The King's Order

I feel so sorry for the male protagonist. He is obviously the young grandson of the Nanyue Kingdom and the eldest prince of the Beichen Kingdom. He has such a powerful identity and background, but he accidentally became the abbot of Hanshan Temple and became a monk. Throughout his life, he adhered to the Buddhist precepts and never fell in love. However, he was in love with the woman he liked, but he couldn't stay together. It was a pity that he couldn't love and couldn't love each other. I hope that in the end they can break away from the shackles of the world and be together!

As a writer's assistant, let me tell you about my experience. I hope it can help you. My last book was only 420,000 words, and it took me six years to write it. During this period, there was almost no reader, but I still finished it completely and seriously. Remember, I wrote it super seriously, not just finishing it. But the only difference between me and you is that my book was signed for 30,000 words, but this is just a waste for me. Actually, when I started writing this book, I knew that there was no hope, that there would be no readers, and there would be no market. Because when I started the book, I had no idea what I wanted to write about. I only knew that I wanted to write a story about the world, and that world is very lonely. But in order to live up to my own intentions, I finally finished it. And the biggest benefit I gained after finishing it was that I gained a great enlightenment from this book and no longer stuck to one thing or one thing, and no longer struggled with it. Especially, when you finish this book, you will find that your mood is really good, as if you have been holding it in your heart for many years and suddenly exhaled it. It is very comfortable and you feel it is worth it. Of course, if you are writing this book just to make money, really, then it is better to cut it off decisively, because there is no need to write it down, but if it is to fulfill a wish of yours, it is better to stick to it. After all, you have written so much, right? (The above personal experience is true, I hope it can help you.)

The story is novel and emotionally delicate. The love and hatred of each character in the story are vividly described. The plot is interlocking and fascinating. The plot twist in the middle is completely unexpected. The monk and the female killer fall in love but cannot stay together, which makes people cry and is very regretful. Come on! I will keep chasing you and support you!

It's amazing that 400,000 words are still generating electricity with love! Come on! I have collected it and read it, doing my best to read it. Help each other.

I stumbled across it in Writer's Assistant, so I came over to take a look. First of all, I admire the author's perseverance. He has 400,000 words in a single game. But from a practical point of view, the author has never studied online articles and jumped into writing original works. It is inevitable that he will not be able to sign the contract and will continue to work alone. In the first chapter, the wording is okay, but the writing is dull. At first glance, I thought Han Ye was the protagonist, and then less than two paragraphs later, Ling Mo came out, and the description was much better than Han Ye. This caused the reader to wonder, who is the protagonist? Who am I to substitute? This is the first sense of separation. Secondly, the three golden chapters of online writing can be said to never go out of style, except for great masters. Because they have a fan base, it is impossible for newcomers to write this way. To be able to understand a novel, you need to feel immersed in it. This sense of substitution can be based on identity or memes. The best thing for newbies to use is the time travel plus system. Adding some memes or something like that can make people smile, and the sense of substitution will come. Third, the Holy Mother is not advisable. Today's readers hate the Holy Mother very much. People are coming to kill you. Even if Hanshan spares people's lives, it only breaks the weapons and does not hurt anyone. What the hell... Anyone with a venomous mouth will spit on you. The protagonist's personality is not likeable, who can fill in for him? Fourth, the description is too messy. In the first chapter, don't have too many additional descriptions. In one sentence, around the plot and protagonist, try to limit the number of characters to less than three. If you are qualified, you should tell the conflicts, cheats, and dilemmas, and solve the dilemmas in the second and third chapters to form feedback and attract readers. And one more thing, if you are not a master, don't use uncommon words in the title of your book. Try to highlight the characteristics of your book, and it doesn't hurt to be abstract. That's all. I speak more directly, and I hope you will avoid detours. I also wrote a book, Zhutian Martial Arts, I just signed it, let's encourage each other.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is relatively stable. But no matter how popular these days, no-brainer cool articles are popular. Unless you are a master, no one has the patience to read them quietly. But doesn't a novel become more interesting the more you read it? Come and comment, encourage us together, come on!

It can be seen that the writing is very serious. As a person who has written millions of words on a single computer, I would like to say a few words. Writing is a complex and arduous task. Only through life experience and understanding of human emotions can occasionally come up with some wonderful stories. In this way, writing is also a very risky and low-yield thing. If persistence is an indispensable way to success, the result may always elude you at the end that you can never see. Therefore, I often say something: to persuade people to write, the sky will strike like lightning. It's just that wealth and honor are determined by destiny, and life and death are determined early. Since you are willing to take this path, what can others say.

You must support us, you are a role model for us!

Coming from a writer's assistant, the writing is quite good, it's really a pity, it's better to stick to it. Come on.

The opening setting is solid, and the plot of the moonlit night attack is fascinating! I would like to make a small suggestion here. If the world view setting and so on can be explained slowly through the lines of the characters in the book, I believe it will be more immersive! Come on friends, Sansen is here to read!

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Personally, I feel that the ending is too bleak and the whole book is too sad. It makes people breathless. It always gives people the urge to cry. I feel very sorry for the male protagonist Han Ye who sacrificed his life to save the world. But he couldn't love it and both he and the heroine died! I hope they can really have an afterlife and grow old together!

I suggest you finish it and start a new one. The vocabulary in this novel is good, but it may be that it focuses too much on vocabulary and ignores the ability to tell the story simply and concisely. Online novels are not lyrical prose. The writing style is important, but it must also meet the basic elements of online writing, that is, the pace must be fast and the storyline must be rich...

It's not easy to insist on finishing 🌹Spread flowers o(∩_∩)o Wish the author a great success🎁 The new work will sell well

It's very well written, with a lot of words, but not many people read it, but it doesn't matter, I have a way to help you get more readers, Hewei wjwjwj990

Come on, it's not easy to persevere to reach 400,000. The writing is great, you can do it!

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I will give my recommendation vote for all the perseverance in the world, here! Worship!

Finished spreading flowers!ヽ(^Д^*)/.○✨

Finish spreading flowers🌹

Come on! Play well and look forward to more works.