
The World of Cultivation in the Box
箱子里的修真界
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 383k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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174Chapters
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I have read a lot of box themes recently, and I feel that many authors have misunderstood the focus of this theme. The core of this theme is business simulation and God's perspective. If readers want to read real-life stories, readers have more and better choices. Why should they read your work? So when looking at this theme, you want to see the development of the box under the intervention of "God", not what happened to this "God". You can spend about 10% of the content describing the outside of the box, but this 10% of the content must also be the story that affects the inside of the box (you can refer to the story of Ming in the box). To put it bluntly, after subscribing, I found out that it was all out-of-box content and I stopped reading it. I don't plan to subscribe anymore if I see chapters like this in the future, because even if I don't read these chapters, it won't have any impact.
I don't like the relevant departments a bit, they do things too cheaply.
It's better to study hard...🌹It's useful for writing
Read hard and learn how to write novels so that they are comfortable to read. Don't be in a hurry to delete comments. I just want to hear good things.
In reality, there is no need to add so many plots. 😓 Do you want to take a look at the title and theme of your book? Don't we all read this kind of book to see the world in the box? Who reads in reality? Let's change the outline to the box! In reality, there is no need for an outline, otherwise it will be boring to look at.
Chapter 20 will be released. . . 😰😰😰I didn't want to watch it for a moment
As a new book, shouldn't it be more popular every time? Why do you want to imitate those big guys who squeeze out toothpaste? 🙄
Current thoughts
How should I put it? So far, the plot and rhythm in the early stage are quite good, but the proportion in the middle stage is unbalanced. For novels in the box, the focus is on the box rather than reality. The realistic plot should be overused as an interlude. Too much is stealing the show, which makes the reading experience poor for readers who are chasing the theme of the box. But as long as the proportion of the plot was adjusted, in the later period the author went to extremes and directly ended the real plot. Then the plot in the box was probably not written according to the original outline, so the plot pace was too fast, the protagonist was invisible, and the main perspective was in the box for a long time. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist is the backdrop and the real protagonist is the little lover in the protagonist's box. If we still follow this rhythm, it would be better to change the title of the book to "The Ancient Gods Lend Me a Helping Hand and Restore the Glory of the Sect". In fact, the box genre is a cool novel in a certain sense. The protagonist should be in a high-dimensional state of crushing the world in the box. As a result, a protagonist who is the reincarnation of an ancient god in the box suddenly pops up, which is very poisonous, because you have abruptly reduced the dimensionality of the high-latitude protagonist relative to the world in the box, especially since the protagonist's previous life was the next generation of Heavenly Dao trained by himself, and the previous life It is still the last among the ancient gods. On the top is the creator of the protagonist's previous life and other great gods who are ranked in front. On the bottom is the villain in the box who may be promoted to the same level as the protagonist in the future. The invincible buff is equivalent to non-existence. Once this setting is released, it is equivalent to nothing. In addition, in the past few dozen chapters, the protagonist has been invisible for a long time, and most of the chapters have been about the protagonist's power manifesting himself, and the low interaction has eliminated the disproportionate exchange of God's magnanimity.
Niuniu! Turtle! Bear! Hehe! It's still a snake! Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ)
Start World of Warcraft? !
Call the hero quickly! Come out and put out the fire😜😜😁
You think this has nothing to do with the box, it's just an invincible article. Others only read the box mode article.
Tianzun is still watching the show? 😡😡😡🤓
How many chapters are there? 🤓😰 The male lead is still watching the show? If you don't help The lover in the box will be dead😁😁😁😜
Now there are more monsters in the Nebula Sect than human cultivators, right? There are only more than 800 human cultivators No monsters or beasts come out to fight Only leopards and blood dragons show their faces🤓🤓😎
That's a bit ridiculous! Can the bride get on the bridge in disguise? The person picking up the bride won't verify his identity? 😜😜😁