American Nightmare

How do you expect to be able to get through in a place like the Demon Dao? Jin Dan Shao is said to be a ruthless person who kills people without blinking an eye. Your performance in the article is no different from a novice. I didn't restore the memory before. It's good to say that I did. But the b-type was eaten up and wiped clean in the Demon Dao. It's too poisonous. I ran away.

The protagonist is just like a little white rabbit. If it weren't for the plug-in given by the author, he would definitely not be able to reach the golden elixir stage and slip away.

After reading it, I found that there is actually no big technical problem with the article. But there are problems, and they are not small. To describe it, intuitively speaking, it is: the logical conception remains 12 years ago. In this way, most people who take the wrong path are forced to do so at first. However, once you have gone too far on the wrong path, you will never look back unless you are forced to do so by force. It's not whether I can, but I simply don't want to. Because wolves travel thousands of miles to eat meat, and sheep travel thousands of miles and still get meat. So, it seems very ridiculous that the protagonist is unwilling to practice evil arts at the beginning. Since the progress is fast, as long as you try, you will not stop. In the past life of cultivating immortals, I was forced to be able to explain it for the first time, but after traveling through it again and acknowledging that there is no righteous sect in the world... It is impossible to give up on my own initiative. It is estimated that most people will feel psychological pressure when killing someone for the first time. But then what? What about the thousandth time? I can also think of it with my feet: I don't feel anything. In the typical demonic world of cultivating immortals, how many people do you have to kill in order to practice the magic method? Difficult to estimate. This is not to say that you should kill people without thinking when you have no power, but when a reasonable demon encounters this kind of thing, the first thought is definitely not how to resolve the conflict, but how to kill the person who caused the conflict. After being blackmailed by a gangster, what I would do after thinking for 5 seconds would not be to continue opening the store, but to take the money to a Chinese gangster organization such as Hongmen. No way to find it for how many days? So when faced with police inaction, the first reaction should not be to leave, but to see if giving the police some money and paying the local police station instead can replace the unruly gangsters. There are many similar practices, but there must be a rule: there is a fundamental difference in the thinking logic of "good people" and "good citizens" in the absolute and universal senses. Good people choose to rely on superficial rules, but demonic monks have a natural distrust of superficial rules because of their own experience and knowledge. This is a habit that goes deep into their bones. If something can't be done, they will only think that there are still some conditions of practical interests that prevent it from being done. They will not think that it is illegal and unethical, so they can't do it. You will understand the explicit rules and use them, but you will never believe them for a second. The thinking of a good citizen is that I will not take action if I can, and I will not make enemies. Magical thinking is how can I do something so as not to bear the consequences of killing someone. This kind of difference is not written out, and the character setting does not match the content, which is very awkward. This kind of awkwardness is common in Internet articles more than ten years ago. Because at that time, there were many readers among junior high school students and few among other age groups. Based on the experience of people of that age, we cannot accept that the protagonist fundamentally despises the moral standards of mainstream propaganda. And now, there are people of all ages. So... It won't work anymore, because most readers now know: everyone has a devil in their heart. The only difference is whether you have the opportunity and ability to release this demon. Literature is derived from reality, and reality has rules. But everyone has a devil inside, this is also a reality. If not, then what are the military police doing? Right? !

The writing is very good and very real. It is worth giving a recommendation vote. I don't know who is taking advantage of you for writing so many negative comments. In short, I think the protagonist's every step is really realistic.

The protagonist became a golden elixir while lying on the bed in his previous life? You've got the golden elixir, but you haven't formed your own worldview yet?

Let's change the setting. The plot at the beginning is good with a new immigrant (college time traveler) who is forced to do nothing, but it is too wrong to place it on the reincarnated demon cultivator. If you just want the plot background of cultivating demons in the United States, there is no need to reincarnate. Just match it with a golden finger for the skills. Even if you retro-style the entire ancestral secret book, or a jade pendant opened with blood, it is more reasonable than reincarnation. The boss will never be passive like this. Once he understands the situation, he should arrange countermeasures immediately. How can we wait until the gangster comes to beat someone for the second time? In reality, many Chinese-American shopkeepers are equipped with guns to fight against robbers.

The introduction was okay, but after entering, I discovered that the introduction to this novel is for reference only.

The so-called inner demons are mainly caused by the person concerned. You feel guilty for killing someone, so you have inner demons. On the other hand, if you have been taught since childhood that killing people is not wrong, you can kill with peace of mind, and you still have inner demons?

He said he wanted to seek revenge from John, but it was all gone. I don't know where I went to seek revenge from Lao Lao. Does the author suffer from amnesia?

Basically, after reading it, I would like to give you a vote as a courtesy.

It looks pretty good, come on.

Can you please stop naming the United States the United States? Change the name of the United States, otherwise it will be 404