
A Journey Beginning with Kamen Rider Faiz
从假面骑士Faiz开始的旅途
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 282k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
138Chapters
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1.8kRecs
5.3kFans
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Reader comments 17
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It would be nice if the key word for this was not the gorgeousness, but the calm pretense, calmness and majesty of Heaven.
Protagonist appearance
The appearance is probably similar to the strong colonization armor Kep, only some small places may be different. (A small answer, this is Aoife Enoch who appeared in Faiz.)
At first I thought the protagonist was Ryuu Ou (Kitasaki), but I didn't expect him to be that good at fighting two minions... He actually couldn't defeat him (I really thought he had the strength of Clover when he first appeared). It seems that Kitasaki is as strong as Ou.
It is indeed a new book for a newcomer. The protagonist shown at the beginning is so miserable, so ruthless, and so bitter and hateful. It was as if I was seeing an actor who could only act in a staring and yelling manner.
The writing is so weird. There is obviously a protagonist everywhere, but the protagonist seems to have done nothing. I want to write a fan novel, but I don't dare to destroy the original plot. The result is that I might as well watch the original drama again.
Typical OOC warning
I still don't understand the work thoroughly enough, so I made a mistake that most fans make, the characters have the same name but are different people. Take Qiao as an example. When the protagonist grabbed him and prevented him from transforming to save people for the first time, according to his original character, he would not think so much. He would just throw his arms around and do it (beat Aoife). After the beating, he had to question why he did it. Secondly, he is a cat-type man who is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, and finds it troublesome. Anyone who has watched the first few episodes should have a general understanding of his character.
It's a pure anecdote. The author can't tell the key points. He has to describe every detail. After reading dozens of chapters, it's just a pure anecdote.
I feel like there's not much to watch. I don't understand what the protagonist is going to do now.
Now let's look at the elimination of the protagonist. It will not affect the development of the story line of Lost Paradise at all.
There is basically no introduction to the protagonist's background.
We don't even introduce the protagonist properly at the beginning, why he wanders on the street and why he meets weird people. Then he encounters a sudden encounter, and then suddenly starts to go crazy... And then he wins... If it is a video, it will be fine... But if it is a text message, there must be enough description. To put it bluntly, there must be enough foreshadowing. Are you in a panic when you stuff the main course into your mouth?