Divine Seal: Starting from Picking up the Double Saints

To be honest, the character of the protagonist is completely like a villain who succeeds 😅

Alas, I originally thought it was a book about a single girl, but it turned out to be a book about multiple girls. To be honest, the only good books about multiple girls are those old books, such as The Three Parts of Covering the Sky, The Proud Nine Heavens, Fighting to Break the Sphere, The Martial Universe, The Sky of Heaven, The Ancient God King, Long Live the Summons, Long Live the King..., So it's best to write well when writing about multiple girls.

Originally, I thought the parents' reasons were too weird, but when I thought about the world where the original form was Sanshao, it wasn't that difficult to understand.

In fact, there is no need to be so malicious towards Lin Chen. The real problem arises from the fact that the author wants to write the plot of the protagonist rescuing the two girls, but he just can't handle it well. It is better to write a random reason than this to prevent the awakening. For example, he got into a big trouble when practicing at the beginning and was forced to run away; another example is that he was killed by a demon. Key points: Awakening may lead to being chased and there is great danger; you can also write that it is because of the protagonist's own reasons, such as that he has just passed through and his body and soul have not fully adapted, and his intuition tells him that he cannot awaken. Isn't this common routine of actively proposing not to awaken better than "wanting him to live a safe life"? Of course, if the author wanted to write Lin Chen as a villain, just pretend I didn't say so. Of course, the author could also write that Lin Chen had noticed something was wrong with the protagonist's soul and deliberately told the protagonist to get out. Anyway, there are many reasons, and it all depends on whether the author can write well.

No, it makes me even more uncomfortable when you write 78 for your innate inner spiritual power. Generally, 80 means someone with a certain physical constitution, blood loss.

The big taboo of the genius stream is to suppress talent. Your reason for suppressing talent is still very irritating. Isn't this just the elders who say they come to make decisions for you for your own good in reality? Who wouldn't be annoyed if you put yourself in this situation? Besides, we all know that since we are the protagonist, we cannot be ordinary people. The author himself feels that the protagonist is very talented, and readers of the fandom must judge the talent based on the perspective of the original work. Your talent is not even a little bit worse than that of Long, and you still want readers to accept your own setting. How is it possible? Don't be afraid of being too open-minded when writing this kind of fanfic. Why put pressure on your talent?

Innate spiritual power actually doesn't matter, it's of no use except to show off in front of Lao Deng. Even if he has an innate spiritual power of 1, the protagonist can still level up quickly if the author wants to. For romance novels, just read the plot, and the fighting power is just a foil.

To be honest, I rarely comment because of the plot, but I did feel that it was so outrageous that I could no longer watch it even after just going up the mountain to meet the Warcraft. Assuming that the old man is indeed a good person at the moment, it doesn't explain why he is not awakened at all. In a high-demon world, there are even monsters on the roadside, and I remember that humans are not even a big advantage in it? Not to wake up? Not looking for death? No matter how much you rely on external objects, it will only delay your death. So the old man is still a high-level person, so he doesn't understand the human situation? And, if you have to delay time and don't want to join the Demon Hunting Group, why can't you just awaken privately? Just keep it a secret. To be honest, the previous plot was so outrageous that I really couldn't eat it. The key author seems to be fine with it so far. And said that if it's okay, I will cheat directly later. The problem is that I don't think there will be a later version of this book. I read the previous one and cut it. All I can say is rat tail juice.

At present, the protagonist's reason for delaying a year is a bit annoying. Then his talent deteriorated, and the number 78 was really embarrassing.

After reading the comment section, I found that there is a lot of controversy about Lin Chen. This character cannot be said to be a failure, I can only say that there are some problems, and his position is also very awkward. Although the golden three chapters are too unpopular now, his space just takes up the golden three chapters. If a newcomer can't stand it, you can start reading directly from the fourth chapter. The first three chapters also explain the interpersonal relationships of the protagonist, and the background. Jing, the orphans were ignored at the beginning, and basically nothing like this happened later. Lin Chen's idea was not a problem in the past, but readers know the plot, and the ghost knows that there will be changes that have not happened in the past thousand years. After all, the temple has lasted for 6,000 years. Who knew that these 6,000 years were actually in captivity? After all, a mortal will end in his sixties or seventies.

Maybe the author thinks it's too cliché to directly encounter the protagonist at the beginning of the game? So it was set up to delay for a year and a half and then awaken 78? 78 Is generally good in Seal of Gods, but as the protagonist, it is really awkward, neither good nor good. It really not only loses the fun, but also discourages a large number of readers. What did Lin Chen do wrong to make you "hate" him so much? He didn't do anything in the original work, right? Why don't you write Long Xingyu like this? If a normal person could hate Lin Chen to death for the protagonist, why would he still write about the superficial acceptance of the character and feel a bit uncomfortable? Is this really reasonable? Why should someone else decide my destiny like this? How can I bear to let such a good talent go to waste? Then I have to write about participating in the selection competition without being discovered by Lin Chen sitting on the rostrum. Then I can only say I wish you success. Originally, the eunuch was the eunuch in the previous book, and he always overpowered the protagonist, but he is again in this book. It's hard for me to convince you of your first sentence, "You already have a divine seal fanfic with a high order of 6,000 yuan, please feel free to subscribe." How could the eunuch say that? 😐 I think the space magician is very innovative. You can start with the divine family and then create two new characters around the protagonist's skills and emotional line.

I didn't want to watch it when I saw the genius stream in the tag. But you gave me a talent stream and forced the protagonist to wake up a year and a half later. It really dissuaded many readers who came to watch the genius stream.

Actually, even if your innate spiritual power reaches 110, I don't think it's poisonous. Talent is talent, combat power is combat power, talent is the future, and you are still weak now. It would be nice to have super high talent.

So is the protagonist taking the position of the magician who can only defend? I was quite unhappy with him when I first watched it, but later I thought he was okay. After all, those in charge of logistics are all big guys, and they are the best among the big guys if they can help you with logistics.

There is a problem with the setting of this book. Awakening is forcibly prevented. To be honest, readers read the book just to enjoy it. If the book is suppressed in the first three chapters, readers will have to run away half of it. Even though they know that suppressing awakening may need to be carried out later, it is not very satisfying. I hope I can pay attention to this content. Don't think that the first few chapters are a suppressive or depressing or unpleasant plot.

To put it bluntly, there is no work to be done, and there will definitely be cheating later. Real cheating is actually like that. It is better to start with Long Aotian from the beginning. At least there is no plot that is both witty and disturbing. If it doesn't work, don't write a genius flow. I think it is better to write a soft rice flow than this one. Even if the protagonist goes to eat soft rice, it is more interesting.

In fact, this book is Lu Xiu's autobiography, so many places have been beautified. The real story is that a time traveler with mediocre qualifications was lucky enough to pick up two female protagonists and thought he was the protagonist. However, he later coveted their beauty and was killed by the real protagonist. Afterwards, the two female protagonists and the real protagonist lived a happy life without shame or shame. Wonderful, wonderful 😏

You are already a fan of Xiaobai's cool articles, and everyone here is here to read the cool articles. Why are you writing so many useless articles? How can you feel happy? It's better for you. The protagonist is not as strong as a passerby. Why are you making such a fuss? Are these first 9 chapters useful? Let's shorten it into one chapter and explain the background. And if you don't join the Demon Hunting Group, can you create a good plot? If you really had this ability, what else would you write?

Suppressing talent will really discourage readers, 78 talent? ? Is it such a dish? This is better than the hostess's dish! ! At first glance, you will take the soft rice route! !

Give it a follow-up reading if you pass by! As we all know, the author is a very fragile creature, and he will easily die if he is kept alive. Catch-up reading (the number of people who have read the latest chapter within 24 hours) is really important for new authors in the early stage! If you want this book to be as long as possible, lend your light (follow-up reading) to Guagua! (Super loud roar!)