Coach! I Don't Want to Kick the Prison Super

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Author, give me some suggestions, just listen. There is no need to deliberately enhance the presence of system functions. You can write it as passive and just write it when needed. Otherwise, it will look a bit awkward for the protagonist. For example, there are still 30 minutes to cool down the skills, and the protagonist will wait for 30 minutes. The writing is too deliberate. Of course, these are just my thoughts and suggestions after reading it 😊

Does the author have any other novels? I stopped reading and read others. I found this one very interesting and a bit like an overprotected goalkeeper.

The updates are too slow, I have to follow them every day The protagonist has been pushed too hard recently, and the games without the protagonist are not mentioned in one stroke, which is a bit too watery. The most important thing is that if you suppress first and then increase, if you suppress too much, after entering the middle and rough stages, you will lack daily life and the game will not be as exciting. It is recommended that if the author wants to speed up the progress and does not want the protagonist to be invincible early, he can introduce some supporting characters, such as fans, heroines, and some related practitioners, to jointly encourage the protagonist to go through difficult times. It can even be written in depth, reflecting the shady story of football through the growth and setbacks of the protagonist, which can also attract people.

Is this book a hiccup? The book published in September 23 is only 110,000 words long.

When you have nothing to do, please vote for all the star players and owners, and leave more messages about the good and bad ones, to give you some motivation! Because I have little time and few updates, I don't expect much good traffic. But getting up every day and checking if there are any new messages will be my motivation to continue writing! Thank you!