected in a specific plot. However, after the protagonist progresses, the world of Zhetian (not counting the sea of ​​​​world) lacks opportunities for him to perform. At this time, in order to ensure the advancement of the plot, will a new map be opened? It is better for the protagonist to discover a strange world and send out a ray of divine will to go there In addition, I wish the author to write better books

I remember the Immortal Medicine Enlightenment Tea Tree. You can't leave the Immortal Mountain, otherwise you will die.

Is there any fan of the trilogy who doesn't play the role of human race justice? The unique sense of superiority of the time-travelers does not allow all races to respect each other? I feel that the beings who cover the sky and are eaten are innocent. When the Immortal Emperor comes, it will be difficult to reflect the immortal beings. Isn't it a matter of human nature? On the contrary, the usual trilogy colleagues who were compassionate when they were covering the sky had long forgotten the creatures in Beidou's hometown when the Immortal Emperor sent his message.

I don't understand why everyone in Zhetian is in the restricted area. . .

You, the protagonist, are not very strong. In his later years, Ye Fan was able to hit the Supreme with one move.

Have you ever dared to flow all the way to the Holy Ruins?

Wasn't the Immortal Cauldron broken by the ruthless empress? The empress was captured and died because of the ancient holy body. Then the empress embarked on the path of spiritual practice. She became an emperor or was about to become an emperor to take revenge and break the immortal cauldron. So you have the fragment of the Immortal Cauldron but no one knows about the Ancient Holy Body. Which Pipa time period are you in? ? Don't tell me that there wasn't even an empress during your time period? !