This Sequence Game Has a Serious Problem

I think the current rhythm is okay, why do so many people say it's not good? ,, And some people say that it devours all paths, this kind of book that wants everything is almost ruined from the starting point, haven't you tired of reading it, most of them fail to write about the combat power in the later stage, don't do it, as long as the protagonist has characteristics and the plot rhythm is good. The main thing is the plot. No matter how talented the protagonist is, no one will watch it if the plot is not well written.

After reading Chapter 14 for the time being, I was very confused by the way the protagonist looked down on skills. The protagonist has always preached that one strength can reduce ten levels, which is true, but is it possible that the enemies you encounter in the future will all have lower attributes than the protagonist? Not to mention cross-level challenges, even if you meet people of the same level, they have various techniques for exerting force, but the protagonist here only uses Wang Baquan. How to fight?

I hope to switch to a magician instead of a hunter. After all, the protagonist's talent becomes more powerful as he progresses, which is a perfect match for the magician profession. Moreover, if you don't master the destructive power of magic in the real world and finally become extraordinary, switching to a hunter profession that can be practiced in the real world will be a waste of the protagonist's talent. You can learn some hunting skills in the real world and spend the early stages of the game. Once you become a magician, you will destroy the world. Perfectly adapted to your talents.

Very nice, really. The first few chapters are average, but then the rhythm enters. If the writing is not crooked later, it can be compared with "Sequence Player" and "Player Fierce"

The rhythm and plot of this book are well grasped at the beginning, but from the moment the protagonist changes his job, it becomes difficult to explain. The first point is the protagonist's job change. Although the protagonist's demon wolf is also very strong, it's a bit embarrassing. Werewolf path + demon path = demon wolf (epic path)? It's not impossible, but it really doesn't match the protagonist's talent. The second point is about the strength of the path. First of all, what is the werewolf path? The intermediate path of the dark camp has been abandoned by the moon. It lacks a path of ability. Then it can beat the hunter path that is favored by the moon. Let's look at the protagonist's demon wolf path. It is known as the path of the gods. The former demon wolf can even hunt the gods. , And then such a powerful path sequence level 9 cannot defeat a weakened intermediate sequence 8 werewolf. It can only be said that the author did not grasp it well and exaggerated the demon wolf path too much. In order to facilitate the plot, he suppressed the protagonist later, causing the reader's expectations to be too different from the actual situation. He also exaggerated the werewolf and hunted the dragon. Isn't this nonsense? It is as outrageous as saying that hyenas or wild dog packs hunt African elephants in Africa.

No, what do you mean by giving the protagonist an all-powerful talent and then limiting the protagonist to only one path?

Hurry up and cut this book out. After the talent turned into a negative effect, not many people have the heart to continue reading. Hey, I see you asked for leave every three days, and it would be good for everyone if you cut it half dead. But to be honest, the writing before turning to the Demon Wolf was very good. From the perspective of normal online articles, I started by relying on the talent to kill the gods, and this is the only golden finger. If others say that the Demon Wolf can kill gods in the later stage, I will directly switch to it, and directly use the talent to develop a career, j8 Isn't it unreasonable for the protagonist to open a new profession? Can't he also become a god? Can't gods kill gods? It would be better to just open a profession to kill gods than now. A good person shouldn't have to be a determined dog. From now on, what is enough for a hybrid breed? Use it. In the novice stage, just push it and it's over. It's still very laborious to make a small 🐺dog fight a Sequence 8 Nightmare. In the early stage, I always wrote about pushing horizontally. Just press and hit and it's done. If you are a big muscle dominator, you can just push it and subscribe based on your performance. It's getting better now, but it's not getting better, it's really embarrassing. If you want to make up for it, just make up a divine villain when you help Little Red Riding Hood get the Holy Grail in the ruins, and design a foreshadowing or a level so that the protagonist's extraordinary characteristics are absorbed by the Holy Grail (for example, the divine villain turns into the Holy Grail's cup spirit, etc., And extraordinary characteristics are needed to restore the broken Holy Grail).

There are all kinds of boasts in the past, and then the author keeps adding patches, knife after knife, and cuts the god level into rubbish.

The front part is good, but the latter becomes more and more poisonous. It can be seen from most of the resentment that everyone is very disgusted with the protagonist's insistence on the demon wolf path. It is clear that there is a chance to find a way to fight against the magic wolf. In the end, I think the magic wolf path after it is put on the shelves is not very strong. There is also the fact that the author is obsessed with the Demon Wolf. Someone suggested that a patch could be made to change the protagonist's talent transfer from forced absorption of characteristics to absorption of characteristics and then save the path to complete the path from the Demon Wolf path to the omnipotent path. However, the author chose not to write it. No wonder the more people read about it, the more people complained and scolded it.

It looks pretty good now, but this is it. Every time it has to strip off its Beyonder characteristics, this is too poisonous. If this point can be changed, the results will be much better. Now that there is Rashomon, if the level of extraordinary characteristics is higher in the future, and the rare level of Rashomon cannot be used, will it be necessary to buy new props? If you can't find the props, doesn't it mean that it won't work if you don't have talent? You can obviously kill and become stronger, but you still have to restrain yourself when the time comes. This is too poisonous. Even if you don't talk about the way to become a poor person like other people say, you will be much better off even if you turn your extraordinary characteristics into expertise or something like that. Just like that, I really didn't target Master Fa. He just becomes a specialty after killing him