I Cultivated Immortality Alone in the Martial Arts Era

A strong foundation builder, one punch weighs 4000KG. Shen Nong shook his head when he saw it 🙂

Sorry, the courtroom cannot seat so many people.

I feel like I can just look at my resume and then finish the whole book.

Are you not in the world of warriors? Why do you have spiritual rice?

Cheers to the author for investing, at least let me earn 40 points

Overall, the writing is good, but the IQ is slightly lacking. For example, there are spiritual stones in the world of immortality. If you don't know how to find one in the real world, do you use it to exchange for skills in the world of immortality? For another example, when a female samurai greeted him when he was out of town for the first time, she ended up breaking her bones without saying a word. This was because the author wanted the protagonist to show off, but the reader thought: Is this a psychopath? Since the alliance in the real world is good for the protagonist, why not consider gradually introducing immortality cultivation techniques to promote the development of the human world in the alliance? You can also exchange it for yourself for what you need. This is a matter of mutual benefit. Let's just say it was granted by the mysterious person.

I read it in one go, and overall it's pretty good. There are some typos, and it would be better if I corrected it. Secondly, the author's setting is a bit big, as you can see from the resume. Looking at the text, it's about Wave of Life and Cyber ​​Technology, and on the other side, it's about killing evil cultivators and refining alchemy. It's pretty good except for being a little messy. The next step is the drawback. I was shocked when I read a book that brought enemies to kill during time travel. It can be like this. But here you have another one that can bring nothing but flying swords into the Dantian. I can only say that the current time travel is too innovative. Don't do it like this next time. For most people, they will run away after seeing this drawback. Also, the combat power is so incredible. In the middle stage of foundation building, you can rely on flying, invisibility, fireball and cheating to see the weak points and kill monsters above Wuzong, which is a bit outrageous. It's really hard to describe the male protagonist's character, it's too confusing.

The fireball spell is just uncomfortable to watch.

I clicked on the book after reading the title, then left after reading the introduction.

Damn it, why is there no one there?

After reading the comments, let me say a few words. Old bookworms can take a look, it's okay. At least it's not poisonous, and it can stably perform the food level

This is the first time I see so few comments

The writing is fast and can be updated as fast as the Blood Prison of the Apocalypse.

The real strongest human being: I don't eat beef

This foundation building and division gate are both useless.

Did the author go to other places to write the book?