Bleach: Beyond the Two Worlds

It's currently non-toxic. I've read a lot of Death fanfics, but there's nothing that's not toxic. This one is pretty good. Come on, author.

By the way, does the author have a picture of what the protagonist's Zanpakutō looks like? If there is, even the ugly ones will have higher interaction volume.

One point that cannot be avoided when writing about the God of Death is the removal and naming of the monk. Aizen is easy to say, he rarely kills people. Don't be afraid if you have haha, the blur can be solved, or you can ask Pu Yuan to research medicine. Only the monk...

I'm very curious about how the protagonist will deal with interpersonal relationships in the future. After all, the protagonist is too close to Aizen, but he is also the adopted brother of the Shiba family. The Kyon Jubana who killed Haiyan, and the subsequent Masked Army can be said to have been arranged by Aizen. Aizen is a character that Shinigami fans can never avoid. If you control it well, you will be looking forward to it. I hope it will not fall apart later.

Civilization: Beyond Two Realms🤓

Although the life span of the God of Death is very long, his growth is very slow. Is the timeline too far behind? Unless you are a loser like Ichigo, it is impossible to reach captain-level power in a short time. Even if you have amazing talent, it will take hundreds of years.

If you like this kind of getting stronger through practice, it is best for the protagonist to become a master and a pioneer in the practice system. After the swordsmanship and ghost path reach their peak, they can integrate the secrets of ghost path and achieve the effects of those attribute sword techniques in martial arts novels. Reiatsu is equal to internal strength. For example, in Tai Chi Sword, everyone else in my field is slower.

I will work hard to write the first book, and I will do my best to code it. I hope you can give me more opinions, thank you! Never fail, eunuch, otherwise you will be single for the rest of your life! (￣▽￣)~Oh yeah~

After reading it, I feel that the plot arrangement is stable. It is successful if it is not poisonous these days. However, the writing is very lacking and a bit dry. My personal suggestion is to use more embellishments and character descriptions. Some scenes can be roughly drawn in the mind and then written out. For battles, add more passion and dialogue, and intersperse one or two sentences in the middle to form separate paragraphs to increase the reader's interest.

I started watching Death: Wow, that's awesome. After watching the Thousand-Year Blood War: The God of Death is so weak, his ultimate move was snatched away by all kinds of people, and after watching the Thousand-Year Blood War in Season 2: Is the Soul King's Palace Really the God of Death? Not one of the weapons is a knife, and the only one is a dick.