After Rebirth, Marry Your Competitor Back Home

I browsed Douyin and searched for the book when I heard my feet running away. I originally thought it was a sweet story with a single heroine, but I died in chapter 16.

Please note that this is a love story. Finance is just a happy place with no data at all. The kind that even a layman can't fool.

After seeing more than 60 chapters, I hope the author will not write so detailed about the business war, although it is quite good. But I think everyone came here for the name and the pure love plot. If the author can write a novel about business war, I will support it. Overall, I hope there will be more pure love plots in this book, so don't go astray! ! ! !

Try to add the character dialogue after it is divided into paragraphs, because sometimes it is easy to be confused when the characters talk too much. I thought it was what I was thinking, but in the end I found out, oh, I said it out loud Also, the part in the bar is a bit discouraging to readers. Emmm, I don't know how to describe it. Although it is said that art comes from life, everyone doesn't like it. I enjoyed reading these intellectually-reducing contents But I came back a little bit later, but I still don't like Ye Sisi very much. I can't help it because I was too unfavorable in the past (the bar persuaded at least 50% of the readers to leave, right?) I just had to read it because I was short of books There are basically no big problems in the back... I'll talk about it later.

I read Chapter 18 and died of a poisonous attack. It was just the first day of school. Your girlfriend's roommate brought her here to ruin your relationship. You tolerated it. Then an unknown sophomore fell in love with your girlfriend. Your girlfriend didn't want to talk to him in the first place. You still let him enter the box. The so-called not making it difficult for her? Funny?

I thought it was only for single female protagonists, but you said it was multiple female protagonists, so I withdrew and you continued.

The recent business war is really speechless. The plot has not advanced at all. The few shares that are fought for are not as many as the system rewards. I don't know what so many chapters are doing.

Seventeen, Eighteen, Nineteen is extremely poisonous. I suggest newcomers to read there first. If you can resist it, read it from the beginning. Anyway, I have withdrawn and will use my own lessons to help the brothers who come after me.

The male and female protagonists are two people from different schools who went to nightclubs. They happened to go to the same nightclub. I won't talk about it. It turned out that the man I met at the beginning of school was also in that nightclub. The woman I met just at the beginning of school was still in that nightclub. They just happened to bump into each other. Then they went to pay for 200,000 yuan worth of wine like they were taken advantage of. Are you sick? Are you familiar with them? You already knew that man had bad intentions, so you let him come over if he wanted to come over for a drink? One wants to poach you, one wants to embarrass you, and one secretly adds fuel to the fire, and then you just go and buy the order? Forced encounters, forced conflicts

There are only so many people investing in 110,000 words. It shouldn't be. After reading it, the quality of the content is okay.

For me, the book ended after Tarzan watched the sunrise

No wonder my grades are bad. Ye Sisi, what is this thing you wrote? Didn't you know that Ye Sisi was acting like this for a day? If a man is in the same dormitory, there will be a fight the next day

There are many female protagonists in the front, but there is only one female protagonist in the back. Poisonous

I wanted to run away, but when I heard it was about multiple female protagonists, I suddenly felt no longer sleepy. It is my duty to protect the starting point of a harem story with multiple female protagonists! !

After reading chapter 18, I couldn't hold on anymore. The first chapter was pretty good, but once I got to chapter 18, I started to get addicted.

I was quite interested after reading the introduction, but then I read the comments. Is there a female protagonist? Are you sick? Many female protagonists are so sweet, are they crazy?

The first one is fine. I started with more than a dozen pieces of history, just stick with the one at the beginning. Even if I work hard on the quality of pure love, I think there are still good ones. So many people criticize it, which means that the previous ones are not bad. No one will criticize the novels that are pure history. If you write hundreds of pieces in two or three months, you can make a small million with high-quality works. The pure history you are writing now.

The pure love that has been laid for so long, and the heroine who was so sensible in the previous writing, collapsed in Chapter 16

If you want to write about the harem, then write about it. Don't keep going here and there. What are you writing? If you want to write about a scumbag, just write it. If you don't want to be ambiguous, then you won't be able to write it.

It's a good book, the first part is pretty good, but Chapter 167 is really too poisonous, and the next few chapters are also very messy. The author wants to write multiple female protagonists, and then leave people who want to watch a single female protagonist. This idea is okay, but it shouldn't be written like this. Ye Sisi's performance is completely unlikable and a bit disgusting. If you have money, you can cheat people for more than 200,000? Li Xinran's behavior in going to the nightclub is completely inconsistent with her previous character. If the author doesn't change this paragraph, the number of people who are willing to see it will probably be reduced by half.

Farewell to Chapter 16. Don't write unappetizing characters when writing sweet stories. I wish the author a bright future 🤝

I'm not against multiple female protagonists, and I'm not against cheating either. But in the article, after the protagonist negotiated a big contract worth tens of millions, he was sent away by others, and then he changed his destination to pick up Lin Wanyun. It was so poisonous. . . There are also funds in the system. The protagonist's family is an ordinary family. They spend tens or even hundreds of millions of dollars for nothing, and no one suspects or checks. This is really insulting to people's IQ, and more importantly, it underestimates the national finance.

I saw it was uncomfortable and irritating to my eyes. It was purely obscene, illogical and incomprehensible.

That's not what these sixteen chapters are about. It's too poisonous, so I immediately asked them to quit.

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I typed a bunch of words to complain about it, but suddenly I lost interest and deleted it. In one sentence, this novel has 50,000 fans. It's really interesting.

What a pity! I got into the trap in the middle, and it was a bit shocking in the early stage. It was okay in the middle of the plot, but later on, the plot was not handled well, and the ending was a bit rushed. This book can actually have a few extra chapters to tell about the missing process in the middle, as well as some daily life after getting married.

I've read more than two hundred chapters and it's too poisonous to stand.

Dead eunuch🔪🔪🔪🔪

How to say it? You may not have laid a solid foundation, but the story direction and the content are very different from other business war novels. I have never been exposed to this before. The details of the story become smoother as it goes on. After reading this, similar novels cannot be read at all. I have two expectations. One is that I hope to continue writing. The second is that I hope to open a new book as soon as possible. My book shortage is caused by you, you are responsible 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Writer of sensational headlines! A perfect example of selling dog meat over sheep's heads! Looking at the title, I thought it was a pick-up novel. Go in and take a look, business war! ? Moreover, the so-called boss's IQ and structure are not very high. Painting a tiger is not like a dog!