Love Apartment: the Heir of All Beasts

The iPartment-style inner monologue seems a bit much in the first few chapters. Mainly the inner monologue plus the description of psychological actions will appear very deliberate. For example, the Zhanbo Wanyu date I have seen here can be designed so that the protagonist directly complains to Yifei when Yifei is guiding Zhanbo, and not use inner monologues too frequently. Of course, I have never written a book, nor have I read a few good books. Everything is based on the author's ideas.

The protagonist is like a camera and occasionally pops up to say a line or two, which is basically copied from the original work.

It is basically written according to the original play, and the protagonist is the same as him 🤔

It's still awesome, I didn't write so much about it before it was put on the shelves.

Take down the Great Sage Zhuge😍😍

I hope the heroine is Wanyu Yumo Nuolan

I didn't write it randomly, it's really this setting

The protagonist plays a role all the time, and occasionally has an inner drama. The plot is directly copied from the TV series╮（＿）╭It's better to watch TV directly.

If it is exactly the same as the original work, it will greatly affect the perception. My personal opinion

The protagonist is just soy sauce, it's the same with or without him

After watching it for a while, I didn't really want to watch it anymore. I felt like the main character was just a backdrop, and there were so many inner dramas. It was like a barrage on TV, and the plot was basically copied.

Thank you to the author for your selfless contribution. I can't even vote for you on a monthly basis. I can only wish the author good health, all the best, all your wishes come true, and lots of money.

The protagonist has almost no sense of existence 😄

It's a bit boring, it's better to just watch the TV series

Let's not talk about anything else. Let's sort out the number of words. My eyes hurt after reading a few chapters. Try to separate them as much as possible.

I don't know what the main character is for? I feel like a bystander, which is quite boring.