Super Seminary Secondary Space

I had an angel girlfriend, and then she died. The background is Kesa and Morgana in civil war. Then the protagonist discovers that the justice his woman insists on is meaningless. My ex-girlfriend should look a lot like Qilin. Then it's the same old thing, protect the earth!

Brother, if it doesn't work, please reopen it and change the layout. I can't stand the first few chapters. It won't matter what you write later.

Leaving aside the plot and writing, there are a lot of typos, incoherence and grammatical errors. Reading the comments, it seems that it has been revised again, but there are still many! A wonderful plot requires ingenious conception, and beautiful writing requires time to polish. But as a novice fanfic, the anime screenwriters have helped you with most of the above two points, or do you have a better idea? For the rest, the writing is smooth, or is it difficult for people to read the sentences smoothly? There are so many coding software that can help you with automatic error correction and typesetting, or you can just read it once or twice after you finish writing it yourself! I found two pictures and they both have wrong punctuation or typos

The origin of the protagonist was explained too hastily. He should be a local. The time should be in the Tang Dynasty. He has been begging for food for five years since he was ten years old. The monkey should have just finished fighting with Lie Yang and felt that he could not hold on alone. He spent his own energy to wake up the protagonist. The protagonist said that he was just begging for food on the earth and ran away without wanting to protect the earth. The angel fell in love, the angel and the devil fought, and the angel was killed by Morgana. At this point in time, the war between the angel and the devil should have been over long ago. Morgana was left with only the bare commander to escape, being chased all over the universe. The author did not understand the history of the Tang Dynasty or the background of the super god. He wrote whatever he thought of and added so many bloody emotional dramas.