Fighting Is Broken, but the Heroine Script

I actually read a lot of book reviews before reading this book. Many people said it was poisonous. After reading it, I thought about it carefully. The book is a good book, but whether it is poisonous can only be said to vary from person to person. Let me talk about the conclusion first. My personal evaluation of this book is that it is a rare cuckold novel. This book has a deep bloodline, just like Xiao Yan's time traveler attribute. The gender of Pill's past life is also mentioned at the beginning. Later, it is about how many virtuous wives there are and how many virtuous wives there are. I generally do not recommend reading this kind of text as a transformation novel. It will have no effect if you treat Pill's past life as non-existent. Back to the main text, Yaowan decided to invest in Xiao Yan, but she didn't want to be teased, so what did she do? She didn't reject Xiao Yan directly. While turning herself into Bai Yueguang in Xiao Yan's heart, she also helped him collect a harem on the road (funny). Normally, if you change gender, you will drift away from the crowd when you become single, when you become white, you will accept the female character, when you change marriage, you will accept the male character, and what did this book do? He did all three of the above, established a relationship with the harem in advance, and flirted with the male protagonist as much as he wanted, but he never really got close to him. He even took the initiative to push the person over when his sister wanted to, and looked pleased. I was really convinced, and even the little medical fairy in the article complained about it. I'm afraid it's not a cuckold addiction. If this world had a dream-breaking knife and a dark green avenue, it would be greener than the flame of life now. When I read the book about being married, I felt poisonous because the self-love was too exaggerated. When I read about the transgender story, I felt poisonous because the gender in the previous life actually has no influence. If you don't have any preference, then this book is actually quite enjoyable. As long as you don't take it for granted, the joy of being able to see the future at a glance is really addictive.

I just want to say, now that I see this, I feel angry because I feel that the main perspective 💊 Xiao Yan has come back so much, and in the end he has to tread two boats. I really can't stand it. I hope you guys can explore the way. If it ends up being 1v1, please kick me hard and make me feel better. If not, forget it, just keep this book for now 🤝

A Dou Po fanfic of a female protagonist who travels through time and changes into a harem. The protagonist is the eldest lady of the Yao clan. The entry point is the beginning of a normal Dou Po. It's not 1v1. The protagonist initially matched Xiao Yan with the original female character because of time travel, but Xiao Yan fell in love with him in the middle, and he later understood his heart. The summary is equivalent to Green's own behavior, so this is a poisonous point. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. The pace of upgrading is okay, and it also helps Xiao Yan. His strength has always been the best in the book. The image of the heroine is equivalent to the combination of the advantages of Xun'er and Cai Lin. It depicts the indifference and indifference of the time traveler towards the original characters, but after various events, she finally found her own heart. But the mid-term tempo is a bit freeing. Xiao Yan's portrayal of the characters in the original work is okay. Of course, compared to the original work, there are fewer highlights. He has a bit of a puppy image and his character is a bit softer. Xiao Xun'er (Ms. Gu), Xun'er is basically the heroine's cushion, or the heroine is an enhanced version of Xun'er who can always accompany her. The Little Medical Fairy, Nalan Yanran, has more roles and has become a couple with Xiao Yan. Especially in the middle period, when the Little Medical Fairy fights against Xun'er, the Little Medical Fairy is highlighted, but the emotional description with Xiao Yan is too fast. Cai Lin and Yun Yun have relatively few scenes. Cai Lin has a normal harem, but Yun Yun does not. In the end, there were six, the heroine, Xun'er, Cai Lin, the Little Medical Fairy, Nalan Yanran, and Zi Yan.

The general plot of this book: The protagonist travels through time and becomes a woman. In order to prevent the family from being destroyed, he invests in Xiao Yan in advance. In order to prevent being teased, he first allows Xiao Yan to accept a harem, then he recruits the little medical fairy and then Nalan Yanran. In the end, he still escapes the story and gets herself involved.

Now not only the eight tribes, but also the heroine of the book next door has come across dimensions

💊The portrayal is so good, the other female characters are so marginalized, why should Xiaoyan open a harem after receiving so much favor? What a pity💊😭😭

It all depends on one's appetite for things like "Marrying a Lily". The problem is that since the release of the books, the protagonist has become sour. Some even retell the original plot of Dou Po in several chapters. Without the participation of the protagonist, what is the point of these plots? Is it because you are better at writing than Tudou or the anime is not good enough? Do you want to spend money to read the original novel?

Finally the three-year agreement is over. It can be said that it brings an end to Nalan and Xiao Yan. No matter how uncomfortable Nalan's scene was in the past, this matter has turned over. It can be seen that the connection between the two people has been completely severed. Yunshan is alive, there is no Mikami Yunlan Sect, the Yunyun line is directly cut off, and Nalan has grown up and is no longer disconnected, which is good. In this book, the image of Nalan has been established, and the mission of this character ends here. At most, he will be a mentioned character in the future to establish an alliance to face the Soul Palace. The key lines now are the Little Medical Fairy, Xun'er and the Queen, and there will definitely be Zi Yan behind them. The relationship between the Little Doctor and Xiao Yan was initiated by the heroine, so the cp line can be said to have laid the groundwork for the breakup. The Little Doctor does not have to go to the Izumo Empire to get his hands dirty and become unhappy. However, as a popular character, how to deal with it is the author's problem. Xun'er, on the other hand, thinks it's time to attack. No matter whether the author wants her to be defeated or not, she should be a little alert and choose to take the initiative. Otherwise, her status in Xiao Yan's heart would be too low, which would make it impossible for her to compete in the farewell scene at Canaan Academy. Excellent things come out of comparison. If Xun'er doesn't increase his drama and charm, this comparison will be meaningless. Similarly, if you don't deepen Xun'er's relationship, you should deepen your relationship with the Queen. However, the Queen originally protected Xiao Yan's life many times, and the two of them had no restrictions. They cooperated and refrained from killing due to various circumstances. Their relationship grew in contact again and again, and they found a step after Xinyan fell. But now that the line of protection has been lost, the queen's personality will become thin. It would be good to create a personality related to the queen and the snake people, increase her charm, and shape her into a career-oriented woman, right? Qing Lin is a maid, and my personal wish is that she can become independent, but this is just the character set, there is nothing much to say. Zi Yan, this character has a high degree of freedom. Personally, I think this route should be left to Xiao Yan, and don't let the heroine interfere.

Anti-inflammatory pills, hurry up, no matter what, at least sooner than Ms. Gu, right?

(The following personal opinions are for reference only. They are only from the perspective of book reviews. They do not contain any emotions or grudges. Please do not blame them randomly or use malicious insults. Don't say "you do what you do" and communicate in a friendly manner 😚) I have read almost 300 chapters so far. To be honest, it doesn't feel good. The emotional line depiction of Yan Yao in the early stage is actually not outstanding. The highlight of the emotional progress that can be seen is the wood carving carved by Yan Yao and the Qihuan Qingling Saliva. Yao feels more like a tool man who constantly sends out tasks (similar to Goldfinger). Based on Yan's current performance, Xiao Yan's progress in these 300 chapters seems too passive. It feels like "💊, I have finished this, what should I do next", without the feeling of looking for opportunities on his own. This feeling is heavier in the Canaan chapter. This is not to say that Xiao Yan does not practice hard, but because he has omitted the inner court assessment and the strong ranking competition, he has no idea how Xiao Yan is performing now (some people may say that the writing is as good as the original work, but it cannot be written without writing about combat performance, and it is not even as detailed as the description of the mercenaries in Qingshan Town). The only battle that Xiao Yan has described in detail now is the three-year appointment. In the Canaan chapter, the battle of refining medicine is basically omitted, and most of the rest are jokes about persecuting Ms. Ku 😏 and emotional lines. Although Canaan is the key to basically determining the fan's emotional lines (most of them will not be opened again in Zhongzhou), but the description here The writing is more like a palace fight. Although the love line of the little medical fairy has been given a boost by medicine, it is still too fast without the company of those in Zhongzhou. (Half-Step Empress) mostly describes the love of the little medical fairy that comes naturally without fighting, not this humble love. The description of Xiao Yan here is a bit broken and seems too scumbag. It stands to reason that the people who may have feelings for Xiao Yan now are Ms. Ku (childhood sweetheart), the Little Medical Fairy (she met a man who was really good to her, and started to fall in love, but it shouldn't progress so fast), and Nalan (the author's writing has greatly strengthened the relationship between Nalan and Xiao Yan at the same time in Canaan). The opportunity to start, they were once hostile, they had common experiences, they understood each other, they fought and laughed away their grudges, and they grew up together. To be honest, they can already be regarded as important female supporting characters or even heroines in some stories. In the next few dungeons, they will go through the test of life and death and it will be a matter of course).                                                                                                                                                                                    (too weak), no strength, no background, no help (too little), and more importantly, no masculine ambition. Xiao Yan at this time is actually not as charming as the original work, and will not make the protagonist of the story about changing marriage really get to know each other. In fact, although Lingquan was beaten in the Canaan chapter, he said that he shouldn't bark (especially in front of his eldest daughter), which was too arrogant. But to be honest, after Xun'er left, Lingquan was left alone and told Xiao Yan not to stand behind women. Now it seems that it is only about 3 and a half stars (too few Dou Po fans can actually finish it 😟), and the writing is average. Let's see how the plot develops later.

It's just that the relationship between the Little Medical Fairy and Xiao Yan progressed too suddenly. So you have to watch the original work to be able to overcome this sense of dissonance. There are a lot of minor issues elsewhere, but personally I can ignore them. I will continue to chase, come on.

Now it seems that this book basically has two protagonists, a female protagonist and a male protagonist, but it is understandable. After all, after the butterfly flaps its wings, it is necessary to make it clear what happened to Xiao Yan. Basically it can be seen as two main lines advancing at the same time. The main line can also be said to be that the heroine walks in front and leaves Xiao Yan's back. Xiao Yan is constantly chasing the feeling that the two lines are intertwined with each other. That is to say, the heroine goes through the plot first, and then negotiates with the original characters for her own reasons, changing the original plot. Then Xiao Yan follows the heroine's back and negotiates with the changed people to create a new plot. It is similar to the crematorium of chasing his wife. It can also be said that the protagonist embarks on a journey to chase his wife, like Fulian: I embark on the journey and you are everywhere around me. Then the two main lines continue to intertwine. Because of the influence of the heroine on the original protagonist, the protagonist takes over the harem, and finally meets the heroine and becomes the main plot.

Warm reminder: this book is about transformation, and it is about being a harem for others. Don't join the Shuangjie Party, and don't join the Big Female Leader Party. I have subscribed for so long, and now I feel so tight in my chest that I can't help but say something. If this book were on a female channel, it would be quite explosive. It would be equivalent to finding someone to cuckold you, and then you would be a green slave to pimp your lover with a smile. Looking at the descriptions in the previous chapters, I thought she was single, but the next few chapters just fucked me to pieces.

It was really heartbreaking to see the heroine resisting so much and about to be pouted by Xiao Yan. This book would be super sweet if it had a single female protagonist! It's a pity that he is a harem, it is too poisonous! (But I couldn't help but keep reading, I'm so jian)

In fact, it's not that many people can't accept a harem, it's just that the way of harem is wrong. If the heroines in the harem are not too different from each other in their dedication to the male protagonist, and the male protagonist also contributes to them, then it is very suitable to open a harem. In this book, there is too much unilateral contribution to Xiao Yan. It feels like Xiao Yan is a bit like a kept pretty boy who cheated on the woman even though she paid a lot for him. Moreover, he cheated on more than one person and on several different sides. This kind of behavior is so disgusting. I think both boys and girls should hate this kind of person. Anyway, as a boy, I feel disgusted and want to kick the other person in the face. This is still from the perspective of a bystander, and the main visual of this article is 💊, which makes people feel even more disgusting. If this continues and the other heroines are not strengthened, I feel that Xiao Yan is not the Yan Emperor in my heart, but a despicable villain who bears the name of Xiao Yan.

Click to comment and there is so much chaos. Before I leave, let me share some knowledge with you - transformation and marriage are all male videos. In the era before you used Singularity to read books, Bianwen once controlled thunder and lightning on this website.

What's so exciting about marrying into a harem? Why not run to Tianxuan next door to recruit Lin Dong as his disciple after completing the main storyline of Dou Sheng and Dou Po Yao Jie (💊As long as I run fast enough, all problems are no problem). It's the Otome script where two sons of luck tear each other up when they meet in the final plane passage and end up in Daqian. The top-level Shura scene is great to watch (Lin Dong: It's you, the bastard, who wants to drag my master into the harem, right 😡?). This way, it will be fun to watch in Daqian 😃. Otherwise, the harem will be changed to Daqian and it will just be a daily plot.

Xiao Xun'er: If it's a pill that recognizes one's feelings and responds, it might be a bit tricky Medusa: Will it lose Xiao Xun'er: Will it win

Transformation, B Marry is also a male video, but it is severely suppressed, and many people like to watch it 😏

Do you know what her mother's male video is?

Now all we need is ThunderClan

To be honest, you can marry into a harem, as long as you can control it with your writing skills. If there are a few big crises, everyone will be there, everyone will contribute, and it will be almost a fight to the death. At that time, no one can accept that the other person has been abandoned, and that the other person is not worth it. At this stage, 💊 I don't see my own thoughts clearly, so there is nothing wrong with giving away my daughter. I accept this reason. But you, the author, ended the show early and told everyone that it was a harem. Think about it, how much did 💊do for Xiao Yan when the other female supporting characters didn't have enough fight and didn't pay enough? He was injured in a one-on-three fight to grab poison fire, gave the Xiao family a bunch of pills, helped Xiao Yan win over the Mittel family (what a failure here), ran over to help Xiao Yan suppress the beast spirit fire, helped Xiao Yan control the queen and gave the queen a ban... I don't even want to give examples. Such a large amount of unilateral sacrifice is not worthy of competing with other female characters on the same stage. If Xiao Yan is still attracted to other female characters at this time, Xiao Yan is not a thing in the first place. The normal approach is to pave the way for the harem in three ways, weakening the female protagonist and strengthening the female supporting role, but the essence of the first two is actually the third point, and strengthening the male character. If you want to have a harem successfully without being scolded by readers, you have to solve the problem of having a harem = disloyalty. Regardless of whether the audience is male or female, it is difficult to accept that the main point of view finds a partner and then becomes disloyal. You mean double standards? That's right, everyone can accept a harem from the main perspective, but it is absolutely impossible to accept that the person from the main perspective is not loyal. At this stage, people can bring in 💊 or Xiao Yan to alleviate the above problems. If you don't strengthen Xiao Yan, the problem will become more serious. If you really don't have the writing skills, don't write it as a harem, write it as a female character dividing up the male protagonist. It will no longer be a contribution, but a robbery, so that more people will be willing to watch and have fun. The audience for the theme of changing marriages and the harem are not compatible to begin with. If you want to write the opposite, you have to be strong enough to defy nature. When the character's charm is fully highlighted, talking about the law of emotional loyalty will weaken the sense of infidelity.

I've read a lot, so I can briefly describe my experience. First of all, this is a harem novel. I have never read this type of novel. I felt that I might not be able to accept it. I only read it after seeing Dou Po. But it actually feels okay. Compared to the escalation of the battle, the article focuses more on the description of emotions, such as the emotional changes of Pills and others. I feel that the emotions are well written and interesting. Secondly, there is the issue of perspective. Since it was a harem story, I was not very willing to take the pill. However, a very good thing about the author is that I think the article describes more from multiple perspectives. I feel that there are more anti-inflammatory perspectives and pill perspectives. In this way, I feel that I have also put in the perspective of anti-inflammatory and happy people, which is relatively refreshing. Finally, the advantages and disadvantages of personal feelings. The emotional descriptions are good, but I feel that some emotional descriptions are still too little. For example, the Xiaoxian Doctor's emotion for anti-inflammatory (I fell in love with it strongly after parting with the mercenary group) has changed too much (including the other female supporting characters also have a little bit, but not much). In terms of combat power, since this is a Le Zi novel, the heroine's combat power is very exaggerated and does not really fit the background, but it doesn't matter, after all, that's not the point, it's just a small logical problem. Finally, I want to complain. When I first wrote about the interaction between the heroine and several female supporting characters, I almost thought it was Lily, but I didn't expect that it was still a harem story. Overall, my personal sense is good, it makes me want to laugh under the quilt😍

Before reading this book, you must first ask yourself (just like the radio waves in the second dimension next door) First, do you accept transformation stories, which are ordinary male-to-female changes? Second, do you accept marriage changes after transformation? It's mindless and fun Fifth, do you accept the dual protagonists If you can accept it, then congratulations, you have found a treasure. If you can't accept it, there is really no need to forcefully watch it once and then curse a few words. Since you can't eat the spicy food in a Hunan restaurant, why go to a restaurant and order two dishes and then say that the chef's cooking is too spicy for you? Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this book. I hope the author can continue to update it. I have already ordered it.

The plot of Dou Po is basically over. As of now, I want to talk about whether Yao Wan's time traveler plug-in should be told to Xiao Yan. My idea is that it is possible but not necessary. First, regarding the issue of time travellers, Xiao Yan previously thought that Yao Wan was fighting against the natives, but after the reincarnation of the ancient tree, he believed that Yao Wan had already been reincarnated in modern society, and even played a joke with Yao Wan about Zou Ji mocking the King of Qi for accepting advice. Now both of them know that the other person has lived in modern society, which is enough. The specific order of time travel does not need to be explained. In modern society, Xiao Yan told Yao Wan that he was a time traveler, but Yao Wan only responded briefly, "No wonder you are so adaptable." After that, Xiao Yan did not say anything more, instead of being surprised, "I told you such a big secret, why didn't you say more?" Similarly, even if Yao Wan tells Xiao Yan, "I have actually been in this modern world earlier," how can we expect Xiao Yan to react? This is also what I think is the best thing about these two people. They trust each other, understand each other, and their destinies are entangled with each other, so there is no need to ask or talk too much. Second, regarding the so-called gender of past lives. There is no need to explain this, because the medicine in this world is not black medicine. She has already integrated into the Dou Po world, and this life is real to her. In fact, Yao Wan is almost the same as Xiao Yan. They both traveled through time to fight against the world when they were young. However, compared to Xiao Yan, Yao Wan knew the script in advance. In the early stage, she always felt that she was just a spectator and "inhumane", but now Yao Wan is as much a character in the drama as Xiao Yan. Just like Xiao Yan has always been Xiao Yan, Yao Wan in this life has always been just Yao Wan. Those memories of past lives have turned into phantoms for Xiao Yan and Yao Wan. Hmm... But it will probably affect Yao Wan's ability to complain (maybe he is more sensitive in bed? And he knows better how to please Xiao Yan?), But it will not affect Yao Wan's soul essence in this life. For example, she likes flowers, hates drinking, likes to be called "sister" by Xiao Xiao, etc. As for her coolness, indifference, aloofness and tenacity, this is obviously Yaowan's own personality and is not affected by gender. During the reincarnation of the ancient tree, the medicinal plant even returned to modern times in the image of "medicine", and at the same time completely bid farewell to that dreamlike and distant longing. In the face of the hundreds of entanglements that Xiao Yan Yaowan has experienced, this memory is nothing more than a wisp of smoke from the past. As mentioned in the previous chapters, Yao Wan's sense of belonging to the Yao Clan is getting deeper and deeper (just like Xiao Yan also regards Xiao Zhan and the others as family). Yao Wan has long been a member of Dou Po World, and she is just "Ya Wan" inside. Xiao Yan has even met Yao Wan's parents and sister in her previous life, so what else is there to explain? Third, regarding the cheat of knowing the script in advance, it is actually the same sentence. Now that Yao Wan has integrated into this world, she no longer regards herself as a god who controls the stage from above. Even if she knows the script, it is enough to just tell Xiao Yan the information that is beneficial to her own side and should be known to Xiao Yan. After arriving in the Great Thousand World, I will use the available intelligence to help Xiao Yan secure the Endless Fire Realm as soon as possible, and at the same time form a good relationship with Muchen, Lin Dong and the others. There is nothing else to do. This still ignores the butterfly effect (for example, in this world line, the boss becomes the Soul-Swallowing King). Anyway, Yao Wan will not do anything wrong to Xiao Yan, and Xiao Yan will always trust Yao Wan, so there is no need to ask for a clear explanation to such a problem that is not suitable for explanation at all. If it is explained clearly, the first problem that Xiao Yan will encounter is that Xiao Yan will know that the initial encounter with Yao Wan was actually Yao Wan taking the initiative to invest in him, although I know that this is the heart of a villain to judge a gentleman (because Xiao Yan will not care, and his feelings for Yao Wan will not be affected by this. Cut half a point), but even if Xiao Yan says that I have no objection, as a reader, I will still be a little concerned. I think many readers may not want to see Yao Wan explain this matter to Xiao Yan clearly, because the current emotional line is already very sweet and perfect, and saying too much would be unnecessary. It is perfect to maintain the image of Bai Yueguang in Xiao Yan's mind like this. In any case, the entanglement between Xiao Yan and Yao Wan has long gone beyond the bond of memory and information. They have even reincarnated across different time and space and different world lines. Even life and death are no more than trivial matters. Some secrets have long been a fantasy, and it doesn't matter whether they are talked about or not. Then it is better to let them melt with the years, and the relationship between the two will not lose any purity. In this life, Xiao Yan is just Xiao Yan, and Yao Wan is just Yao Wan. I still hope to have a clean and clear ending. Although this book is not pure love, the writing is always full of typos and confusing sentences. The author likes Shui Qun but doesn't like to read chapters (bushi)... But it is really a very spiritual story. I did read a lot of shining words (although often no one cares about it and there is no paragraph comment). This is the confidence that the Ring of Magic player brings to me (cross out). I like it very much. I don't know if the author will see it, but please keep this spirituality (^_^)

Why are there so many female protagonists now casting male videos (ﾟДﾟ≡ﾟдﾟ)!? I really don't understand

I don't quite understand why it's changing so fast. A few years ago, there was a market for people to change and marry in male channels. Why is it that people are so repulsive now? The comments on books that basically involve transformation plots are all scolding, about getting out of male channels, etc. I like reading novels, and I also go to female channels. Female channels are domineering. I have also read some books about ancient generals and princes. I seem to have read all the genres of online novels, including transformation novels. I was obsessed with it for a while when I first read it, but after all, it is a niche and unpopular, and few people write well. When I think about it, I really love reading novels, and I am willing to try any genre.

Do you really want to open a harem and reduce the number of people? In this situation, you still have Xun'er and Nalan. I think it's really boring. The way you write it now, you still say that the Queen is pregnant with Xiao Xiao, are you kidding me? The perspective is all on the heroine, and the plot of the Little Medical Fairy is just suppressed. It's not clear how the two of them got heated up. There are so many people, all in a hodgepodge of Canaan College, but not everyone is qualified to participate in the Shura Field. Medusa has no signs of love at all. The last time I looked at the potential stock, it turned out to be Zi Yan~. In the early stage, Zi Yan could be bribed with medicine. Your Shura field is really worth seeing. Isn't it interesting to say that there are many people and persecuting the Shura field? Now I can see clearly, Nalan, you won't let her go, the queen is pregnant without any emotional foreshadowing, the little medical fairy will have to be pestered without Xiao Yan's perspective to understand the details, Xun'er will not give resources and will only abuse herself with her body, only Zi Yan is as cute as ever and can be a potential stock. The only good thing is that Yun Yun was cut off. Do you think Nalan is a little girl who doesn't understand the world and thinks about rebellious things every day? I don't object. The previous education is over. It's obvious that Nalan and Xiao Yan have drawn a clear line between them and have a perfect ending. Why do you insist on letting Nalan chase you into Canaan? Is there any benefit to learning things and doing exercises by hugging your thighs? That's okay, can we let her be a pure harem? Don't enter Xiao Yan's harem.

I originally came here for a change of marriage, but later on I was a little unhappy with Nalan Yanran being constantly strengthened. After so long, I finally got used to it, and when I entered the academy chapter, I thought it would be good to watch Xun'er suffer from illness and become coquettish. The author also said that Xun'er also wanted to be included in the harem, so she couldn't stand it and ran away. Isn't the protagonist of this book💊? Why is it that everyone is Xiao Yan's harem? The other way around is also fine.

That's why this book is in the boys' section. Do any men really like reading this?