Pirate: I Can Draw All Things in the Dimension

The author writes so well. I read Chapter 17. The protagonist has a lot of weird things. Although he is still an ordinary person. Don't get me wrong, he is an ordinary person in the pirate world who is underfed and malnourished. But there are so many flashy things.

The technique of falling meteorites from the sky is really not very powerful in the world of pirates. I smiled and used it, and nothing happened to Luo and Dover. Both of them are relatively strong lieutenant generals, and they took it easily...

When I saw that killing Bucky attracted red hair, I didn't want to look at it for a moment. I wanted to read a pirate fanfic, but ended up turning it into a fantasy novel.

A batch of md water! The description of the drawn props or skills is a long paragraph! Then when I use this prop later, I copy and paste that large section again! Free chapters will be scolded if they do this, but even paid chapters will be written like this! Is the eating image too ugly?

Everything else is fine, except for the desperate blowing of demons. A broken breathing method, a standard Nichirin sword, the blowing is a bit fierce

Author, your fighting power is a bit harsh, the hang-up is so big, and the result is so weak, tens of billions are just a few.

I've read more than 160 chapters, and the rest feels pretty good. But what does this protagonist do? All skills rely on that crystal to be used. To put it bluntly, without this crystal, you can't do anything. All that's left is a gourd baby template that has a hard time defeating evil dragons. Isn't this pure waste?

I just ordered 100 chapters, and then Bucky died within 20 chapters... I lost the desire to read anymore. The description of each lottery item in the article is only one chapter. Forget it, it's not suitable for me...

About 50% of a chapter is explanation. You just have to implement it. Why explain so much? After writing so many words, the actual progress is extremely slow. It also takes half a day to write about psychological activities. Then sometimes the data panel comes out again. The actual progress in a chapter may be less than 10%.

The front is okay, but the back is getting more and more confusing. There are various introductions to various things, and there are a lot of skills and items that are of no use. It makes me headache when I look at them. I always skip the lottery whenever there is a lottery. The author can actually learn from Zhanmei Su. From the beginning to the end, it is just to stack damage and strengthen it. And I have done several sets of them. The Sharingan is still a Magatama, and the Calabash Baby still has no explanation. When it comes to learning sword techniques, I can only see how to chop casually with my abilities. The breathing techniques and Qi techniques even seem to have results and are completely useless.

Md, your combat power system is really bad.

You've got shit like the Deserter King Piccolo, so why can't you choose some normal teammates? I really can't stand you.

Every time the protagonist gets Bailey, he doesn't want anything else. I can't understand that there is such an awesome system, but he is always short of money. He can sell the sundries he draws that he doesn't need. Can't he sell the treasures he grabbed from other pirates? Even other pirate ships can sell them. Even pirates can sell them.

There are too many things to smoke, and there are still new ideas in front of them. Just looking at them makes me feel boring. Many things are exposed and I don't bother to ask.

Previously, when the protagonist was about to fight Lao Sha, he said that the combat power of Card 2 was only at the B-stage. Later, when the protagonist became seven-in-one, he said that Card 2 was at the S-stage! ! When the protagonist was superimposing his combat power to the B stage, he said that his combat power was about the same as Luffy's fourth gear. Later, the protagonist became seven-in-one and had full combat power at stage A. After Dressrosa punched Kaido, it had no effect, and he said that his combat power was about the same as Luffy's fourth gear! ! The combat power changes! Is it suppressing the protagonist's progress? ? Otherwise, the protagonist would be too invincible and the plot would be difficult to write? ? ?

It was originally a book that could be read at a glance, but only half a catty of water was added to one catty of beef. This author added ten catties of water to one catty of beef.

To be honest, author, it might be better if you put the novel in Tomato. At the starting point, the fandom felt a bit worse. . . (Personally, because the ones with high Tomato 🍅 scores are similar to what you wrote, the starting point requirement is too high to become popular)

Destroy the country of Wano! If it doesn't subdue it, it will be destroyed. That's how it is in childhood. Don't wait for it to jump out and give you a knife when you are weak, or wait for it to become stronger and fight against you. Don't think that Wano can't do this kind of thing, and don't naively think that if you feed them enough, they will surrender. Be careful of a surprise attack on you one day.

No plot, just water😅

I feel like I am becoming more and more picky about reading books now. I used to feel nothing about soul penetration, but now I almost scratch it when I see soul penetration, and the feeling of fetal penetration is still acceptable. I don't know what's going on these days. Dian, Lu, Mao, almost all major websites are about soul-piercing books. This is really unacceptable. After all, your body is not your original one. If you read a book with a female protagonist and assume the protagonist's vision, emmmmm.

The storyline is not bad, the main character is not the Virgin, though! 10% Of the book is about equipment introduction, and 25% is about deliberately describing emotional scenes that are too obscene. The author probably has not been in love many times. Many times love is inexplicable and illogical, and the inner drama of the female character is meaningless. This book is a waste. Next time of this type, it is better to write more about the relationship between the team, use time and details to slowly develop, instead of tying it up with interests.

Why do so many people talk about water recently? I don't understand. Recently, there has been a war and Whitebeard has taken action to conquer the Holy Land. He is about to face the World Government. This progress is not good, right? Is it possible that you want the author to send you the outline directly? The author continues to write, and his writing has been quite good recently.

Some suggestions for the author (I haven't read a few chapters) 1. It's a bit far-fetched to use luck to explain "you can always get the right equipment". No matter how much you emphasize the setting, there will always be some confusion, because there is no such good thing in the real world, which can always save your life in a critical moment. 2. If you are not strong enough in emotional scenes, you should write less about them. When describing portraits, you can forget about warmth. Various female characters will come in from time to time. The key is to do it when it is necessary. 3. If the author is talented and has the idea to go further, learn from the works of great masters and use actions to express inner thoughts. For those redundant descriptions, I agree that there is nothing that can be done under the pressure of increasing the number of words.

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Sky Island... Can obviously be killed directly. You have to visit other islands. The main film may only have three or five chapters, and the rest is just water. Those written in anime should be called original works by the animation team.

I have read more than 100 chapters of the latest chapter, and I think it is quite interesting 👍 The protagonist is a bit weak in the early stage, but the process of slowly growing up is quite good, there are not many poison points, and the combat power is also very reasonable. Come on, author! The author, why don't you try your best to update 10,000 per day for 30 consecutive days? If you try hard, we will enjoy it 😁

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The author's writing is good, both the plot and the writing are okay. The plot has normal IQ, and it's cool to pretend to be a slap in the face. The harem can also continue to persevere. The writing is smooth and fully booked. Finally, the combat power and roulette items are well grasped. Don't write about Beng and eunuchs. Update soon! ! ! Not enough! ! !

The golden bodies of the Celestial Dragons should have been broken long ago. Fuck them.

Water, there is a lot of water. What can be said in two sentences, he said for most of a chapter