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One Day Yangshouxian
These days, it's normal to have a young literary author writing romance novels. But I didn't expect that there would be a young literary author in e-sports.
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After reading Chapter 84, I suddenly realized that this is the god of lol who has won five championships in ten years, this is the reborn person who understands the version, and this is the Clown King.
What kind of operation is this? After losing two games, you go up and win one game and then tell the coach that you can win with your left hand, but you still lose in the end. If you write that the manager and coach teamed up to suppress you and prevent you from playing, I would think better of it. Do you want to commit suicide because your grades are too good?
Is Taobo a shareholder of this novel? It just focuses on washing the floor. It doesn't matter if it washes others, but it also forces the left hand to be washed?
How did the author achieve such a different level of writing and ideas in the same book? Is it possible that he bought the gunman's article before?
This introduction... Looks like a fool
He deleted his book and left, not because he lost, but because he named ts as his teammate in S11. It's disgusting. Why do you hate ts? Didn't you watch the G2 game a few days ago? Just a gift, is it worthy of your teammates? Xiaohu is good at fishing, but he is not good at it, at least he didn't give it away on purpose?
It's a crime to be a young man
I want to write a cool introduction, but I don't have the ability to update it I sent half of it, and the other half went home with tes
Why did the protagonist demand his end? ? ? You wrote a two-for-two game, and it would be outrageous for the bo5 protagonist to ask for an ending. Even if you continue to follow the routine and follow the routine, Yue Ya performs steadily and replaces the protagonist and then loses 2:3, it is better than the protagonist asking for an end. I always feel like the outline has been changed. Could it be that someone else wrote it?
Fortunately, I didn't order it, and I didn't accept losing. It was originally a novice novel, and you still did this for me. You didn't accept the literary youth and the so-called realistic habits in the novice novel. There is no need to argue about this. You write yours, and I will let mine go.
The chapter about tearing up the notes has been deleted. From the looks of it, the credit for winning in these chapters belongs to bsyy. If you don't teach coaches how to be a good person, do you still have to rely on your teammates to carry you when you play in the finals? You have to write about the player settings and still have the strength to be an invisible coach on the field. Do you want to start writing about the game from the spring split of the second year? Everyone doesn't like it, what should I do if you subscribe?
Has the author ever considered using a puppy as a prototype to write a book, Ten Crowns, and write it to be designated as fire?
After reading the first volume, I felt like I had eaten a piece of exquisite shit.
This kind of introduction should either be written directly from leaving Taobo, or else quickly finish the plot of Taobo
It's a bit awkward to lose, but this makes it more real 1: The top coach is particularly stretched (even the other conditions combined 2: Not as good as this one, the top four will be gone without the protagonist) 3: There is no competition and training team 4: The staffing has not grown to its peak Peak 5: The prophet is holding back 6: The whole team's coordination, tactics, and strength are better than the top ones. Except that the ghost king may not be as strong as jk in the laning, I can't think of any difference Summary: I can't think of how to win without the protagonist Deus Ex Machina.
You, the author, are such a genius. You went home as soon as you wrote it and it was put on the shelves. You also created an unprecedented and probably unprecedented first-order feature. You really don't need to achieve success, do you? If you want to write a stand-alone story, just tell me, I'll just delete the book.
I have read more than forty chapters, but why has the protagonist still not escaped from this deliberately focused environment?
I read it in two hours in one sitting. Generally speaking, the writing is okay. The plot is relatively smooth. It is a good lol novel. However, some interesting points and avoidable poisonous points were not written well. The most outrageous thing is that you can skip the first order when it is released. Everyone has talked about it (this is the first time I have seen it in so many years). Others That is, emmm starts from Da Sima's explanation of the protagonist's prediction and reasoning at the time, and slowly starts to let the audience know his strength from the side, instead of relying on players from other competition areas after the game, and at this stage, more words can be added to highlight the cool points. At the same time, I describe my daily life and want to rest my mind after watching too many games. Also, readers are completely confused as to how to identify the biological mother, and there is no connection to the plot. I was thinking that I didn't know how to get along with my family, but now I'm like a young master? If the plot progresses at the current pace, it won't be able to write two or three hundred chapters, and it won't be a finale🤔 If you can write about emotions, write more You can read the book Arrow of Champions and Peerless Unparalleled. The emotions are very good Use more side descriptions, and you can't suppress the reader's mood all the time Occasionally add daily routines, and the plot should not be too fast.
It feels like I am showing off my victory in front of adults as I write, and I feel like I am pretending to be a slap in the face. The first thing that attracts people about this book is that the protagonist is very fierce, but the live broadcast and barrage interaction make the audience think that the protagonist is a gangster. Also, it looks chaotic in the game, but it can connect the whole team and drive the rhythm. I tried my best to help White Crescent Moon. Although I only know how to copy BP, I still have a certain level of coaching. The players can see and feel it. As a bystander, I should see it more clearly. Players will only feel comfortable playing, and the coach can see how to win, which is more intuitive. S10's Taobo will let 2 chase 3 even if the protagonist is not selected, so there is no point in the protagonist. If it is, it is so that he can play the main role in the lpl team next season. Then, is the protagonist arranged to play in key games to turn the tide and kill SN to enter the finals, and then kill dwg to win the championship? Once a Lol novel wins the SN competition, its performance will drop off a cliff. The key is that this book won the championship before it was put on the shelves. If you don't win the championship, then what is the meaning of winning SN? If you don't win SN, what is the meaning of the protagonist playing? If the protagonist seems to be a gangster in the whole book, then the team where the protagonist stays must have top-notch well-known players, but for the position of mid laner, except for 21 years of rng, there is no shortage of other first-class teams. So it's better for the protagonist to live stream honestly, play 2 games in the World Championship without revealing how awesome he is, go to a mid-level team next season, lead the team to the World Championship, and then go to wbg in 2022. Or go to rng in 2021 and just stay on the road and win the championship.
Ke Zhui, who is the author's name? It doesn't look like it could be written by a newcomer.
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First of all, let me praise, the competition is written in great detail, and the dialogue is more vivid And then: Are you kidding me? What's the point of writing bsyy in 60+ chapters that even you think is sb? Is he the protagonist? Are you writing a book just to show off his stupidity? Don't confuse the audience and others, okay? No one can see clearly except the other side. , Win or scold? Why are you so happy? What kind of article is this? Suppression, suppression by public opinion. Don't ask later, I haven't subscribed yet
I subscribed for a few chapters, but fortunately I skipped the subscription. I can only say that the writing is okay, but the plot is too retarded.
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The game play is well written. But the various plots are heartbreaking. If you don't want to watch it, you still want to watch it. Please subscribe. There are frequently very unpleasant plots. The beginning is about coach bsyy. After it is released, it is about training four troubled teenagers. The protagonist can always accurately choose the one that makes him most frustrated among various choices. You are simply a combination of literary youth and romance. I really can't stand it 😅
I've finished reading it all. The early test was average, but after it was put on the shelf, the writing was quite good. The previous experience in Taobo seems to be that the author is rushing to make progress, and is young and stubborn. It is best to omit some more, because you are destined to leave if you don't win the championship, and it is written in such detail, which is very separate from your character as the protagonist.
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Hey, why did you fake the corpse again? If the author is correct, will you continue writing?