Wizard: I Can Upgrade Everything

I don't know if there is something wrong with the version I read. Why does it give me the feeling that I spent money to watch a pirated version? The content of the preceding and following paragraphs is incoherent. The content of one paragraph is only connected after two or three paragraphs. The paragraphs are arranged in the wrong order of other parts... Is this really written by a living human being, not generated by AI?

After reading the introduction, I feel like this book is basically useless. 1. Why is it a good choice to cultivate seabirds at sea, but can't I cultivate land birds on the road? What you want to express to the readers in this sentence is completely clueless. 2. If learning witchcraft is not enough, look at the analytical formula of witchcraft (another inexplicable thing, no brainer). 3. If you don't feel safe, your strength will tell you. (This sentence is nonsense, it expresses something that is completely necessary) 4. The wizard has insufficient talent, so a golden finger can make it up (this is also a nonsense) 5. Become a pharmacist and easily make potions (too common, it is the same as becoming a doctor in modern times, treating minor injuries and colds, and there is no sense of expectation at all) So what the hell is your introduction? It looks like a long paragraph, but it does not arouse the interest of reading the text at all.

There are many sentences that don't make sense and it's very difficult to read. To be honest, it feels like a translation!

Well-written wizarding novels are usually praised but not popular, while for mediocre ones, there are basically no people who criticize them. Put an eye in and see what's going on with this book (◦˙▽˙◦)

I feel that such a golden finger is not suitable for writing wizard novels. When I read wizard novels, I like to watch the protagonist continuously acquire knowledge, continuously become stronger, and finally obtain his unique power. It's even more exciting to continuously explore the universe and acquire novel knowledge😁

It's not that the noble Lord bullies the common people. It's just common people bullying your noble lord. Every wizard novel is a formula

I hope there won't be any friendship. Or in the case of a supporting character who follows you from beginning to end, he or she will die.

Please🙏🏻 Dear readers, I really can't keep any handsome guys or beauties anymore. If I keep them anymore, I will really become a eunuch 😭

There are a lot of typos in the first chapter and the sentences are not fluent. It's very tiring to read.

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