
Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is the Sharingan
斗罗:我的武魂是写轮眼
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- Completed
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- 797k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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211Chapters
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After reading more than twenty chapters, I got to the part about fighting Dai Mubai's soul. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is uninhibited, irritable and joyful. When the protagonist was absolutely weak, he had a falling out with Tang San at level 10 and formed a deadly feud. He ran into the Star Dou Forest for a life-and-death experience at level 19. He showed extremely strong hatred for Tang Hao at level 21. At level 31, he openly won thirty-six consecutive victories in the Great Soul Fighting Arena in Soto City. The protagonist is a genius, but he is a genius with no backing in the background. Isn't it a good idea to write the protagonist like this?
Becoming a brother with Tang San is not a poisonous point in my opinion. It is normal for two people with their own secrets to have a certain distance in their relationship, but this distance is too far. And as far as these two people are concerned about the attributes of brothers, I don't see anything at all. My dear brother, when I saw my younger brother jumping into the fire pit (wet), there was no stopping him at all! Brother, I fell out with my brother because of a stranger (Da Shi). Hey, does Da Shi have the halo of breaking up and bringing wisdom? If you fall in love with someone, you have to break up with the closest person, and then give that closest person intelligence?
What about the protagonist's brain? Jumping so happily. I'm really not afraid of death. Even if you seem to be friends with Tang San and his son. Take advantage of them. No matter how hard he stabbed them in the back, it would still look more reasonable than this mindless act.
It's too poisonous. What is it written about? The protagonist has been sucked out of life and is useless, and he wants to find a relationship with Dugu Bo? Can't he steal it himself? If you have to choose him for a relationship, what the hell is that Dragon King's remnant soul behind? If the first free chapter is so poorly written, who will read the later paid chapters? Who can have the patience to see it.
Regarding family: Although Tang San is not good in other aspects. But for family, it is definitely one of the best. Father Tang Hao: Lord of the Douluo Star Plane Mother A Yin: Core of Life of the Douluo Star Daughter Tang Wutong: Although she did a soul-rending operation, she gave her daughter a second-level divine position. Husband with a son of a plane. Son Tang Wulin: Golden Dragon King, God of Destruction Grandson Tang Xuanyu: Dragon God Although Tang San was a patriarchal man, he was not good to his daughter-in-law and son-in-law. But based on paper data alone, no Gold Finger traveled through time and became Tang San's biological brother. No matter how bad you are in the future, you can still become a second-level god, or a priest like Da Ming and Er Ming. If you have good talent and mix in the main line, you can become a first-level god. At the beginning, Tang San was an orphan with a sensitive heart and lack of family affection. Tang Hao is so cool that he can become the master of the plane. As the protagonist's brother, his father doesn't care about him and his mother doesn't know who he is. It's just a matter of minutes to win Tang San's favor. However, the protagonist did not, and the relationship became tense. For Tang Hao, this is your biggest back-up right now. Even if the protagonist does not have the Clear Sky Hammer, Tang Hao must have been around when Ah Yin was pregnant and gave birth to the child. How could he possibly suspect that the protagonist was not his biological child? At most, he is more partial to Tang San. According to the performance of the Tang family's protector, the protagonist will also protect the protagonist when encountering danger. However, the protagonist actually fell out with Tang Hao when his ninjutsu performance was not that strong. I really don't understand that a protagonist who lived a hard life as an orphan in his previous life doesn't even have the ability to observe words and emotions? For Xiao Wu, it's no problem for the protagonist to accept her lustfully. Sleeping on the same bed as a child bride. The protagonist maximizes Tang San's favor, and when fighting for the boss, the protagonist gets Xiao Wu into the same bed. At most, Tang San regarded Xiao Wu as his sister-in-law. As for Tang Hao, no matter it's a conspiracy theory or something. Both brothers are from the Tang family, so whoever gets the 100,000-year soul ring can do it. Both my sons are talented, so the two of them can compete on their own. Even if there is some partiality, Tang Hao will not care if the protagonist recites a few words to miss his mother. As for the current protagonist, I don't feel like he was twenty years old in his previous life. With no brains at all, with the prophetic nature of the story and the identity of Tang San's brother, plus the brains of a modern adult, how can this be accomplished? I thought he was the reincarnation of Master Ban. The game started with Tang Hao and Tang San. Is it that difficult to copy the random cloak hammer technique with the Sharingan? Feide and Tang Hao just got nothing good. It doesn't matter if Tang Hao abandons himself and you are useless. Tang San had an extreme personality before his martial soul awakened. You tried to correct him but it didn't work, so you went to ask Su Yuntao for some knowledge about martial arts. Or first ask Tang Hao if the Haotian Hammer is awesome. When Tang Hao competes with the protagonist, it doesn't matter if he mentions other people's Blue Silver Grass. Our Blue Silver Grass is fine. Ask Tang Hao if his martial spirit is also Blue Silver Grass? Directly introduce the protagonist's mother. Wouldn't it be established if the protagonist just plays a song called "Crying Mom"?
Did the author fail in writing? As a person who has read the original work, the protagonist should know that although Tang San was disgusting, it was only in the later stages. To be fair, Tang San was very kind to his relatives, so there was no need to kill him just for nothing. And as Tang San's brother, you didn't give Tang San a good guide at all. This is a great failure. Take the apprenticeship prison Xiaoan as an example. You must at least stop him here.
Odd (even) voting
Single 1 Double 2 The hostess selections are Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Ning Rongrong, Hu Liena Huowu, and Shui Binger.
When watching Douluo fandom, you usually watch genius streams. Those system streams are so embarrassing! After watching it for so long, I feel that "Girl's Curtain Call" is well-written, logically clear, refreshing, and not awkward in its presentation.
After reading more than thirty chapters, I have a question: Has Zhu Zhuqing lost his memory? He had obviously met Tang Yin before, but why didn't he seem to know him again when he arrived at Shrek?
This book is full of loopholes, the plot is full of bugs, and the plot sometimes makes no sense. The original characters become mentally retarded from time to time.
Everyone, please stop shouting. The author is probably dead.
Is there a female protagonist? Is it a single girl, or two girls, running away from the harem?
Why is it not updated? Author
Is the author a single heroine or a dual heroine? Even if there is no heroine, it's fine as long as it's not a harem. I've read too many Douluo harem fanfics recently. Now that I see a harem, I feel like vomiting. If it's a harem, I'll leave. Ask the author in advance. Don't find out halfway through that it's a harem stallion story. You have to comment on the author. I'll save you a negative review and scold you. I'll ask you about the author in advance.
I have a suggestion. The author must not accept Hu Liena and Bibi Dong. There are too many people who hate Bibi Dong and Hu Liena. As for the reason, please see the picture. This is just my personal view and opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it
Even though he already has the Sharingan, he doesn't let the spirit beast sacrifice to his woman. He has to stand by to hold the battle. How come his woman can't know that the sharingan can make the spirit beast sacrifice, but Dugu Bo can know?
Author, have you read this fan fiction? The book there is quite poisonous. The protagonist's martial spirit was given by the Blue Silver Grass system. He also has the Sharingan. The protagonist is fine in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, it is no longer good. First of all, accept Ning Rongrong. The poison point 1 is to let the queen break up with Tang San because he ridiculed the master as a waste. The protagonist used the Sharingan to control Bu Le in order to retaliate against Tang San. He went to kill Xiao Wu, but Bu Le drugged Xiao Wu. Xiao Wu ran away and mistook the protagonist for Tang San and then went to sleep. The protagonist was originally going to kill Xiao Wu. He saw Xiao Wu sleeping with him but couldn't bear to kill her. Xiao Wu and her also had a child named Xiaorou. I was confused. I didn't mean to kill Xiao Wu. I didn't kill him. Poison point 2. I wanted to take Zhu Zhuqing in but because Zhu Zhuqing's family had an engagement, we couldn't be together. In the end, the protagonist said not to disturb Zhu Zhuqing in the future. They are still ambiguous every day. Then the protagonist of Poison Point 3 said that in order to protect Xiao Wu and his children, he joined the Wuhun Temple and would kill Bibi Dong to avenge Xiao Wu's mother. But when he joined the Wuhun Temple, he first accepted Bibi Dong as his disciple, and then followed Hu Liena in the killing city. It was better with Bibi Dong. He said he would protect Xiao Wu before, but now he became better with Bibi Dong and Hu Liena. I used to say that Wuhundian is the enemy just because of their beauty. They are not enemies anymore. You look stupid to me. I really can't stand it anymore. Poison point 4. Recently, in the latest issue, in order to save Xiao Wu and stop Wuhundian, the protagonist died after going through all the troubles with Susano. Then Xiaowu sacrificed to the protagonist. He also said before that he would not let Xiaowu change his soul ring to be the same as Tang San. In the end, he didn't follow Tang San's path. Poison Point 5 Canghui Academy wanted to kill the protagonist in Shi Nian because the protagonist was from Shrek Academy before. However, the protagonist later quit Shrek Academy. However, Shi Nian mistakenly thought that the protagonist was from Shrek Academy. To kill him, the protagonist could only fight. He used various ninjutsu to kill Shi Nian and beat the protagonist half to death. The protagonist did not use the system to redeem Kamui at the beginning. He had to redeem Tsukiyomi. Tsukiyomi was of no use to those who were too high in level. If he had redeemed Kamui at the beginning, he would have run away. In the end, he said he couldn't die because of his feelings. There were important people waiting for him to protect him and fully open the Susanoo. He caught Shi Nian to death. But the Susanoo of the protagonist here is so unreliable that he would explode in battle with anyone. Then in the later period, he started to show off and provoke trouble. If I said there was something wrong with the author's writing, what the protagonist said was inconsistent with what he did. In the later period, he completely became a stallion. The author should not be like that author. Yes, he wanted to create the protagonist in the beginning and wanted him to kill decisively. As a result, he becomes soft and hangs up, and he can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman. He wants to be ambiguous whether he is an enemy or not. He is a double standard. He complains about Tang San and his group every day. He himself is not as good as Tang San, at least he only has one wife. He only loves Xiao Wu. Unlike him, when he sees a woman, he says she is my true love. For her, I will risk my life to get into trouble. Let Hou say to every woman: Just say that I love her and show it to me. It's even more disgusting than Tang San's double standards. I hope the author doesn't write this fanfic like I said. This is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it
It's getting boring, short and expensive.
Use the Sharingan to tame ferocious beasts.
The Sharingan can tame the Kyuubi. When the protagonist's Sharingan level is high enough, he can tame the ferocious beast and use it as a psychic beast. It's like having a few more titled Douluo as thugs. There is also the Silver Dragon Emperor, a mythical beast. Once he has been tamed, the protagonist has a god as his thug. Imagine this. Tang Yin: Beast God Ditian, you are just a beast with the name of Beast God. You will never truly become a god. Only by surrendering to me can you become a real Beast God. Come on, surrender to me. As he spoke, his eyes turned into the Mangekyō Sharingan. Then he jumped on the black dragon's head, and Susanoo turned into armor and equipped it on the huge black dragon. Tang Yin: Silver Dragon Emperor, you are just a failed lost dog. Only I can bring you back to the God Realm. Please obey me obediently. As he spoke, his eyes turned into the Mangekyō Sharingan. Silver Dragon King can turn into a human and show it to me. The above are my personal thoughts. If the author thinks it is okay, I hope to write it in the article. I hope the author will consider it. Of course there are other ferocious beasts such as the Ice Emperor and the Snow Emperor.
Heroine
So is the heroine Zhu Zhuqing or Ning Rongrong?
I also wrote a Douluo fanfic. Dark Blue Silver Grass develops towards life and dark attributes, superimposes life and toughness, and uses Wood Release as a template to practice martial arts. When you are short of books, you can click on the avatar to take a look (this comment can be deleted)
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
Isn't it a bit hasty if I just go and finish it here?
The Soul Skill of the Samsara Eye
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