Xiao Yan, the Demon Emperor Who Fights Against the Sky

How should I put it? Author, you gave Xiao Yan a half-emperor predecessor, but after his rebirth, I felt that he was particularly dependent on Yao Lao. So don't you have any fighting skills?

There is a loophole or poisonous point in the author's novel that cannot be ignored, that is, Xiao Yan suddenly shielded his soul from Yao Lao several times. How did he get past it? My suggestion is that there is no need to shield Yao Lao. Then write about Yao Lao discovering who Xiao Yan is. Whether you try to change him or guard against him, it will shape the conflict points in the development of the novel's plot. In other words, it's shielding, but he gave some psychological description to Shi Lao, and wrote that he discovered some clues and something was wrong. A normal person would know that something was wrong, and wrote about his response.

Don't write about the ambiguous plot between Xiao Yan and Aunt Yun. According to the author's experience of Xiao Yan's previous life, what the Yunlan Sect did is probably not just shaking eggs and turning them yellow, earthworms chopping upright, and dogs passing by being beaten, but when writing about the plot with Aunt Yun, the character will fall apart.

I don't know who said that the protagonist relied too much on Yao Lao. As a result, Yao Lao has been offline for a hundred chapters now.

Are you, Hun Daier, worthy of touching porcelain white ice? Didn't she immediately send a Dou Zun out to kill Xiao Yan after she was reborn? That is pure wisdom. Dou Zun is just a small soldier in the Soul Clan, will he not be able to send it out?

Let me take a look at what this article is about. Dear friends, wait a moment!

There is no Yun Yun as the heroine in this book, so if you want to read it, you can give it up. The author also has some Yun Hei elements, and the protagonist's love for Yun Yun and her lack of attention have various connotations. Personally, I think if you don't like it, just don't write it. There's no need to dislike it.

There are also many little poisonous points, such as the Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire and Black Flame, which you can say are the inheritance left by the Chengxiao clan. You want to write a story about deceiving a three-year-old child to save the old man and the flames that appear inexplicably in his body. But since it is written like this, there can be a showdown in the later stage. Xiao Yanyao teacher Tuqing reconciles, Yao Lao confesses Yaochen's identity and Han Feng's hatred and all kinds of doubts about Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan can't explain his past life, so he simply confesses that this is the inheritance of the Xiao clan, and he used soul shielding on him in the early stage because of distrust.

I don't understand what some people think. Not to mention that a master of alchemy refining can be a teacher. If you become a disciple, you can get someone who can provide you with safety protection, technical guidance for alchemy refining, support for low- and medium-grade elixirs, and companionship when you are idle and bored. Accompanying a tool man who provides all kinds of services, and offering Fenjue, the strongest skill in the Dou Qi Continent, with both hands. Compared to being friends with Yao Lao, it is just a small price to pay for a little face plus the price of helping people refine their bodies. Why not do it?

It's so cool, so cool! So damn cool! This Dou Po fanfic is the most relieving and enjoyable first one I have ever read, no other! ! ! Especially that Nalan Yanran and that Yunyu, they are so fucking disgusting. In the original work, the original protagonist Xiao Yan let them go, which is really annoying. When watching the original work, it makes people very angry, especially that Yun Yu, this woman is really fucking disgusting! I saw what I wanted to see in this book, and it was really satisfying. Really, this book is very good! Readers who have regrets after reading the original work can give this book a try! I really recommend you to start this novel. Nowadays, most Dou Po fanfics either accept Nalan Yanran as the heroine or accept Yunyu as the heroine. They either accept the heroine or let it go, and then give it a chance. When I really see this, it is so fucking disgusting that I don't even want to read it. I have broken through fan fiction, and now, I am very happy to read this book, it is very refreshing and beautiful!

There is no good review of Yun Yun, God of Gods has nothing to say, Two Yun Yun are Dou Po fanfics of Da Fu, one of the protagonists smashes the resources to Zhu Dudu, and the other is set for Yun Yun to be an orphan of the spirit race However, in fact, Yun Yun has no other use except to satisfy the collection addiction and Xingyu. The collection addiction is only available to time travelers who know the original plot. This thing is only used for Dou Po, and it is just a laggard in the world. As for the legs, Nalan Yanran won't talk about them. This one is not as good as Yun Yun. It's a pity to throw it away if it tastes tasteless. There is no need for the Yun Family Army to build a team. Author, Xun'er Ziyan, Medusa, the Little Medical Fairy, who can you tell Yun Yun with your conscience? , The author didn't even confiscate Yafei. Yafei can manage finances after all. Yun Yun was neglected by Yun Leng when she was in charge of the Yunlan Sect. She seemed very busy. She had to take care of the sect, the disciples and cultivation, but nothing happened.

The old enemy (female) from the previous life came with her, so she retreated.

Isn't Dai'er a life-and-death enemy? Even he can forgive Yun Yun, why can't he forgive her? Do enemies count as intersections? It can only be said that the author forgot the beginning. The revenge for betrayal only lasted for three minutes, and then he forgave. The white-eyed wolf, the rotten world is really pathetic. This cannot be said to be decisive. It can only be said that it is not as strong as Zhang Fei in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Zhang Fei also knows who to seek revenge. If this protagonist were Zhang Fei in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, he would get angry in anger, and then vow to slaughter Jiangdong. Then it will be similar to the three-minute heat, completely relying on the effect of adrenaline. After three minutes, revenge? There is no hatred, and then I don't know anything anymore.

I have already started reading it. I predict that the author has no direction to write and starts to let himself go and start studding. It is a sign of eunuchs.

The first chapter almost convinced me to quit. Don't you know the only principle of Goldfinger... Hun Daier is probably the most poisonous point in this book. The heroine is an old woman, and she is also the enemy of the protagonist. The most saucy thing is that she even has a golden finger, which is amazing. How about you change the protagonist to that soul tribesman.

When Hun Daier was nine years old, she sent out her subordinate Douzun to capture Xiao Yan. In fact, she already paid enough attention to it. The first is that when you are too young, no matter how high your parents or you are, no one will listen to you until you gradually prove your worth. This is even more obvious in the Soul Clan, where the strong are respected. The second is that Hun Daier is affected by the memory of the previous life, and does not know the BUG technique of Burning Jue. She thinks that Xiao Yan will take at least a hundred years to reach his peak, and his cultivation cannot be so fast. Sending Dou Zun is enough for the reborn Xiao Yan. In fact, if you look at the real original work, Xiao Yan is no more than a Dou Master at this point, and Dou Zun's attack is a sure kill.

There are so many poisonous points. After reading about ten chapters, I couldn't hold on any longer. Fellow Taoists, I'm leaving now.

What is the significance of the setting of the peak fighting saint in the previous life? After rebirth, I will be like a novice, adding poisonous points to my novels.

To be honest, this novel is the most enjoyable and most relieving Dou Po fanfic I have ever read. In the original novel, Xiao Yan let go of Nalan Yanran and Aunt Yun, which made people very angry and angry when I read it 😡 and now In this novel, I saw what I wanted to see, which is really refreshing. It's so refreshing, so refreshing 🙂🙂 Readers who have regrets after reading the original novel can give this book a try

Sorry, buddy, I had a whim today and asked the editor to change the name of my fanfic. As a result, it collided with yours. I didn't know until there were comments from book friends below. I'm really sorry 🥺🥺

I hope this book won't be too overwhelming. I read another book by the same author, Xiao Yan, who absorbs a kind of strange fire and gets one star in the fighting master stage. He absorbs Qinglian's earth core fire and only gets one star in the great fighting master stage. With this way of writing, even if you collect all the different fires, you won't be able to reach the fighting emperor.

The protagonist becomes a stallion and messes with Muchen's birthplace. Muchen wants to change his surname to Xiao and call him Xiao Chen. I can only say that he is awesome.

I'm really speechless. How ferocious the bragging was. I didn't just make excuses for not killing this or that.

This Soul Emperor is so miserable that he went offline as soon as he came online.

Is this the author's first time writing a novel? I don't know, I thought you couldn't even divide your essay into paragraphs? There are so many words in this paragraph that it makes my eyes dazzled

In fact, it should be over after leaving Dou Qi Continent. The whole thing will be followed by the harem, which feels unnecessary.

This is even more arrogant than Xiao Yan in the Soul Palace.

The most miserable Soul Emperor has become a mini-dungeon.

Why do fellow Douluo fans have Medusa as the heroine?

Just like the title, the impression is good, but Hun Xuzi will not be good in the future, and it will gradually become outrageous.