The Immortal King

When I first saw Muchuan, I thought it was a single female protagonist. After Muchuan was not online for a long time, I thought it was without a female protagonist. Now, author, are you telling me that this is a harem? The author is great Do you think the readers here want to see romance or the protagonist's career? And I'm not belittling you, but your relationship between men and women is like that of a domineering president more than ten years ago. In an instant, you dug out three bedrooms and one living room with your toes. I have studied civil engineering for so many years, and this is the first time I have built a house so quickly. It would be easier to read if you treat the heroine as a brother. There is no need for male channel authors to force themselves to write about male-female romance.

The taste is very good

I feel like something is not right after watching the movie. It's okay to want to become an immortal, and it's understandable to do whatever it takes to become an immortal. But if you don't have your own bottom line in order to become an immortal, is it really that the person who becomes an immortal in the end is an immortal instead of a monster?

The problem with this book is that the protagonist keeps bragging in the narration, he is a demon and a fairy, this person is shocked and another person is shocked, and the things are piled up for eternity, but when it comes to fighting, it is like that, and it still has the same fighting power after a long time. The protagonist doesn't have much strength yet, and he starts to make a lot of fancy stuff. It's almost boring to see this place that I subscribe to. The setting is interesting, but it's like a mindless novel. As a result, the author is still trying to put in effort, as if he just figured out whatever he thought of in one breath, and then arranged for the characters to marvel at it. Pretending to be cool is a bit pretentious.

At the beginning, I felt that this novel was actually quite good. However, the more I read, the more wrong it becomes. The protagonist's strength is so fast in the early stages of building Qi, but the result is that he is always stuck in the foundation building. Even if he is stuck in the foundation building, characters with high cultivation level appear frequently. The gap is too big. It feels like the protagonist's mental state is due to taking blood pills. To be honest, it's not suitable to watch this kind of mentally ill protagonist. When he thinks normally, he is no different from a normal person. But when the critical moment comes, he takes blood pills and goes crazy. It's very uncomfortable. If you don't take that thing, will you die? It's not like the protagonist doesn't know that this thing is an addictive epilepsy pill. Sometimes the writing style is quite high, and sometimes the writing style is normal for online novels.

This fairy world is no different from other people's. It's an exploitative gangster type, and there aren't any interesting supporting characters. The protagonist is somewhat interesting, and the story is about mortals cultivating immortality. The protagonist's cheats are not big at all. The protagonist has no intention of doing anything to change the world. He just blends into this exploitative and cannibalistic society. Anyone who wants to see it should see it. That's all.

How should I put it? It feels like it is missing some flavor. At the beginning, it was a very good idea to explain the cultivation of immortality through science, and there was a sense that this was the view of the world that the founder should have, that is, a paranoid understanding of the world. Later, the protagonist began to practice according to other people's methods, and his view of the world gradually became the same as that of the people in that world. The narrator began to brag and say some unparalleled nonsense. But these don't make sense. The author wants to write about everything. He not only wants to write about the great battles of the world, but also wants to hone his ability to bury hidden lines and layouts, and also want to be creative. As a result, all parties are fighting and trying to steal the spotlight from each other. Nothing sticks throughout except the author's braggadocio. They are ridiculously trivial. One moment the protagonist kills someone, and the other moment an awesome character appears. They cannot be connected and look very tired. This is obviously not something the author can handle at his current level. Online novels are generally interspersed with events. The author can try to use events to connect the relationships between characters. If a stone is mentioned in the previous article, the stone should also appear in the later article. It is used in this article to mean that if the person who appeared earlier does not participate in the event, there is no need to describe it too much. As for the story itself, if we talk about the appearance of becoming a god in the early stage, it can only be said to be mediocre in the later stage. The protagonist wants to become an immortal, but later starts practicing with other people's skills. The biggest description is that he is like the former Lord Zhao. The protagonist's understanding of the world has been pulled to the upper reaches of the current world, but this is inconsistent with his own statement that he comes from other worlds. Since he wants to be the first immortal in the ages, there must be something extraordinary. If the souls are exchanged, can the protagonist still become an immortal? Why the protagonist? Is it just because of high talent? Many times we don't worship a person based on his physical strength, but evaluate him based on his virtue and his thoughts. The protagonist originally had the ability to see the world from another perspective, but in the later stage, he couldn't see the creativity of the original golden finger at all. It was just wow, I have practiced magical skills and I am so strong. In fact, someone else can be the protagonist, as long as the talent is good. How do I put it? From my perspective, this book follows the same path as the original Emperor Domination

I can't stand it anymore. He Niansheng has not died even after dying so many times. Success disgusted me. In the early days of this book, I was very imaginative and very exciting, but I don't know when it started. In addition to epilepsy, there is also an indescribable nausea, like fingernails scratching the surface of plastic foam, making goosebumps.

It would be best if He Niansheng and Xia Ming directly merge their souls, so that My Great Love Immortal can be born and cook for eternity! Jiejiejiejie∽

It's so interesting. This golden finger is a disease. He Niansheng is a talent comparable to the Great Love God. The protagonist is also a talent. I really want to laugh.

Let's just say that if you had this name from the beginning, I wouldn't have the slightest desire to come in.

The biggest flaw is that the realm is too clear. The protagonist building a foundation and fighting Yuanying is just like playing. Immortals of higher realms appear than gods and above. The foreshadowing and world view are constantly expanding without any explanation. The relationship between the characters in some chapters feels like the author just brainstormed and wrote down part of the content without describing it, but overall it is good.

Change your name? Why ???? Is there something wrong with my immortal path? ! Now the title of this book is so weird...

It's getting worse and worse. No wonder the name has been changed. The content has nothing to do with the original title.

What the hell are you writing in these chapters? They are so well written. Suddenly a fairy or something appears. Why write such a grand story? People have to go step by step, and writing a book is the same. You don't know when you will become a eunuch.

I can't feel the amazing imagination, it's all plot, with a high proportion of supporting roles. Maybe adding a "group portrait" tag is more appropriate.

This book is suitable for people with epilepsy. He's not illogical. It's not logical confusion either. It's just that the logic of the relationships inside doesn't make sense to ordinary people. It's such a mess and it looks like my head hurts. It's like being wiped out by C'Thun.

I caught up on this book quite early. I subscribed as soon as it came out. I originally planned to read it for a few days, but it took me two days to finish it. Then I thought that with such a sudden ending, it must be a mess, or the author ran away as a eunuch. After reading it, I felt that the ending was okay and acceptable, so I will also write my own thoughts (this is my first time writing a book review, please don't criticize me, it only represents my personal opinion, and there are spoilers below). I watched it at first because I thought the setting was quite strange and the physical cultivation of immortality was quite interesting. It gradually deviated from the initial setting, but it felt okay. It was a return to the classic fairy tale of suffering, great hatred, and deep hatred (maybe the author also realized that he had written it wrong and changed the name). In the middle stage, I feel like I'm starting to push the pace, and the pace is a bit faster. Not to mention after transcendence, the rhythm is as fast as making a rocket. I originally thought that this book would have seven or eight hundred chapters less, but it turned out to be less than half of what I thought. When I saw the seventh heaven, I thought that there would be one or two hundred chapters to pave the way for the decisive battle, but the author ended it in twenty or thirty chapters without filling in the water. In fact, apart from the ending being a bit rushed, I can still accept the rest. The ending is more like the endings of "The Immortal Reverse" and "The Demon Seeker". The Immortal Reverse is when Wang Lin sends a clone to the past to leave a golden finger for the protagonist to form a closed loop. The Demon Seeker is when Su Ming transforms into the world and resurrects his old friends. The ending of this book is still a happy ending. I personally like it better. I hope the author's next book will have better results.

It's crazy enough, but it's not exciting enough. The protagonist is constantly injured and wants to die. Every time, more unnatural characters come out of the factory, and no one can beat the protagonist.

It started well, but I ruined it for myself.

It was really eye-catching at first. But readers can guess the ending. That would be meaningless. What does it mean to stay alive forever?

No, you still have to write a hammer and finish the book as soon as possible. You can finish it as early as Chengdao Jun. It will get worse and worse later on.

Hey, I really can't understand it later, which personality? How many personalities? Who is still there? Who's gone? ... I can't stand it anymore

The more I read this book, the more I like He Niansheng. What a pity, what a pity.

Now that the protagonist has become the Yang side, or is mixed with the Yang side, the Yin side has merged with the evil bird, and they are still one body with two souls. Emmmm... So the two people can be said to be each other's inner demons or both are subjects. And where I saw it, it didn't say whether the Yang side originally had its own consciousness (most likely it didn't). It was just who recognized the other... Zhao's father didn't recognize the protagonist. There was really nothing he could do.

So exciting🙂

It's a good book with a unique fairytale feel. The ideas are really rare, especially at the front. Very nice

It has been suspended for 4 days. Is this the end? I'm going to start watching now

Come on author, it's really wonderful

It's over like this, so dry