
I Have Just Become the Star Casting Dragon King, and Tang San Wants Me to Be the Spirit Ring?
刚成铸星龙王,唐三要我当魂环?
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 272k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The introduction is different from the content. When the protagonist meets Tang San, he is still just a hundred-year-old spirit beast, but it is almost a thousand years old. At that time, Tang San also wanted the protagonist to make a spirit ring. And looking at this progress, I really don't know how to become a complete body. You are turning the entire Douluo Star into stardust, and it is impossible to turn it into a complete body.
Why should we focus on game skills? Can't you just write it according to the setting of the background story? It would be too low to think of the Dragon King's abilities as four skills.
Studio text, the other one is Becoming the Dragon King Ruotuo
..... The Dragon King has no name. Aurelion Thor is the name given to the Dragon King by those mortals who imprisoned him with his crown. In other words, it is a contemptuous name.
How should I put it, like studio writing
The model of the Dragon King in the game feels weird. It looks very handsome in CG. But when I look at the back of the body in the game, it looks like a lizard with uncoordinated limbs.
The writing is quite good, but it's a bit tiring to read You don't need to add so much "self" in it. If you add too much "self", it will be difficult for readers to distinguish. Later, when writing big scenes, it will be even more difficult to distinguish.
I can't figure it out. If he was a real person, Yitian or the Silver Dragon King should have noticed it, right? You didn't even say this, it feels too fake.