Douluo Dalu: Visitor from Beyond

To be honest, I can't figure out the author's positioning of the protagonist. This was the case in the previous book. The protagonist was like an outsider throughout the whole process, and the reader had no sense of involvement. This book is more thorough. Two time travelers, who gave you the courage to think that readers can bring in such a big man who doesn't eat the fireworks of the world? Even if the other time traveler looks ugly, I don't think there is anything attractive about a protagonist

With the Snow Emperor's cultivation level, beating Xuan Laohu was the same as beating Sun Tzu, but now he could only draw a draw. 😥😅

Why is there suddenly an extra time traveler?

Why do you want to write a fanfic called Douluo 2? Can't you continue the world view of the previous one 10,000 years later? Isn't it good to write a different fanfic with Huo Yuhao? Tang San is too disgusting, so just write about the world after Tang San's fart.

Author, you have really swallowed up your own settings in order to highlight the protagonist. It was clearly stated earlier that the Snow Emperor of All Spirits has been assimilated and completely brainwashed to become the protagonist's dog. Even if the protagonist talks about slavery, he takes it for granted. What kind of idea is the Snow Emperor still talking about now?

It's so rubbish. I suffered a lot after reading it. Did the author change?

You vilify time-travelers, why don't you create a licker? Just ask which reader who has traveled through time-travel doesn't find beautiful women. Also, the protagonist is set as a thief at the beginning and there is no sense of substitution at all. I want to write two protagonists but I don't have the skills 😒 It is said that Douluo Continent is a garbage plane, but Douluo Creator God is not garbage. Sanmiao ended Gu Yue Fang Yuan, entangled Yang Jian, and sealed Fang Zheng. He is really more worthy than San Miao, the ominous red-haired emperor in his later years.

This author's works really belong to two extremes. The logical writing is fine, which is rare in fan fiction, but the characters and interest are frighteningly low. The protagonist is outside the world throughout the whole process, without any surprises or substitutions, and the plot is just like a running account.

The author has great ideas, but I don't know if he has the ability.

The way the time traveler hangs up is too outrageous