Thank You for the Invitation. I Just Came Back from the Spiritual World and Encountered the End.

I hope that after practicing for three hundred years, I won't become a person who blushes when I see a woman.

The character and image of the protagonist were a bit poorly handled at the beginning, but later on when I started to reminisce, it got much better. There wasn't much poison in it, so it was acceptable. The only thing I want to complain about is the golden finger, monster-fighting and upgrades. It is a brainless white text set more than ten years ago. It makes me very unhappy. It will also dissuade many people. I hope the author can deal with it. Then there are the classics such as exercises, spells, etc. Don't just mention them in one stroke, they must have names, otherwise they will be very uncomfortable to read.

A book with a grand background and a full sense of space. It has many elements and is very interesting. The style is also very fresh, Xiancao!

Let's go from the beginning to the present in one breath and give my opinion. In fact, there was a good opportunity to pave the way for the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, but maybe the author got too excited and forgot about it, and then suddenly added it later which was a bit abrupt. Also, since the protagonist likes to show off, he should have taken on a younger brother a long time ago. He can't do everything by himself. Although he wants to use the heroine as his younger brother now, it still feels weird. It seemed to me that the protagonist was trying to create a strategizing character, but the cool thing was that it was always a little short of the mark (seeing the setting, I read it as a cool novel without thinking). There is also too much writing about the world of immortality, which is already in the past tense, and it is interspersed with the main plot. Sometimes I thought that it suddenly jumped to another book, and there was no need to recall too much. In fact, I found that I wrote a lot, but it did not contribute much to the main plot of the plot, and it could not reflect the direct impact of the past and present lives. You already have a golden finger, and the effect of past life experience has been greatly weakened. There is a slight overlap in the settings here. Or write that only the protagonist knows this information, and through the information gap, he is better than others in practice, and knows some peerless skills. Or, just abandon the setting of the previous life and just rely on the golden finger to take off. Now the memory killing feels like it is just to write about how awesome the protagonist was in the past. In other cartoons, the memory killing can also provide a variety of amplification moves and so on. I don't know if this is more fun, but I really didn't get it. Although there is a past life experience that slightly supplements the protagonist's personality, it still feels like there is too much written. Actually, when I first came in and read the first few chapters, I felt that the setting was quite interesting. It was about cultivating immortals and fighting zombies in the apocalypse, and the atmosphere was created quite well. However, a little later, there was no sense of apocalypse anymore, and it felt like a short story was about to end. Did the author rewrite and rewrite it? If he could continue to carry out the previous doomsday plot and have the feeling that it was written by a master, the plot at the beginning kept attracting me until I finished reading it. The more I went to the back, the less I felt like the previous one.

It's okay to watch, and my IQ is still online.

Does the world of spiritual practice seem to be fantasy? Let me take a look.

Has anyone tried Shennong?

The imagination is unconstrained and the words are beautiful! Come on!

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Immortal cultivators PK Doomsday, will there be a subsequent plot about the resurrection of the ancient inheritance of the earth?