Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Growth Life Simulator

This book is exquisitely designed and full of writing to answer the reader's question: What kind of person is Lu Mingfei? After the end of Long San, before he succeeded to the chairmanship with the green light given by the former president Caesar, after experiencing the death of Eri, he was a loser who showed no signs of effort and made no changes. Why is this happening? Because "Something for nothing" means getting something for nothing, getting something for nothing... Lu Mingfei in the original work is a pure gainer for nothing. You may want to say that he also gave a fraction of his life and so on, but is he living a bad life? Did he lose arms and legs after giving his life? Is he brain damaged? Didn't he enjoy the fame brought by those magnificent myths that shook the world? Even at Dragon Tribe Five, Lu Mingfei was still a child. He was already twenty-five or six at that time. He walked across the windy and rainy wasteland, chopped off the heads of the kings in the dark history, burned their flesh and blood to ashes, and threw the cross's dragon bones into the wilderness without even looking at them. With such a heroic resume in front of you, where will this weak kid grow up? No growth. However, the author's book describes Lu Mingfei's growth in a solid way. He does not become stronger by mindlessly blowing up the Dragon King's head with just one bite, but actually "cultivates his body and nature". People often say that Lu Mingfei has a lion hidden in his eyes, which is nonsense. He has been a low-energy rabbit until he was in his twenties, clinging to the reputation of a shabby kid... Lu Mingfei shouldn't just be like this, he should have more possibilities. Who would be willing to be a little monster if we could make the world peaceful? This possibility is something that I feel vaguely after reading the book, like a dream bubble that cannot be grasped but is clearly visible. I would like to write this article in tribute to my dear author Sifei.

After it was put on the shelves, it was so watery that I couldn't see it. Did you sell the book to the studio?

As a fan fiction, the plot development is too slow to enter the main line. But it's really good as a story, and it really told me why Lu Mingfei can grow up. It really made him take root and grow like a seed. I hope the author can get better and better

Refining

No one, then I'll call 🦶County😋

What the previous person said is very good, pertinent and correct. Lu Mingfei has indeed not grown up. Many people say that the blood of mortal kings will end with swords. There is a lion hidden in Lu Mingfei's eyes. It is indeed the road ahead for Lu Mingfei. But there is a major premise. Jiangnan hasn't written that far yet, and what's the story that hasn't started yet? It's not that Lu Mingfei is useless. According to the description in the original work, he is really useless! Growing up? The progress bar of 100 million has increased by 100, how can it be evaluated? Of course, those who brag about Lu Mingfei are the mainstream, because Lu Mingfei reflects most people's other selves, and few people can recognize themselves openly. But this aspect also shows that Lu Mingfei has not grown. Growth is a concept and a consensus. It is something that is subtle and does not need to be recognized by people. For example... If there are protagonists in other novels, will they not change much after hundreds or thousands of pictures? In other words, the growth of mind, the compensation of character, and the increase of combat power. Lu Mingfei doesn't have it. Maybe it's because of his innocent nature that he regularly retreats, but none of this can change that he is just a weak kid at the moment. Speaking of this, I feel a little sage after getting emotional... Let me add a few words. The author's writing is indeed good, with clear logic and smooth writing. On this basis, he added his personal beautiful vision. TM did not change the protagonist, nor did Lu Min become an impersonal demon. He actually grew up? ! Finally I hope that everyone with a head like Lu Mingfei in the article will have the luck to have all his wishes come true, repay the world with songs, and the world will respond with kindness. Come on, author, if you can keep it going, if nothing else happens, this book will do very well and you will be rewarded for your hard work.

They could have been written by a newbie. I'm going to eat my phone.

This book is considered to be one of the highest quality among all the Dragon Clan fanfics I have read so far. No matter how good the content is and how wonderful the writing style is, other books will always give me some awkward feelings. They lack the feeling of Lu Mingfei's growth. If I can't explain it, I just recall it and make forced changes. Only this book truly describes the growth of Concubine Ming. Shallow map

I'm looking for all kinds of episodes, the kind that make you sad and regretful. I don't want Chinese comics. If I write it, it will be blocked unless the readers can help me get the copyright. I don't want Korean comics, if I write them I will be blocked. Don't use harsh words, otherwise you will be blocked. In the future, depending on the situation, I will probably write about Four Lies, Fireflies, Five Equal Sections, Licoris, Curse, etc.

It's basically confirmed that the author sold the book to the studio. There is a huge gap between the writing style before and after. The original author has a strong writing skills, and even the title is very charming. Later, he suddenly stretched his hips. If you look closely, even the words have changed. The ideological style has changed from a literary youth to a low-life flavor. All the scenes have the feeling of forced promotion and sensationalism. In the final analysis, the original author is not good at plot at all, but relies on writing. The plot is ordinary or even mediocre, but he can write a different feeling. You gunmen, don't pick this kind of book. If you can't grasp it, your popularity will plummet because of the huge gap, and the secret will be revealed at the speed of light.

It's not that I want to raise books. I originally came here for the Dragon Clan. The main reason is that there are too many chapters about Demon Slayer, and too little about the Dragon Clan's main world interspersed with it. It is very unfriendly to people like me who have never watched Demon Slayer 😭😭 I believe most people who read books are like this. It would be nice if there were more dragon chapters interspersed in the middle.

New friends can remove the bookshelf after watching Demon Slayer Simulation three times The writing in the back is completely different from the previous ones I have kept a bunch of books for so long.

I rarely post book reviews because I think it's a waste of time and not worth it. But after looking at your things, I really feel like I was deceived into a restaurant, and after eating the special dishes, I found out that there was a defense hidden in them. 🙂 It's too watery, and it's also amazing at the end. It can be seen that my brain was not there when I was writing. Sorry 🙂

The beginning of Demon Slayer is quite good, but the later part is too slow. Also, you wrote Lu Mingfei, not Tanjiro. Lu Mingfei is cheating and destroying the enemy, not a hot-blooded young man like Tan Zhirou who tries his best to gain consciousness and defeat the enemy. They both have golden swordsmanship talents and have been practicing since childhood and have awakened their dragon bloodline. They have to work hard to defeat the ghosts in the trap. It means that Yuanyi's world view is better than that of the Dragon Clan, right? For the sake of low word count, the Demon Slayer chapter is written like an old lady's foot wrap, which makes people not want to follow it.

Demon Slayer should stop. It's too much at once.

It's really hard to put aside the purification. This is, when I make a suggestion as a paying reader, I get attacked, but this book doesn't even allow suggestions? You are noble, you are amazing By the way, what you have written since the beginning of the mid-term is just a bunch of defense If it weren't for some mindless defender who didn't know if it was the author's trumpet, I would not have gone to the book review area to warn other readers who have not been exposed and lower the rating of this book😅

It's like a meat stall where you sell mutton, but when I entered the store I found beef. Although beef is also delicious, I don't eat beef.

It is recommended not to write the title Dragon Clan. You might as well write the entire comic. If you say there is a world of Dragon Clan, when will the main plot start? It's understandable that you want to finish the first world before writing the main plot, but if you write it now, will you still have time to start the main plot? Adding a ghoul to the mix is ​​preparing a eunuch? There are many authors who make this mistake. In the end, they are all eunuchs, and then the outline is here. If the results are really not good, I will give up. It's outrageous that I haven't seen Cassel for over a hundred years.

When will the demons be exterminated? It has always been about demon slayers, and the dragon clan in the main world has not been written much. The overall writing style is very comfortable, but writing about demon slayers all the time feels a bit boring (personal opinion is for reference only). What I want to see is the growth of Lu Mingfei in different worlds, not just demon slayers.

Let's put it this way The author's writing is very good, but he can't distinguish the priorities at all. Fan Wenqing is sick in unimportant places. To be precise, he is sick from the beginning to the end. It is really irritating to write this at important plot points. 90% Of the authors don't have this skill. But the unimportant places are like a stick of chocolate. Even if the taste is okay, it makes people very nauseated to watch. The psychological details of the protagonist, the psychological details of the supporting characters, the details of each character's actions, and the social impact need to be written in a long paragraph. I especially like to describe a scene in a chapter. I have read 250 chapters. It has only been 3 days since the beginning of the Dragon Clan plot. A small incident involving the heroine is divided into more than a dozen small plot points. The characters involved are given 500-2000 words of psychological details, action details, and situational details. It has dragged on for almost 50 chapters and I am still talking nonsense. If 1000 chapters have been updated, I think it is still worth reading. Reading this book now will make me anxious to death. In addition, the author seems to feel that he is in good condition and wants to complete another book and play a double version. I have one thing to say, it's okay if you can make this book more complete and not unfinished. Please use some light to write the plot. Don't just write about the low-power upgrade part. When the combat power is high, you won't be able to write big scenes. You will use flashy modifiers to overwhelm the word count. It's okay to read it occasionally, but after three hundred chapters, it's not good enough. My personal recommendation is to finish writing a book steadily and avoid unfinished work, and save your own reputation first. Otherwise, if you just open a new book, someone will turn over old scores and make excuses for your poor writing style and irresponsible attitude. Moreover, double pages are often seen when the work is about to be completed. Posting such a notice in a novel where the world view of the work has not yet been developed is seen by many readers as a declaration of unfinished work, and most authors would not dare to tarnish their reputation in this way. It doesn't have to be the editor's approval. After all, it's the readers who read your book, and the editor won't care about the newcomers. Readers want to finish a story completely, and don't want to see an okay story end like this.

Why don't you just write about ghost slayers? The reality of the dragon clan is the same as history. What kind of vulgar urban multi-billionaire article?

I feel like it's not as good as it started, and it's more like romance novels with female channels. Also, the heroine of most of the fan fiction Dragon Clan is Su Xiaoqiang. Others write too much, which is like drinking poison to quench their thirst. Another thing is that I think you are suspected of whitewashing Uncle Li. You can't whitewash a person just because he is good to his daughter.

The plot is too slow and I don't know what the author wanted to write. The latest chapters from 183 to now are all about the assassination of the little goddess, and it can't be seen that it is the main line of the story. Even if it is used as a subplot to deepen the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Xiao Tiannv, if this kind of plot is too long, it will appear to be watery. This assassination incident will be shortened and some other daily plots will make the impression much better.

Can you sleep? You haven't updated in 4 hours.

It's missing, please add more, be more precise and understand 🪖

Birth, please update me quickly, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, otherwise, even if I poke you a hundred times, it won't be enough, huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Do you understand?

Still there? Still there? Does the author want to update?

As a second-generation dragon novel, the main storyline of the story is slow to advance. There are too many stories in the simulator. It has only been two or three days since I wrote chapter 182. I fully enjoy the simulator. But if the simulator has a time limit, it will not cause the story to advance slowly. There is too much nonsense. Why can the inner thoughts of the plot characters be expressed in one chapter, which makes people have no desire to read anymore?

Understand?