Starting from Orion, Kill a Martial Saint

In this kind of writing, we really need to write less about women. The subsequent processing is very troublesome.

Author, let me give you some advice. Your plot is full of conflicts from the beginning to the end, which can easily make people irritated. Properly writing some growth and daily life will alleviate it. There are also parts that should be enjoyable. Your writing is too rough, and it is not enjoyable to watch.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it's too cliche. You can basically guess what's going to happen next with just one plot. The author should be a novice writer. It's okay to read in a book shortage, but it's too boring to keep reading.

It's been over a hundred chapters, and the protagonist has killed a lot of people, but he still can't suppress a small town! Growth is too slow! It's unpleasant to look at

It's very well written. Can the author change the name Wei Zheng?

This book is about women, so I stopped reading it. The journey of seeking the truth is lonely.

At first I thought it was a cool article or someone who didn't know how to eat turtles, but the more I read, the less useful it becomes. If you have experience, you can save it for danger. You sell something, and then someone tries to rob it, and then you almost get killed. Can't the protagonist learn anything else besides archery and tracking? In the early stage, I have been using tracking and bows. Why not melee? I'm speechless. I almost got killed before I wanted to learn.

There is an upgrade panel. You must learn martial arts. You just don't learn other things. Archery and tracking skills can be upgraded. If you don't use some hidden weapons to protect yourself, others can kill the protagonist's father, kill the hunter Lao Bai, and rob civilian girls to sell. The protagonist must abide by the law and have martial arts. He doesn't show off his strength even though he is capable of stepping on the protagonist's feet. Moreover, the protagonist acts openly and honestly towards his enemies. He doesn't make sneak attacks because he knows that others will send people to kill him. Instead, he waits on the road for others to come over. However, he was attacked by others and his waist was almost exploded.

The author still takes things for granted. There are many flaws when killing enemies, and the Liu family boy's revenge is just like a joke. There are so many clan members who can't defeat Niu Er, and they have to buy women to raise money... It's too many and unreasonable. There are too many works of the same type, so please refer to them!

This kind of writing should be refreshing, why do I feel so frustrated?

Are you still writing about a breakthrough before the battle? Are you still planning to hand over the gangsters? Is the author so naive?

If there is a heroine, show it off and waste my time

After reading the last chapter, why did I have the idea of ​​giving up on this book? 🤔

It's getting more and more wet. Others are slightly pressing in the front and slowly letting go in the middle. Are you not pressing in the front and pressing hard in the back? I can't stand it anymore 😅

A blood practitioner can use blood coagulation pills to fight the protagonist. How can a club with so many people pile up dozens of masters, right? Did you set it yourself to take the lead among the three major families that are so incomprehensible? I've already given it a no-brainer, but it can't stand up to a little scrutiny. Didn't you even read the outline? The fight is also written in an anticlimactic manner.

The author's book is too violent. How can people not be selfish? It's just that people are contradictory. They are selfish while looking forward to the arrival of a hero!

I read it in one go. It is rare to see such a masterpiece. It makes people excited and the logic is very reasonable. I must give it a big reward!

I have read about a hundred chapters so far and this book is really good. Even a thirty-year-old bookworm thinks it is okay. I don't know why this book is not very popular. Maybe the author is a newcomer and is new to the book, but as long as the author persists, he will definitely become a great master. If the great master Wu Sheng gets out of his way and scores 100 points, then this book can definitely score 85 points at present. I hope the author of this book can write better and more exciting books. However, this book also has some small flaws, that is, it is too simple to upgrade the protagonist's force. Just kill people to upgrade the force. The background of this book is in troubled times. In troubled times, you can kill as many people as you want. In a few years, the protagonist will be invincible. This kind of invincibility flow does seem to be exciting, but it is just that the more exciting it is at the time, the less interesting it is. I think even if the protagonist has a system, it is best to make continuous progress in a cycle. In this way, the story of the book will continue to be exciting as it goes on. The protagonist also masters the art of beast control so quickly that he can communicate with wild beasts in no time.

This way of writing seems so depressing, and the refreshing article looks like a sadistic article.

The review section of this cool book is really cruel. If the author listens to people like you, he will take a pill sooner or later.

Very nice boutique, I don't know why there are so few people

She is a bitch and not suitable for writing about a cruel world.

Very nice, why are there so few people?

This book is still very bright, and I look forward to the author's next book.

To be honest, the pig's feet become monsters that are neither human nor ghosts later on. Is it necessary for the author to arrange it this way? ?

The rhythm is too tight. If you are either killing someone or on the way to kill someone, you don't even have time to go home and have a baby.

The protagonist got married within three chapters, even though he became an immortal and still hasn't had children, I'm almost thirty and still don't have a wife 😭😭😭

It's been grinding every day, hurry up and update it.

I said yesterday that it would be finished, but today it really is the finale. The level rises too fast. It's not like Pei Tugou's leveling up, and it's not like running away and constantly opening new maps to level up again. If you can't level up after adding points, you can only end it hastily.

It's well written, why did it end so quickly... Come on, relax and come back again