Full-Time Master: Streamer All Things

It's good to read. Finally there is a new full-time master fan fiction. The author will update it carefully and don't cut off the end or update! ! ! Author, in the following plot, can Zhang Jiale join the Xingxin team? I hope the author of the subsequent plot can write more exciting content. Another thing is that it is not interesting enough. I hope the author can write about international competitions. (Just like that one sword, wind and thunder change) Please give me more, don't end it early, I hope it will give you a perfect ending, this is all for later. Come on, author!

It's too toxic, the inexplicable and poorly described emotional drama, the family that suddenly appears, and the mmorpg hardcore moba

Are the color charts of the two heroines created by readers like us? There is almost no interaction between Tang Rou, so whether it is a single heroine or a dual heroine, it is basically not suitable for urban game competition fans such as Full-Time Master to write about harems.

How much of what you are writing is related to Full Time, and what about love triangles, multiple female protagonists, and superpowers to cure diseases? Full Time is really not worthy of being the title of your book. In your book, I don't see much that is exciting about full-time work. I just don't think this book deserves the full-time title

I'd better be more direct. The writing is okay, but there are some emotional scenes in the writing, which account for up to 75%. Feel free to add them if you want. The writing is not good, it's not good at all. It made me dig my toes and bleed from the embarrassment. If it were a perfect score, I would give it 6 points for the writing, 3 points for the setting, -8 points for the plot, and 1 point for the overall score.

I found that many book friends do not understand the meaning of hand rubbing, and some book friends have misunderstandings about hand rubbing. Here is a unified explanation. In this book, hand rubbing means the direction keys plus a certain single-key release skill, such as: ↑↑↓ (wws) plus space, ↑↓↓ (wss) plus space. In order to ensure that the movement is not affected and to prevent other skills from being accidentally used, the protagonist's skills must be at least three direction keys plus a space bar, or even four direction keys plus a space bar. However, generally only one or two keys are needed to release skills, and at least four keys are needed for the protagonist to rub his hands. That's the difference.

The protagonist's idiotic character is like an uneducated brat

The protagonist's personality changes too abruptly. He is a bit of a middle-class character at first, but then suddenly becomes extremely cold and a bit annoying.

The original plot has been weird from the beginning. It gets more and more outrageous as it goes on. It's also in the middle and bottom lane. What did you write about? If you want to write a full-time story, just write a full-time one. It's been a waste of time for me to keep the book. I gave up.

Gou Ba hates seeing the main character's father restricting his freedom the most. Even normal people can't bear it. He has no emotional basis. Besides, he is a time traveler Isn't it bad to be alone? He also needs a big family with capital. It's uncomfortable to watch. After all, not many people read novels and look at the family's face.

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This book is really problematic. I tolerated Tang Rou's problems in the front, and the heroine Yunxiu in the back, hehe, it's not bad. I can understand you saying you have two heroines. If you want a Yumen, I can barely understand it, and the two heroines don't have a good background. I can understand all this, but you have an ex-girlfriend, and then the male protagonist is still in a state without memory. Is this improper and disgusting? Originally, the problem with your adoptive parents has not been solved, but now you have an ex-girlfriend. You use amnesia as an excuse to patch it up. Not to mention amnesia in a car accident, but you fell and hit your head. That's better than breaking up and suffering from amnesia, right? Then how does this ex-girlfriend plan to solve it? Dragging again? Are you giving shit to readers by delaying the thought? Really disgusting

It really gets more and more complicated as you go to the back. The male protagonist in the back is suffering from late-stage depression. His hair is as thick as snow and he gives it away. He chooses to avoid emotional problems and doesn't play in the competition. It's really annoying to watch.

I wrote it wrong, it was obviously a full-time job, but later on it was like my mother had changed the world, so I took on the full-time title, and Ye Xiu

After reading more than a dozen of them, the author's emotional line is really too stiff. Even if we don't know how to write, it would be fine without a female protagonist.

Too much poison, what do you think of glory? If you want to quit, just quit. You played well in the game. Because you are in love, you just go into seclusion. You must be sick.

Is the author's writing skills average? Want to write a love line? Are you talking about Tang Rou or Chu Yunxiu? Who should you choose? The writing is a bit messy

No wonder so few people read novels. If you write full-time fan fiction, just concentrate on writing. If you mix in some gross romance, if your ex-girlfriend is in love with you, you'll be a fucking licker. If you can't write, then don't write.

Good guy, you have super powers to cure diseases, right? How can you still play games with this special power? You can make hundreds of millions of dollars every minute by treating people, but you still care about e-sports?

So are you sure it's a double heroine? It's not irresponsible to flirt with another person, it's better to just have one person. . .

First of all, first of all, the writing is very messy, as if I wrote it wherever I thought. Secondly, there is really a problem with the relationship. The protagonist is too clownish. And the most important point is that he is too independent. Before it was put on the shelves, he didn't look like a normal person or a jade, but more like a little boy in elementary school, whether it was emotional or other.

I can't stand it anymore. No one told me it was a harem story😦Especially the part where the protagonist comes back and plays a game with Blue Rain. I can't stand it anymore. Are they the only ones in the e-sports room? Are everyone else blind? Is it true that other people won't have a problem? It seems that I write wherever I dream. I can't stand it anymore. Who knows that I spent money, but the pain behind the book is so shocking? I am from a rural area, so I can't bear to part with my few dollars. I could only endure the rough spots and read it, thinking in case it would get better later, but the results became worse and worse. It seems that the author has changed before and after. I really recommend not writing your emotional drama. The others are really good, but I really can't stand the emotional drama. Oh my god, I was really going to be furious later on. Who knew that I stayed up until 4 o'clock in the morning reading novels, and ended up being extremely furious. Come on, author. After reading the book review, there is no one behind you.

The ex-girlfriend part is really poisonous. If the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, he doesn't have to write it. . . Ran away

How can I put it, the middle is really too toxic, but at least the setting of the subsequent games is not bad. Unlike conventional fan fiction, the main plot is copied as it is. Just like the Douluo fans must participate in the soul fighting competition and obtain fairy grass, etc., The mortal fans are basically inseparable from the Yellow Maple Valley, Chaos Star Sea, Void Heaven Palace, etc. This is a set of processes. Anyway, the fans will generally follow the encounters of the protagonists of the original work. People, opportunities gained, maps visited, etc. Will not unlock any new maps, new opportunities, new people. This book has made changes. Regardless of whether it conforms to the original work or not, at least it has the intention to add a lot of settings, and it must comply with a certain logic. This is undoubtedly a huge challenge, and it is still written as a fanfic that is not very popular. It would be good if the middle paragraph is changed.

It's a pure Ruozhi story. The author can't even understand what it's written. The protagonist is just like an NT. The plot only attracts people from the beginning. The more you look at the back, the more Ruozhi feels.

There are full-time fans, but every book can be typed. Why? It's not because it's difficult to write full-time. How come you, the author, are confident enough to write full-time fan fiction?

I've read almost half of it... It's a bit poisonous in the middle...

Too casual. Isn't it okay if I don't write about things with women? Especially when you have known someone for a few days and met someone for eight million. Don't you know that many people who play games have been defrauded of hundreds or thousands of dollars? Even if you are married, you cannot give it casually. Even if the woman has much more money than you, you have to know that no matter how rich the woman is, she will not give it to the man or use it for household purposes. The hand rubbing skill is completely unnecessary. It's enough to put weapons in the equipment slot to increase damage. If it doesn't work, you can increase it by 30%, just like the Shadowless Sword. It's also very strong.

I regret reading this book and wasting my time. It's too toxic.

From my personal point of view, it's pretty good The only thing is there is no female protagonist (I like no female protagonist)