
On My Journey Through the World with a Friend
在我有一个朋友的万界旅途
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 346k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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144Chapters
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The author should not describe too much about the experiences of other worlds. What you want to read is fanfics from the world of I Have a Friend. There are so many fanfics about other worlds. If I want to read them, I won't read your book.
Okay, after watching the first season, I was looking forward to someone writing a fanfic, and I finally found it. Keep at it, come on.
Chicken ribs are tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.
What should I say about Xiao Zhao? The key is that I didn't feel any deep feelings for him. After meeting him for a while, things changed a lot. He didn't show how much he was enamored of her. The feelings were very unclear.
It's not enough to read at all. The author will update soon.
It feels like it's enough. As a fan, first of all, I found this one as a fan of "I Have a Friend". Second, the author is very attentive. All the characters perfectly fit the original design, and the inserted character plots are not inconsistent at all In fact I kind of want to see a special protagonist, because I don't like what San Si Wu says and does should be punished by the Yamen. I have no sense of identity with Kapok Country. Revenge is revenge. I have to rely on the Yamen to punish me. I don't agree with Meng Sanxi's philosophy. He's a purely good guy, but that's not the kind of person you want to see.
How to say it? There is no track record in this genre. As long as you don't write the same thing, you can basically win money from this group. Because there is no opponent, but this group is small, and the group that reads novels and searches for fanfiction is even smaller.
The whole site is about me having a friend who is my best fan.
The protagonist who is blind, has learned the art of immortality, Tai Chi, and the Great Shift of the Universe is actually just a high-ranking person. How can he have a friend with such a high level of combat power in the world? ? ?
Let's take a few days off to talk about it, and I'll still have it cut.
What's going on? You don't know how to be a eunuch anymore!
Xiao Ming is here! ! !
I think the protagonist can be a salty fish, but he can't be a real person. Moreover, I think it is very abrupt and unnecessary for the protagonist to join a small group now. It is better to let the protagonist improve his strength, hide in the dark, and go behind the scenes.
To be honest, writing this kind of series is difficult, because after you finish writing the first season, you have to wait for the second season of the TV series to come back. As a result, the first season is almost forgotten by then. Unless you position this world as the main world, write the plot of the first season and then show off, you can go to other places with a small team. Do things in the world or go to some leisure worlds as a trip. After all, if you can bring Xiao Zhao here, you can take people out. For example, take 345 and go to the world of classmates to meet those three and see what Meng Sanxi's reaction is when he meets Lu Qiaochuan. It's quite interesting when a small team meets a small team. 😃
The hook at the beginning of this book is okay, which is what attracted me to read it. After reading the first fifteen chapters, I really wanted to give up, but this is the only book on this subject for the time being, so I resisted. The previous problem is mainly that the author wants to give the protagonist some good things, but he also has to suppress the realm, so it looks very distorted. It may be due to poor early settings, or The author himself took the role, and the writing was very subjective, making it very uncomfortable to watch. Also, the dialogue was copied from a TV series, and it was the same regardless of whether there was a protagonist, so there was no sense of participation in the plot. However, after the fifteenth chapter, it gradually got better, and the protagonist began to have a sense of participation. The writing and plot were okay for a newcomer. After all, TV is also funny, and the content of the novel is relatively close to it. In fact, modify the cheating problem of the golden finger in the previous ten chapters. The martial arts of Thirteen Taibo can be regarded as first-class external skills. It is a bit outrageous that the protagonist can only be a minion after practicing to the peak. You can add a setting to say that the protagonist has insufficient internal strength and only has defective products. It is equivalent to just cultivating internal strength. In the subsequent plot, the protagonist is still a little bit paddling. Reasonable; There is also the problem of world travel. I saw that the protagonist can bring people in, which is a bit outrageous. The world is different and you have to pay a price to bring people in. This price can be offset by the Dragon Yuan in Chapter 2. The rest of the story can be developed in TV plots. This kind of time-travel plot can be opened in a dungeon when you have no idea. There is also a small logic problem in the part where Yitian World sends Nine Yang Divine Skills. Later, the circle comes back a little bit, which is okay, but the martial arts is too complicated, because the golden finger trick only allows you to learn quickly, and it does not mean that you can become a master immediately after just one glance. This affects the perception very much. If this last book is the author's first book, it is considered very good among newcomers, and the progress is obvious. It is considered half-grain now, and you can continue to work hard 😡
How are you? Are you feeling better today?
I just caught up with the latest chapter. Why did it stop updating? Don't give up.
I think the maid in this drama is the best, the one who borrowed Meng Sanxi and Bei Xiaohai for a meal. But I like Gu Twenty-nine the most