
People Live in the City, but I Am Alone
人在都市,惟我独仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 60k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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24Chapters
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I seem to have seen something similar, where banknotes turned into spiritual stones, and the library turned into a collection of books 😁
I've read Chapter 12 and I'm a little confused. Although the subject matter is indeed interesting, but haha, author, you don't seem to have written anything that attracts me. It feels very boring. That is to say, the plot has not started yet, and the advantages brought by plug-ins have not been formed. It is too slow.
The protagonist doesn't even have a level of Qi training, and even only a quarter of his first vein has been opened. How can a middle-grade spiritual stone be absorbed in one go?
He was sacrificed in just 7 chapters. It's too little. Does the author plan to make a big splash in the early stage?
Good, good
It's always inexplicable when it's too messy. The author wanted to write about the dual cultivation of immortality and martial arts but his writing skills were not good enough. The progress of the main line is also more than 20 cards too slow, and there is nothing exciting about it. In addition, the currency system is also messy. A mid-grade spiritual stone costs 5,000 yuan. Taking the Legend of Mortal Cultivation as an example, one medium-grade spiritual stone is equal to 100 low-grade spiritual stones, which means that a low-grade spiritual stone costs 50 yuan. Looking at it, spiritual stones are extremely cheap. In addition, why is a medium-grade spiritual stone not enough for the protagonist to successfully practice Qi? Take the qi-training monks who are mortals cultivating immortality as an example. They all use low-grade spiritual stones for cultivation, and what kind of useless person is your protagonist in cultivating immortality? Even a medium-grade spiritual stone is not enough for you to practice Qi at one level? One middle grade equals one hundred low grade, and you used a middle grade spiritual stone that is purer than the spiritual energy stored in a hundred low grade spiritual stones to reach 28% progress in cultivation? I don't know what you think, but you'd better replace the middle-grade spiritual stones in the book with low-grade spiritual stones. This is at least a little more reasonable.
I didn't read it, but after reading the introduction, my spirit revived, and I am the only one who is a genius! Pooh
You haven't asked for leave since the end of the night. Are you a eunuch?
Goldfinger is still a bit expensive, and if it was an adult who traveled through time, he would have given up long ago even if he had Goldfinger, and the protagonist's behavior feels like he is underage. I lay down and gave up on improving and playing games, and then I didn't lie down and went to college. The later route was almost in line with reality, and I was admitted to college. Personally, it doesn't make sense. Goldfinger places the protagonist in a high-dimensional position and should try to express it as much as possible.