Martial Arts Longevity: Set a Goal and Watch It Come True

The creativity of the book is quite good, but the author is not very good at writing and has some witty plots. The first currency system is confusing (not many authors can write it well), but the most important thing is the city entry fee of 100 Wen. Speechless😒. Can you imagine that providers of daily necessities such as firewood collectors, evening incense collectors, farmers selling rice, etc. Have to be charged 100 Wen every time they provide materials or services. Selling firewood once is not much more than the city entrance fee (the protagonist's second uncle only earns 100 Wen a month to work as a laborer). In the end, these necessities were unable to enter the city, and the city collapsed long ago. The second one is that Chen Sanye forced the protagonist to hunt tigers and leopards. Another way to put this plot is that a gangster leader in a village knew that Wu Song had the ability to hunt tigers, and coerced Wu Song into hunting a tiger for him. If Wu Song didn't go, he captured Wu Dalang and Pan Jinlian forced Wu Song to hunt tigers. If Wu Song agreed to hunt tigers and came back with the tigers, the gangster leader was not prepared to pay the promised tiger hunting money, and would kill Wu Song and take away all Wu Song's family property (at that time, Mr. Chen didn't know whether the protagonist could hunt tigers). Ridiculous. People can kill tigers, but they can't kill you.

In order to post, I subscribed to a chapter. I couldn't bear to read Chapter 16, but I was able to read it because this golden finger attracted me.       ,,,,,! Ask, ask hard, write down all your guesses, until you can't think of anything to ask. Do you understand goal splitting? With the goal, it is divided into three steps, five steps, and ten steps, plus the word safety. As a result, the author played like this? Another product whose golden finger is too wide to grasp! There are a lot of fish problems and bugs in the river. There is food in the river. In years of famine, people are afraid of starving to death, so how can they let it go? If there is something weird, how many people will ignore it? Besides, the width of the river is not very long, so people only try to drain the river water to get food. Raise your hands if you haven't heard of the saying that you can live off the mountain and live on the water.       ,,,,? Fast forward three months and you're laughing at me. The development time of the first three months has been briefly mentioned, and the protagonist only needs a bow and arrow to get started? This golden finger has been wronged.

The golden finger is too wide open and cannot be controlled at all. For example, the protagonist wants to make money by hunting and enter the city. In fact, after spending 100 yuan to enter the city, isn't it easy to make money by entering a gambling house? Just use cheats to get safe money. Some people even say that those who pick up money are those who pick up money. This golden finger has no limit on the number of times it can be used. It means omniscience, and omniscience means omnipotence. Every safe one-two punch can snowball and complete an exponential explosion.

Goldfinger's abilities are limited, so don't make it a concept level, and don't be so tough on it, okay? Taking the example of killing tigers and wild boars, it is obvious that the level is deliberately suppressed. When the normal strength is not enough, shouldn't this golden finger guide the protagonist to set up traps? Bite the bullet and let the protagonist kill himself? There is also a concept-level cheat to make money. Are you telling me that the only way to make money is to exchange wild boars for money? Normal people don't take this path. Although this book looks okay, don't add a conceptual level of disgusting people. Ordinary gold fingers are ordinary gold fingers. You must add a prefix.

Well, maybe I don't fit the author's thinking. First of all, since the protagonist knows that he has traveled through time (the process of reviving a dead body), modern people must know that there are unclean things in the river. Then Goldfinger has shown that he can become a god, which means that there must be a cultivation civilization in this world (in the end, the protagonist has no idea of ​​becoming an immortal except for thinking about becoming a god at the beginning and then forgot about it). Of course, I understand that the author wants to write more and directly let the protagonist want to practice martial arts and not become an immortal. I understand.

I thought it was set to become a god, but I became a god directly. I felt lonely after watching it.

The protagonist's master, a peerless genius, was deposed due to internal fighting. The human race was raised and killed by demons as pigs. The protagonist was besieged and killed by dozens of high-level people in the sect. After surviving for several months, he was besieged and killed by dozens of the same realms of the strongest sect. The protagonist's master was also besieged and killed. The protagonist's father and brother were besieged and killed by demons. From this, we can conclude that this world is not suitable for geniuses and righteousness, and there is serious internal fighting. I hope those who travel through it will be careful.

This setting is completely suitable for matryoshka dolls. How to become a god? He was struck by lightning for three days. How to withstand lightning strikes for three days? What a thunder-resistant fruit. Then how to get the fruit safely? Wait, wait. Or simply set up a one-step process to learn how to become a god safely and risk-free.

I watched it and thought it was pretty good at first, but as I watched it I always felt like something was wrong. Then I just went to work for a while and came back to watch it and finally found the problem. It was too compact. All kinds of problems appeared when the protagonist came, forcing the protagonist to move forward. It was okay if I kept watching, but once I stopped and started watching again, I couldn't watch it.

There are too many bugs in the world background. . The biggest thing is that demonic chaos happens too frequently, once in more than a hundred years, every thirty years, and each time the population is only a few hundred million. It is impossible to develop so many people in more than a hundred years, and there are still so many small cities. The most ridiculous thing is that except for the three main cities, other cities even I don't know about the demonic chaos, and people in other cities just created it out of thin air. People in big cities know that there has been demonic chaos for more than a hundred years. How stupid do you have to be to let people who have survived the demonic chaos go to small towns to spread their branches? And they don't know anything for more than a hundred years. How did their ancestors come here?