Wizard: Invasion of Indigenous Civilizations Starting from Apprenticeship

However, I remember that the wizarding world is inherently intrusive. It would take almost a wizard to participate in the invasion. The world has everything from weak to strong. The apprenticeship period is about the same as a cannon fodder monster under a wizard during a regular invasion. Actually... It's nothing special at all. Even if word spreads, other wizards will probably not think that the protagonist has any cheats, but will come directly to force the protagonist to hand over the lower world.

The wizard novel is just like the previous knight and mage novels. The name mage has become a wizard. The settings are not as complete as the previous mage novels, and there are various contradictions.

Is Apprentice Invasion a traditional wizard? Traditionally speaking, the apprentice is so weak and is seeking death.

The plot arrangement is stiff, like a pure-blood society. The plot is slow and unreasonable, and the war between the barbarians and the kingdom in the Crystal World is not visible. (You say you have a mask that can change your appearance, so that's fine, but can you just imitate his knowledge and habits? Etc.) The most important thing is that it is too slow, and there is also a tumor wolf that is always dumped. There is no need to write this in detail, just write roughly that you got some materials from the Crystal World and can sell them on the black market. Also, the turning point is very abrupt. For your previous foreshadowing, the mentor appreciates the protagonist, so you can honestly write about the protagonist being accepted as a disciple, and then write a few random chapters. After the protagonist understands the basic knowledge and is on the right path, you can then write the plot of the battle. Everything else is fine, but I think you made it too hard. I suggest you check out Lord of Ashes next door and his last book, Knight's Journey. Learn a little bit about the world view and plot arrangement. If you insist on continuing, go away or start from a few books from a few years ago. You can't write anything better. In the past few years, Qidian has published many wizard-related books, but they are basically all G-rated. Not to mention that basically more than 99% of the people who clicked in to read your book have read the old books like Journey of the Witcher from a few years ago. Basically, we have certain expectations and habits. In recent years, only Lord of Ashes has written very good books of this kind. Anyone who has read those books can basically read them. The only shortcoming is that they are a little weak, but the author has more copies than the text. The market for wizard novels has always been there, but recently there hasn't been much to read. Currently, the starting point for wizards is Notes of the Death Witcher, which is okay, but it's a wizard and weird. Currently, everyone is chasing Xianxia, ​​but I still click on books about wizards when I see them. Except for being a little stiff, you're doing okay. I can read it, but if it is pure garbage, I won't comment, and I will just remove it.

I think the best thing about the Witcher genre is The Witcher Journey. Although The Witcher World is the pioneering work of the genre, get out of here. This guy has always had the problem of stretching his hips in the later stages. 😡😡

This kind of book has to be fun to read, otherwise no one will read it. The best innate talent is level 4. It's not interesting at all. No reader likes to watch you grind it out slowly.

It's depressing enough to not read a few heroines, or women, but to read a novel is too pretentious.

It feels like the research projects in it are just mentioned out of thin air. There is nothing substantive. It is too empty. It feels like I have to explain something suddenly. When I watched The Warlock before, Leylin's research process was very interesting. I personally suggest that it be optimized appropriately, otherwise it will be like reading on the same page.

Excuse me, is this waste material flow again? ? ?

There are too few wizarding articles now, I hope to write something new

The Wizard's Journey, a masterpiece of wizard literature, a rare setting that does not pay attention to talent.

The writing is okay, but the beginning is cliche.

Food and grass are all there, and there are no obvious poisonous points. It just doesn't feel good to mention them. I don't know why.

Chapter 6 of yours, such a familiar taste and familiar formula

Anthony🙂What is your relationship with that flatland peeping tom?

Yours is by far the most wizarding novel I have read that has the feeling of a wizarding journey. Come on, it has great potential.

The more I look at it, the more I feel guilty. In every sense. This place is so barren. Take some energy and go.

The pace is a bit slower, I hope it doesn't involve eunuchs!

The subject matter attracts me, yes, come on

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It feels like it's still in the early stages of the original expansion, and I don't even know if there are level 6 wizards. The spread of knowledge is still in the indigenous stage. The words of the protagonist. . I feel [personally, whatever you say, you are right] has gone astray. There are a few pitfalls in the current operation, and I dug them myself.

What standards do you use for wizard writing? I read a lot of them and thought they were Witcher 3 fanfics.