People in Tokyo Create Extraordinary Things

The protagonist's existence is completely that of a tool man, and after that, his living environment becomes messy. Others behind the scenes either have hostile goals or become gods to guide and ensure the peace around him. The male protagonist has made the living environment of ordinary people very bad, and he also encounters ghosts. You say you don't care about the people around you at all, but the male protagonist is still in school, and apart from his abilities, the male protagonist has no other benefits in reality. Even if he is not troubled by money, he always has the life he wants to live.

My suggestion is: readers who like to watch behind-the-scenes scenes should come to see the group portraits, not the protagonists. Those who want to read the protagonist's story will not look at the behind-the-scenes story to ask for trouble. Readers who can insist on reading without a protagonist basically recognize this writing method. So the author please stick to this writing style of group portraits without protagonists. I will always support this style. Not all readers like to read protagonist articles, but some like to read group portrait articles. Since you, the author, have chosen to follow this path instead of the mainstream protagonist articles, please stick to it. Fans of behind-the-scenes group portrait articles will support you. The most important thing is to avoid giving up halfway. Now that you have chosen your own path according to your own heart, let's go on. It is necessary to attract a group of readers to come in, and then turn it into a protagonist article, which is destined to displease both parties and criticize you. Those readers who ask the author to add the role of the protagonist actually like the protagonist's article. What they want to see is the ideological transformation similar to the mysterious Tarot Club. You have your own way, don't be led astray. Being firm in your own thoughts is more important than anything else. It is really difficult to find an author these days who sincerely wants to write behind-the-scenes group portraits that he likes to read and share with many colleagues. I really hope that the author can gain economic value while not forgetting his original intention. This path has an audience and a future. I sincerely hope that the author will not forget his original intention and will succeed to the end. PS: The audience for the main character who wants to read the ideological transformation is unlikely to last more than 20 chapters, so as an author, you don't have to worry about them leaving, because they are not your audience in the first place. Know who you are writing to. You wrote this book for yourself and for the many group audience members to read, so you don't need to care about the opinions of non-group audience members. It is important to know yourself. (For example, I am a ten-year reader who used to like to read protagonist novels, but later got bored and started to read group portrait novels. I think back then, the first online novel I read was Shura God of War. Now there are animations, even though I don't read Chinese comics.) There is no need to be taboo about filtering readers. It is impossible to have something that everyone likes. Even the most extreme protagonist novels such as mystery have a lot of people abandoning them for various reasons, so you don't have to worry about it. You have to look at the criticism, but you have to know clearly what you are criticizing and whether you need to change it. The audience for the protagonist novel that criticized you for not having a leading role has long since left, so why should you care about their opinions? While accepting criticism from others, don't forget your own thoughts and original intentions. Only good criticism and suggestions can help you move further on the road to your original intentions.

After reading it, ask your questions. First of all, being behind the scenes of the group portrait does not mean that the protagonist has no role. When reading novels, the protagonist is assumed to be the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist does not show up at all and does almost nothing except throwing out his abilities, even if there is some psychological description. Secondly, behind-the-scenes flow, the sense of satisfaction comes from the protagonist's sense of control behind the scenes, omnipotent yet mysterious. The protagonist, on the other hand, has no control over the thrown abilities. He can neither control nor take them back. If he could not get the corresponding abilities by himself, it would be like Santa Claus giving out benefits. By the way, the protagonist acquires abilities but sees no use at all. Even if you describe a process in which the protagonist acquires abilities and experiments with abilities, this is the result. One of the cool points of the novel is the protagonist's gains. Finally, there is a lack of purpose. What is the protagonist's purpose? Is it to obtain various abilities? He never uses it himself. Or is it just to mess up little Japan? But things like ghosts will affect ordinary people on a large scale. What should the protagonist do if he encounters them? It is easy to expose his abilities. In general, the group portrait is well written, but the protagonist's sense of presence is too low, the sense of excitement is not enough, and the purpose is not strong. And as the scope of superpowers becomes wider and wider, the protagonist will sooner or later encounter life-threatening situations without revealing his abilities. It is too unreliable to just hide as an ordinary person.

You don't have a main plot. You don't want to become a god or revive your spiritual energy, and you are not a fun person. You really don't care at all. Others have their own purposes for writing behind-the-scenes stories like this. You don't have anything. You just write whatever comes to mind. Have you figured out an outline of the story yourself?

When did the behind-the-scenes flow become related to the group portraits again? Does the guy in the comment section who forcibly confuse the group portraits with the behind-the-scenes scenes really understand the behind-the-scenes scene?

There should be less emotional output behind the scenes. Insulting pronouns seem to affect the senses 😥

Listening to people's advice, there is no one behind the scenes who doesn't have a sense of immersion.

Listen to others' advice and eat enough The author is a newbie and has many shortcomings. Not only you know it, but I know it too. The author has also studied hard. I will read the comments and make corrections wherever I can. Thank you for your support.

Isn't the highlight of "On My Own" about the extraordinary protagonist changing the world? You, the protagonist, have zero role and no sense of involvement. The fighting power of the group of statues is also weird. People have to learn the breathing method to barely deal with ghosts. You, the Gossamer Ghost King, have learned the breathing method.

① The first three golden chapters start with the supporting characters. The supporting characters are still unlikable. Those who don't know better think that the supporting characters are the protagonists. ②The protagonist's golden finger is to give abilities and then synchronize them. After giving abilities, he ignores them. When he sees this, he quits. Reading the comments, they say that the protagonist is just a kid who throws away money. Where is the operation behind the scenes? You can't directly or indirectly manipulate the other party secretly. What's behind the scenes? You can't manipulate the situation to make the world change according to your will. You dare to say behind the scenes. Let's change the label to a group portrait.

Coordinates Chapter 34, four superpowers appear. One is Feng Aotian, the other is a debt-ridden social beast, one is a chuunibyou, and the other is a sacred tree that has just gained intelligence. The author seems to want to strengthen Feng Aotian's combat effectiveness and become a villain BOSS-like character. But the focus is on how much she likes women. The social animal is the king of ghosts. The author seems to want to portray that he loves family and has deep love between husband and wife. The result turned out to be "I would rather let my wife die, cut off half of my body, and hide in the mountains to dig wild vegetables, than join in with you bunch of bastards."🤔 The portrayal of chuunibyou is not problematic, but once it is related to the school beauty, it becomes extremely unnatural. Call him courageous because he didn't dare to say anything about what he did. Call him timid because he was capable of kidnapping people. In general, every character has no highlights. It's not like a character in a group drama, just a passerby who writes too much.

After reading the beginning, I think it's okay. The only problem is that the Japanese police are too efficient. Salary thieves are not made in a day. There is also a supernatural department. The high-level quarrels lasted for at least several months. How could it be formed in a moment? You say it is more reasonable for the Yakuza or Capital Black Gloves to appear.

The protagonist of this book has zero sense of existence. If it were for the sake of strength, I would understand it. However, apart from showing that he is in love with his teacher, the protagonist of this book is completely blank. Even if you skip the main characters and look at the so-called group portraits, they are all too ordinary, with the kind of bastard faces that swell when they gain power. Putting them in the spotlight makes them look ugly, making people wonder why this person hasn't died yet. There is also the issue of combat power. A user with the Devil's Thread Fruit ability cannot control more than a dozen policemen. He was injured by the Demon King's ability user in Demon Slayer, and was threatened by a possessor of the Thunder Breath. The Ghost King killed hundreds of policemen as soon as he gained the ability. The Thunder Breath hacked the Ghost King half to death with an ordinary knife. I am convinced by this author. There is a reason why he can fight like this.

Awesome, I read chapter 16 and the protagonist only appeared once. The rest were all about the power of the godswood.

This book is already perfect for novice writers No need to say more, rush!

It's a rare behind-the-scenes novel that is logically self-consistent. Apart from the ups and downs of the characters, the writing is pretty good.

In a sentence The police are all beautiful policewomen, I don't quite understand them

This way of writing is put in online articles. Unless the old author brings his own fans, he will become a eunuch in a short time.

To be honest, there is no difference between you as the protagonist and the lottery system. It is inexplicable. The purpose of the protagonist is not explained. The development of the story is not connected by the protagonist. What kind of behind-the-scenes flow you have, you might as well write it as a god flow and make this world into a small world. The protagonist puts in comic super powers. In this way, you can have a group portrait without writing a protagonist.

This type of book highlights that the first person to get the ability will become a black man, and the second person to get the ability will be a woman, and then the chronicle will begin 🤭

Does the author have any misunderstandings about solipsism and group portraits?

If the main character shows his face just to disgust people, he might as well not show it

Is the author confused about what is a group portrait and what is behind the scenes? If you can't tell, you can read the famous old eunuch's book "No Knife on a Rainy Night" and see how others write about behind the scenes. The protagonist behind the scenes is the only supreme and extraordinary source. All extraordinary life, death and power are under the absolute control of the protagonist. Manipulate the black and white chess pieces and the chess players, let them compete with each other and become the tools for the protagonist to step onto the throne. You, the protagonist, can't even control your own extraordinary power. At best, it is a group portrait.

The first three chapters were written about supporting characters, which made me think the protagonist was an indigenous person.

I feel that the author has made the protagonist so useless. His plot only has heat and no interaction with the characters. For example, if you post a cheat, you should at least write down when and why you posted it and the reasons for choosing this person. None of these make the characters very abrupt. For example, the Breath of Thunder and the Jade of Four Souls have no plot at all. No, I keep having a seizure, my extraordinary ability is suddenly exposed, and I feel that life is extraordinary everywhere. Others are giving golden fingers to the people at the center of the incident. You are the one with the golden finger and you go to the center of the incident inexplicably. A fake witch comes home and finds that God is real, and giving a god to the fake witch are completely different things.

π_πI don't recommend reading this novel. It's especially for a novice. The running account is the same as a student's composition level. Especially after it was put on the shelves, it was very bad.

The salted fish turned over. I'm going to switch sides to bask in the sun.

All evil people. . . It was too uncomfortable to watch. . . Especially the ogre in Demon Slayer, who thought he would die after the first major event, but found out that he was not dead yet.

Come on

The writing is messy, just writing whatever comes to mind.