I Use Chance to Create Eternal Life

It's too bland. It doesn't show how strong the protagonist is. He's very awesome, but it feels very awkward, and the description of the fight is also very bland.

It reminds me of a book. The starting point is also four words, and the beginning is very similar, but it is about my mother and sister, who also have no money and a bad year, go to the black market to stock up on supplies, and then live forever.

Author, you are a newbie so dare to take a rest?

The latest chapter looks strange, the capital must have the prosperity of the capital. Although sometimes I can't bear to look higher than others, the ancients should have the appearance of the ancients. Too low.

I just watched as the acquired strength suddenly appeared and the innate dark strength suddenly appeared, and wow, it slipped away.

I put poison at the beginning, and when I became a holy mother, I only had three months of food rations left, and I still took in others.

The protagonist has no personality, and the characters who appear have no personality, so I can't remember it.

The writing is really good, the writing is first-class, the plot is smooth, and the sense of harvest every time is intoxicating. More chapters every day will be better. . Looking forward to a big fire,

Are you kidding me that you can't even afford food and still pawn it off?

The plot arrangement at the beginning is not good, and you, the good guy and the bad guy, are trying to convince you to quit, so why don't you authors have a normal beginning?

Is there Shennong or not? Is he the kind of person who is actually the protagonist who is cloaked in chance?

The current plot is reasonable, the background is very deep, and there are no poisonous points. It does not overwhelm the protagonist and is watchable.

Support, come on, until now, it is non-toxic, feel free to watch it, it is not a cool article, not a saint.

The world should open up later

I subscribed and saw Chapter 130. I couldn't stand it anymore. It was interesting at the beginning, but it was boring and bland at the end, with no foreshadowing at all. Treasures are frequently given to the protagonist and there is no difficulty in getting them. It's boring.

It's also good to stick to facts and narrative. A little more and a little more is better.

Why not update? Keep going! Can someone who plays the beast-control style in the demon world continue to write about this? Now that the early accumulation is almost complete, why should we stop when it is so refreshing during the sect crisis₍₍ (̨̡ ‾᷄ᗣ‾᷅ )̧̢ ₎₎

Not enough😢

No, the famous family's arrangement is too far-fetched!

Pretty good setting! The author's lack of writing skills makes the writing incomprehensible, and the readers also find it incomprehensible. What a pity

I just don't know how it compares to Taoism.