Star Mechanic

Now when I write about this system, it's all about mechanics. Should I say it or not, the super-magic mechanics have a profound influence.

I haven't watched it yet, but when I saw the introduction, it reminded me of The Super Mechanic. It's really good.

I beg you guys not to play melee mage. To be honest, I really don't understand those who write about melee mage. If you play melee, which mage should you choose? If you write assassin or martial artist, isn't it good? There are also those who say that mage is fragile. If the mage is not fragile, he will not be invincible. Do other professions still need it? Just choose mages 😭😭😭😭

It really feels like a mechanic, but the early rhythm is more compact! After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel a little bit sluggish! The background has been expanded! I suggest you write it in the same way as Conan or Sherlock Holmes. For example, if someone dies, who is the killer? Let's find a way to write process together. At present, I think the writing method is too compact. Can the author's inspiration be tolerated? (Can it be updated stably?) I think the way the story promotes the protagonist is better! There is a period in the early stages of The Mechanic where Black Specter is entertained at a rogue gathering place. As a result, his nephew steals Black Specter's gun and the gathering place is wiped out by the group. The story pushes the protagonist to go back and take revenge on the No. 1 Who destroyed the gathering place. It also deepens the hatred with the Sprout organization. He can not fight against the Sprout, but becomes a must to fight against the Sprout. I feel that this story promotes the protagonist! It's not tiring to write like this! In addition to the crooked-mouthed Dragon King, the God of War. . . In this category, most readers still like to see a responsible protagonist grow up! I don't know why there are so many fans of Secret, but the setting of Super God Mechanic can be copied. You have to write Tool Nation, Dragon Throne, and Overlord. . . These super-A growth experiences are also possible! Original and different! There is no problem copying the settings! There is so much new wine in old bottles! Douluo's fandom makes me cry when I read it, basically following the original plot! Fellow friends of Samsara Paradise, the world is too complicated. . . It's not easy to write either! I hope you can refer to the mechanics and other settings, and don't always think about being completely original! Writing a book that way is too slow and you will starve to death! (Stop on the street)

After reading Chapter 25, I felt a little bit bored and a pity to abandon it. I was dazzled by the names of various people, and the dialogue between the characters was also a bit uncomfortable.

What the hell, the daily guide recommended me a eunuch?

I just added it to the bookshelf and saw the finale 😐

Dear readers, please don't keep reading😢 It is really important to pursue reading

It's stable. As long as I don't do any painful emotional dramas in the future and focus on writing the plot, I feel stable.

Or give it up, the pig's feet are like a player playing a game! But never thought that you only have one life?

Maxim is doing great things! Do big things

Doesn't anyone think that a group of immortal people appearing in life is a terrible thing? So is there a setting where everyone in group time travel only has one life?

So far, I feel that the writing is pretty good, and there's nothing too bad about it. It's just that the author is really good at stitching.

In fact, the book is pretty good. I look forward to the author's next book.

Your name is really not for nothing, you actually sent it 😰

I haven't watched it yet, but I feel like it's a mage 🧙🏻‍♂️ not a mage.

Dear readers, please look up to me and let me tell you something I talked to the editor about changing the introduction, but due to an oversight by the author, I changed the punctuation and it was stuck for seven days o(╥╥)o Now I am seeking your opinions, readers. Change the introduction, after all, the introduction is not explosive enough, it seems not very eye-catching The first version is still the same as before - At this time, the Primarch is fighting in all directions to spread the glory of the Emperor, the Galactic Parliament is thinking about what justice is, and the new president of the Federation has just been announced as inaugurated. Players are about to arrive, and the universe has entered an era of great riots. Jon, the well-known anchor of "Endless Galaxy" and the unscrupulous archmage, carried the system panel to become an NPC, traveled into the game, and became a dying prisoner. At this moment, there are thousands of spells and trillions of stars. ... "Are you pursuing endless truth?" "No, I just want to have fun." The second edition adds some bald classic quotations - Interstellar Calendar 1790. The unscrupulous anchor Jon of "Endless Galaxy" was trapped in a dungeon as soon as he traveled into the game and was forced to participate in Umbrella's biochemical experiment. At this time, Barassi, the last president of the Free Federation, had just come to power, the Imperial Warmaster Horus had not yet launched a great rebellion, and the Galactic Empire was hidden under the glory of the Republic. At the same time, four major natural disasters competed to appear. That state of vitality and all things competing is still before our eyes! Jon turned his back to the exploding stars in the sky and took out his little head. "Don't panic, I have the advantage!" The third edition is based on a great god that the author particularly likes - The decaying universe is about to burst, and major natural disasters will appear in turn. Jon takes the system to travel through the game for fun, but in this chaotic and bloody era, there must always be a hero to stand up. Thinking of human beings killing each other and eventually becoming the playthings of the evil god of subspace, Jon held high the torch of truth, Davari, come with me! Let's take a look at the future universe, it must be Chiqi's world! AI God, Mother Queen, Lord of the Void, and all the heroes in "Endless Galaxy" are here! If any reader has a better idea, speak up and save the child┭┮┭┮

The book is very good, but I can't stand the Western dialogue style. I'm leaving now. Come on, author!

The book is good. When sewing a copy of Radiation, why not sew an Elder Scroll? (Manual dog head)

So there are ten people in total, and only half of them are dead before automatically alerting them, and the one who is special is that they are from the current team? ? ? What's the use? ? Do you have time to buy a coffin? ?

Why is the book good but not popular?

What does it mean to be a first-level A-level professional? Are there grades for each level? Are there any restrictions on player entry? Otherwise, unlimited resurrection and upgrade would be too buggy, right?

The writing is okay, but the plot is a mess. It's really a waste.

The setting is good, but your plot is very fragmented.

Why does this introduction smell like a hammer? Four major natural disasters? Four vendors in subspace, right? Nurgle, Slaanesh, Tzeentch, Khorne? The Horus Heresy? Late 30k, around 38k, late Great Crusade? A great rebellion and then a great army? A period when the Necron were still sleeping, the Tau Empire had not yet risen, the Tyranids had not yet invaded the galaxy, and the green-skinned Orks had not yet completely overrun?