Beast Control: My Pet Beast Can Accelerate Its Evolution

I think the highlight of this book is that more can be written about the evolutionary route or training and sales. I took a look at the competition category, and it was a bit cumbersome. And I didn't understand the world view. It felt a bit like Pokemon.

It's very refreshing to write, and it's not too awkward to read. It's very smooth.

The introduction, evolution plan, and evolution recipes of Storm Bear seem strange. The evolution plan is all about thunder and lightning training, and the recipes also include thunder ingredients. However, the storm bear does not have thunder and lightning attributes in the introduction. The storm bear has ice attributes and does not need ice ingredients. I feel that it is better to change the wind, thunder and ice attributes to the storm bear introduced in the introduction. The evolution plan adds some training in wind and ice elements, and then the recipe is changed to wind: thunder: ice = 2:2:1, because the wind and thunder attributes are not originally there, so it needs more, and the ice originally has it, but it is only strengthened, so it is less. Isn't this better?

It looks good. It is similar to the type of scale struggle. The protagonist continues to produce more and different varieties. There are relatively few. Some of them are generally engaged in elite strategies, which does not show the feeling of cultivation. This feeling of cultivation is super good.

The lifespan of pets is really short, and they are not far away from death when they are raised!

Don't you think about changing it? Why not write it as an online game and bring resurrection to it?

You can barely feel comfortable reading this latest chapter, but those who are impatient will run away long ago. . . Remember to send it out together next time

The world view of pet beasts is darker. The beasts are all tools. If you die one batch, you can replace another batch. You can kill them casually in a match The initial highlight is that the protagonist relies on the talent of accelerated growth to let the pet beast adults beat children. Then it seems that the protagonist is researching breeding and cultivating a stronger race of pet beasts? You can watch it if you like it

It's not good. You wrote about pet management and there are highlights, but it turns out that there are some in the front and the same old competition in the back. . . Too homogeneous

The plot may be a bit cliche, but the character of the protagonist is really cool, he is really decisive in killing, and he will kill suspicious people directly without arguing with them.

The background could be made bigger, multi-dimensional.

I can't accept many settings. After all, I can't accept risks above level 2 in financial management. If I take all my belongings to participate in the competition, I will lose everything if I lose. The reward for winning is not a hundred times a thousand times, but only a little reward. If it were me, I would never gamble. Also, the advanced level is too vague. The author might as well refer to other novels to set a potential value. For example, a slime has a level one star potential, which means that a slime will naturally grow to one star when it reaches maturity. The setting of excellence in this book is also unclear. I don't know what its use is at all. Also, does a bear need skills to break through the extraordinary? All skills are fine. I don't understand why at all. I can't accept that it's so easy to break the bottleneck. But the group you wrote about is difficult for aristocratic families to monopolize. Ordinary people will never be able to do it in their lifetime.

If you don't understand the upgrade of talents, you don't understand? Did I not read carefully? ?

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