Super Marvel: I Let the Moon Come

It's a good book, but it contains too many elements including Honkai Impact, Xingyue, Marvel, Super God, and Low Martial Arts. The scariest thing about this book is that it's a behind-the-scenes novel. There are too many elements and it seems tiring. The author is also quite strong. I can only say that he has a lot of imagination when he can write with so many elements.

Xingyue's combat power can't be compared to that of a super god, right? He's so awesome that it's useful on Earth, and his output can't be extended. When the alien uncle comes, all those fancy concepts are useless, and he still relies on the Holy Sword of the Stars to exert his strength.

The fight in the comment section is much more interesting than this book

Xingyue takes the lead against Super God and Marvel?

To be honest, the author's writing style is really not that good. The sentences are long and tiring. I need to add some punctuation marks. The analysis of blockbusters is not interesting. As for the protagonist, I can't see the meaning and presence of the protagonist's actions at all. Even the behind-the-scenes article is not written like this. Also, I'm really afraid that the author of Super God plus Marvel will not be able to grasp it well. Either he will use Marvel as a background board, like mentioning a line about group annihilation in the original work of Super God Academy, or he won't write about Marvel.

The monthly batch is in trouble, the classics only talk about concepts and not about efforts. Really just talking about concepts, Gensokyo Purple Mom's state is not invincible. There is also the one who blows the shiny chains. In the animation, Caspian can break free without any effort, but it will not be because he is truly invincible to divinity.

Talk to Tsukibuki about combat power. He talks to you about concepts, about power, about the Servant Universe and Universe Rin. Then let's talk about the Marvel Comics Universe. Yes, it's the one where the single body is not as good as a dog, the multiplicity is everywhere, and both the Almighty Universe and the Transcendent Realm are lying dead.

... Although I have already said it in the previous post, I will say it again here. The best thing for the author to do is to change it while there is no tail that cannot be removed (even if the tail cannot be removed, my suggestion is to change it). The best thing is to remove Marvel and only keep Super God and Xing Yue, or use Marvel, Xing Yue and Super God as the lower layer, and do not add other messy things, such as Honkai Impact, superpowers, etc., And then change the title of the book to reflect Super God Xing Yue and Marvel. Then try not to create original heroic spirits. Even if you want to create original heroic spirits, don't do it too early, and don't exceed the role of existing heroic spirits. This is the same as the principle of original characters, and don't make the protagonist double-standard like now. And based on the premise of removing Marvel and other messy things (or not removing Marvel), my suggestion is that it is better to say that the heroic spirits are from another world, such as the real earth and the moon earth, so that it can be brought back to life more easily, and the protagonist is the root. The reason is that the root dominates everything, that is, the root is no longer completely the background board. These are my suggestions. Whether the author wants to listen to it, whether he wants to do it, and whether he feels disdainful or finds it troublesome to revise the article is the author's business. My role is just a suggestion.

It's not my fault. Xingyue's combat power is severely polarized. Most of the heroic spirits are limited to the planet. Except for special species above the crown and favored by the root (the root is the source of Xingyue, not just the earth, including the entire universe) and those above the true god level, it is basically impossible to compare with the god-making civilization of super gods. Even if most of the super gods create are not true gods (conceptual gods)

Your Xue Rengui's writing has no characteristics of Xingyue at all. None of the Xingyue I've seen talks about the Noble Phantasm every day. They all have some use. At most, when they are at a disadvantage or almost kill the opponent, they complain that it's a pity that such and such a job agency did not come, and hang up their life experiences. They don't talk much. Usually people like Shining and the Emperor promote themselves. If the Holy Grail War has to hide information, but for Lostbelt and Singularity, I haven't seen anyone like Xue Rengui. Those who promote themselves are either funny people like Da Vinci or Shining. This kind of middle-class, warrior-type really no one indulges in the past. Joan of Arc will say this is my hometown. Ushiwakamaru from the Warcraft Front also said that there will be another child named Ushiwakamaru in countless years. Like Medea, she will be sad when she knows that she is a betrayal witch, but she I will not clarify that after coming, the wish is only to find true love, and the same is true for Diarmuid. He only came to be loyal. That is to say, King Arthur wanted to change the past in the early stage, but he let it go in the later stage. You, Xue Rengui, opened his mouth and kept silent as the emperor of martial arts. Before he opened his mouth and kept silent, it was really against the law.

In terms of concept, Type Moon cannot beat Marvel, and in terms of contribution, it is even more unworthy of supporting Marvel. Not to mention that various concepts in Type Moon are often outplayed by others. Whenever there are various concepts and opinions about the moon blowing up, it is recommended to bring out the fire of the right side, the father of the moon in the debate against the moon, and try to set up a double crush, the lifelong enemy of the moon concept blow. Even if we only talk about movies, if after the series is released, the world view of the movie and the combat power are directly bound to Spiral Ascension, although it is not too strong, there is still no problem in dismantling the multi-level roots.

Although the grammatical sentences made no sense, and there were so many typos, it made me just guess and confused. But the plot is still good, the writing is bold, everything is added into it, and you make the same mistakes that your predecessors made again. This makes me think that you are an international student coming to China to study.

It's not sewn properly, it's Xingyue, it's Marvel, it's broken, and I don't know if there's anything else behind it. Each original work has a huge number of background settings, and the worldviews are even contradictory. The author can't clearly describe the complex plot he wants to combine with all his efforts. People who haven't played the game will definitely be confused. I suggest you only cut out a small section of the setting if you want to write it, don't rely on it. Also, the novel only took me ten chapters to silence me. No, starting from the sixth chapter, the author let himself go, and the plot has already taken off. Even the following chapters are completely independent, and it is impossible to directly connect people to the context. Is it screening readers?

No matter how powerful Marvel's fighting power is, Xingyue is immune, because he is only strong in his plot. The same is true for Xingyue. If you think what I said is wrong, please don't criticize me.

You can't do this either. Xingyue can't fit in at all. Others are witnesses of history. Unless you bring up the Lost Belt and the Singularity, but even if you explain it, as long as they haven't seen it with your own eyes, others will still think that you are from an alien planet or were created by Karl.

Md. I am also a monthly critic, but why do I feel like the comments in the comment section are not getting to the point? It's okay to remove the funny factor. The author's linkage removal is reasonable. But I can bear to brag about Naiya, Yahweh and even Leif. Isn't it a little bit that you brag about a concept that is almost ineffective and the virtual emperor who was beaten to his knees by Chaldea, who was defeated by the topless battle...

Happy, as long as Xingyue is an alien creature, he is a descendant. If you use the plot of Avengers 1, I am afraid that the entire United States will be wiped out. If there are a lot of other super gods and Marvel aliens, your Xingyue Bu La Servant Universe will be a piece of cake for others.

After reading Chapter 30, I don't see that this protagonist has any status as a protagonist. Why do you want to write this kind of article because you like to allocate pen and ink to these supporting characters? Or do you want to write a group portrait?

For a suture novel like this, you must first deal with the relationship between world integration, including a general introduction to combat power settings, world background, historical context, etc. Take the issue of combat power that has been discussed in the comment area. I can give you a reasonable explanation. At least tell readers why two artifacts in these two worlds are at the same level.

The biggest problem in Super God is that the basic technology is unstable. If the aerospace level is a level 2 civilization, but when they come into contact with the dark plane, they go directly to level 4. The basic technology in the middle has not been improved at all. In the plot, we can see their overwhelming use of energy. The big clock is used once, and it will burn several suns. If the basic technology is improved to the corresponding level, the third generation of super warriors and even the third generation of gods can be mass-produced.

Is there anyone like me who hasn't read the book but only came to read the comments 😜 (I subscribed to a chapter specifically for posting)

Super God Academy is a dimension reduction attack on the other two. Super God has a plot about the Avengers, but Thor is only a second-generation god, maybe not yet. Xingyue's world view is mysterious, but the mysteries inside are all things that Super God technology can handle or even do better. In other words, for the Super God universe, so-called magic will be downgraded to magic, and so-called magic can be directly analyzed and countered.

Update it quickly. Could it be that he is a eunuch?

Okay, okay, the same old routine eunuch, ask for leave and then eunuch 😅

Let me give you a fair word based on the comments section. The normal ranking should be Marvel Comics Universe > Marvel Cinematic Universe > Xingyue including the Servant Universe and other background boards > Super God Universe > FGO main line > fsf, fsn, fz and other works The regular summoning of heroes is spirit. Limited by base and magic power, Jin Shining and Karna are already the highest combat power for regular summons. Their level is about the level of annihilation of a country in one blow. Even if you include the crown spirit base, the upper limit of servants is only the surface level. If you cannot summon giant spiders, Chaos, Universe Rin, etc., You will be carded by the spirit base. The highest destructive power of a super god is Rena's supernova explosion, but the activation conditions for this thing are too harsh, and it cannot be used on earth. The combat power is superior to the servants, but it cannot be crushed. The Marvel Cinematic Universe was originally as strong as you think. The first two together can compete with the mid-to-low-end combat power. The high-end combat power is like an observer who observes countless multiverses. Infinite Ultron that turns the multiverse into a cosmic soup with one blow. Ultron with infinite timelines in his hand. The entire worldview of Supergod and Xingyue is not enough.

I have a lot of ideas and my writing skills are not good enough. I am going to die of poison before I even read the paid chapter. What? Have you changed it? What did you change? I'm just curious about how this contract was signed.

Whirlpool God of Destruction: I heard that Xingyue came out to show off her fighting power again

Where is the author😰

When will we get to Super God?😭

Not to mention the plot, I still need to practice my writing and language. I feel that everyone has the same personality and no differences are shown.